高中英语 module 3 literature section ⅴ writing-刻画人物形象教学案 外研版选修7

Module 3 Literature Section Writing-刻画人物形象刻画人物形象的文章，属于记叙文范畴，可描写人的生平、简介、性格及某些方面的特点。在写这类文章时，通常以事件为载体，通过一件或几件事的描述来突出中心以及所描写人物的某种品质。一、基本结构这类文章的常见结构为：“总分总”结构，即总体介绍人物，之后再去叙述事件，最后对所描写的人物进行总结和概括。二、增分佳句1Sb.is considered to be one of the greatest . 2Wellknown as . , he . 3Born in a poor family, he had to . 4When he was a small boy, he showed a great interest in . 5Thanks to the help of . , he was able to continue his education.6Between . and . , he studied at . 7From . to . , he first worked as . , and then he became . 8His achievements are worthy of praise.题目要求假设你的名字是王珊，你要向中学生杂志社推荐你的好朋友李莉来担任学生记者，以下是她的基本情况，请参照以下情况写一篇英语文章来描写李莉：1性格特点：阳光，向上；爱好广泛，擅长文学，同时对历史有着浓厚的兴趣；爱好交友，在校学生会担任学生干部。2年龄：16岁。注意：词数100左右；可适当增加细节。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为一篇记叙文；2确定人称：本文主要人称为第一、三人称；3确定时态： 主要使用一般现在时。二、构思第一步：点明写信的目的。第二步：对李莉的情况进行介绍。第三步：期望得到答复。第二步：核心词汇想周全1recommend推荐2diligent勤奋的3admiration钦佩4be_regarded_as被认为是5in_the_meanwhile与此同时6make_friends交朋友第三步：由词扩句雏形现1我给你写这封信推荐我的好朋友李莉来担任你们杂志的学生记者。I write this letter to you. I want to recommend_my_best_friend_Li_Li_to_be a student reporter of your magazine.2作为一个16岁的阳光女孩，李莉在学校很勤奋刻苦。As a 16yearold sunshine girl, Li Li is_very_diligent_and_hardworking_in_school. 3她有许多爱好，这使我们同学们都很钦佩她。She has many hobbies and it has_earned_great_admiration_from us students.4文学是她的最爱，她的作文总是被认为是典范。Literature is her favorite, and her compositions are_always_regarded_as_model_ones.5作为我校学生会的一员，她真的很喜欢交朋友。As a member of Students Union in our school, she_really_loves_making_friends.6就我而言，她可以结交更多的朋友，并通过加入文学俱乐部来提高自己。On my part, she can make more friends and improve_herself_by joining the literature club.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用不定式作目的状语改写句1I_write_this_letter_to_you_to_recommend_my_best_friend_Li_Li_to_be_a_student_reporter_of_your_magazine.2用which 引导的非限制性定语从句改写句3She_has_many_hobbies,_which_has_earned_great_admiration_from_us_students.3用现在分词(短语)作状语改写句5 Being_a_member_of_Students_Union_in_our_school,_she_really_loves_making_friends.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear_Editor，I_write_this_letter_to_you_to_recommend_my_best_friend_Li_Li_to_be_a_student_reporter_of_your_magazine.As_a_16yearold_sunshine_girl,_Li_Li_is_very_diligent_and_hardworking_in_school,_and_besides,_she_has_many_hobbies,_which_has_earned_great_admiration_from_us_classmates.Literature_is_her_favorite,_and_her_compositions_are_always_regarded_as_model_ones.In_the_meanwhile,_she_is_very_interested_in_history.Being_a_member_of_Students_Union_in_our_school,_she_really_loves_making_friends.On_my_part,_she_can_make_more_friends_and_improve_herself_by_joining_the_lite