高中英语 module 4 music born in america section ⅴ writing-关于学习习惯的文章教学案 外研版选修7

Module 4 Music Born in America Section Writing-关于学习习惯的文章本模块写作要求写一篇有关学习习惯方面的文章。这样的文章属于议论性文章。一、写作要领首先，确定写作要点：学习习惯；然后，确定文章主体时态和人称；最后，确定文章的结构层次、语言的斟酌、推敲，论据、论证要明确有力，原则上从正反两方面论述；发表自己的意见。注意句型、特殊结构或高级词汇及其短语的使用，正确运用逻辑词语。二、增分佳句There are different opinions among people as to . Some people suggest that . On the contrary, there are some people in favor of . At the same time, they say .It makes us fall into the habit of . It is harmful for us to form the habit of . . can help us set up our aim . As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.I think that . 题目要求假如你是某中学学生李华。现在很多同学有让家长陪读的习惯，你班组织同学们就此事展开讨论。请你根据下表所列情况给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论的情况。70%的同学认为30%的同学认为1.父母不应该陪读2.父母陪读让我们养成依赖的习惯，不利于我们将来自控能力的培养，更不利于我们培养良好的学习习惯3.父母陪读影响了他们的工作、学习和休息1.父母应该陪读2.父母陪读能使我们腾出更多的时间专心学习，使我们身体更健康3.父母陪读能帮助我们确立学习目标，督促我们完成学习任务，鼓励我们独立解决困难，培养我们良好的学习习惯注意：1.词数100左右；2格式和首段已给出，但不计入总词数。Dear editor，Im writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether our parents should accompany us studying at school._ _Yours truly，Li Hua第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题 1确定体裁：本文为一篇议论文；2确定人称：主要人称为第一、三人称；3确定时态：主要使用一般现在时。二、构思第一步：点出给报社写信的目的介绍父母是否应该陪我们一起上学的讨论。第二步：对否定看法进行介绍。第三步：对肯定看法进行介绍。第二步：核心词汇想周全1dependence依赖2urge督促3form/fall_into_the_habit_of养成的习惯 4take_advantage_of利用5on_the_other_hand另一方面第三步：由词扩句雏形现1我们大多数人认为父母不应该陪读。陪读使我们陷入依赖的习惯。我们不能养成好的学习习惯。Most of us think our parents should not accompany us studying at school.It makes_us_fall_into the habit of dependence.We wont form_the_good_habit_of studying.2它对我们养成自我控制的习惯是有害的。It is_harmful_for us.It cant make us form the habit of controlling_ourselves.3然而大约30%的同学认为有必要陪我们一起上学。While about 30% of my classmates think_it_necessary_to_accompany_us_studying at school.4陪读可以让我们利用更多的时间可以专心于学习。Accompanying us studying at school can let_us_take_advantage_of_more_time.We can be_devoted_to our studies.5另一方面，我们的父母可以帮助我们建立我们的目标，督促我们完成我们的任务，鼓励我们克服困难，让我们养成良好的学习习惯。On_the_other_hand,_our parents can help us set up our aim, urge_us_to_finish our task, encourage us to overcome difficulties and get us into the good habit of studying.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用含since原因状语和so that 结果状语改写句1Most of us think our parents should not accompany us studying at school since_it_makes_us_fall_into_the_habit_of_dependence,_so_that_we_wont_form_the_good_habit_of_studying.2用it 作形式主语改写句2It is harmful for us to form the habit of controlling ourselves.3用to do 不定式作目的状语改写句4Accompanying_us_studying_at_school_can_let_us_take_advantage_of_more_time_to_be_devoted_to_our_studies.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear editor，Im writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether our parents should accompany us studying at school.We havent reached consensus on this matter.Most of us think our parents should not accompany us studying at school since it makes us fall into the habit of dependence, so that we wont form the good habit of studying.Whats more, it is harmful for us to form the habit of controlling ourselves.At the same time it affects our parents work and rest.While about 30% of my classmates think it necessary to accompany us studying at school.Accompanying us studying at school can let us take advantage of more time to be devoted to our studies.Besides, we shall be healthier for their cooking.On the other hand, our parents can help us set up our aim, urge us to finish our task, enco