人物简介写作专题.ppt

Teaching Aims: 1. master some words of describing a person. 2. Learn to describe a persons background , appearance, character , education ,big events in his or her life and evaluation got from others. Guess Born in Fucheng Town in 1993, he is a boy with a pair of glasses . He is very active in class and is ready to help classmates whenever they have problems. Not only is he interested in all the subjects but also he works hard at them. As a result, he made rapid progress and won first prize in the monthly examination in September. He has set a good example to us, so we should learn from him. Who is he? 介绍人物的内容： 出生背景与外貌特点 Born in Fucheng Town in 1993, he is a boy with a pair of glasses . 性格特点 He is very active in class and is ready to help classmates whenever they have problems. Not only is he interested in English but also he works hard at it. 事迹 As a result, he made rapid progress and won first prize in the monthly examination in September. 获得的评价 He has set a good example to us, so we should learn from him. 出生背景 Allan Stewart, of Australian nationality, was born on March 7, 1915. 教育情况 He got his first degree in 1936 and then his second degree of Doctor of Medicine. He believed that one is never too old to challenge oneself. 事 迹 Therefore, in his eighties, he decided to study law, and in 2006 he set a world record for becoming the oldest person to get a masters degree. 获得的评价 Because he was so good at arranging his study time, he got praise from his teacher, and in 2012 he managed to get his fourth degree by network learning. 2012年广东高考基础写作 一、写作内容 1. age, sex, birth-place, background (概况) 2. appearance, character (外表、性格) 3. education (教育背景) 4. big events in his or her life (in order of time) (经历、生平) 5. evaluation (评价) 1. age, sex, birth-place, background (概 况) was born in (地点）on February 12th, 1987 be born in a poor/rich family the son of a poor family a eighteen-year-old boy as a boy of 18, at the age of 18 during his childhood in ones fifties Discussion: what words can we use to describe a person s appearance? Surf the Internet to find your answers. 百度搜索 /view/ee0a4f3667ec10 2de2bd895c.html Write them down as much as possible. 2. appearance： tall, short，fat, thin ，strong， healthy good-looking 长的好看的 ，funning-looking外表滑稽的 ugly-looking丑陋的， ordinary-looking外貌平平的， handsome相貌英俊的， beautiful , pretty漂亮的 cute漂亮的,娇小可爱的 short/near-sighted 近视的， charming有魅力的 , slim 苗条 with a big nose, with a round face , 1.80 meters tall, etc. What words can we use to describe a person s character? Surf the Internet to find your answers. 百度搜索 /view/2f9d9cf09e314 332396893f6.html. 3.character kind , kind-hearted好心的， warm-hearted 热心的， absent-minded 心不在焉的，bad-tempered 坏脾气的 good-tempered 好脾气的 , naughty 淘气的 ， smart/bright /intelligent 聪明的， diligent / hard-working 勤奋的， lazy 懒惰的， humorous 幽默的， confident 有信心的, independent 独立的，outgoing外向的 , shy 害羞的， easy-going 随和的, stubborn 顽固的 be ready to help others, helpful 乐于助人的， generous 大方的 ，narrow-minded小心眼的， determined 有决心的 考上重点大学 be admitted into a key university 主修法律 major in law 获得硕士/博士学位 get a masters /doctors degree 毕业于哈佛大学 graduate from Harvard University (5)出国留学 go abroad for further study 4. education 5. big events in ones life devote oneself to do sth with great determination set a new world record of win (won) a gold /silver/ bronze medal win the first prize in the competition 1. 职位头衔： 用同位语, 年龄性别与家境也 可用同位语。如： Sun Shuwei, _ (一位跳水的世界冠军), is a boy of 14 from Guangdong.(同位语) Im Li Hui, _(一 个17岁的女孩子). 写作技巧 a world champion in diving a girl of seventeen 模仿造句： 陈颖思，高三（14）班的班长，是一个 来自加益镇的18岁的女孩子。 Chen Yingsi, _, (高三14班的班长) is a girl of 18 from Jiayi Town. Chen Yingsi, _, ( 一个来自加益镇的18岁的女孩子) is monitor of Class14,Senior Three . monitor of Class14 ,Senior Three a girl of 18 from Jiayi Town 2. 介绍出生: 介绍出生的时间、地点和家 境用分词结构, 使文章更简洁。如： Yao Ming,_ (1980年出生于上海), is a world famous basketball player. _(出 生在一个贫困的小职员家庭中), Charles Dickens had little schooling. born in Shanghai in 1980 Born into a poor clerk s family 模仿造句： 译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中 国最伟大的医生之一 1) Zhong Nanshan ,born in Guangzhou in 1941, is one of the greatest doctors in China. 2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941. 3. 描写外貌: 巧用with短语。如： Our monitor is a beautiful girl, _(她长 着两只大眼睛, 留着长发). with two big eyes and long hair 4. 生平事迹： 尽量用复合句、并列句 、非谓语动词短语和倒装等高级语句。 如： 他创下了游泳的新记录, 为中国队赢了一枚金牌. (1)He set a new world record of swimming, _ . 非限制性定定语从句 which won a gold medal for the Chinese Team _ _(中山大学英语系毕业了之后 ), she went on further study and received a doctors degree. _ (他不但对科学极有兴趣), but also he has a gift for music.(倒装句式) Graduating from the English Department Not only does he show interest in science of Zhongshan University 雷锋为我们树立了一个好榜样, 所有人都对 他高度赞扬,尊敬他. 1）Lei Feng_, so all the people _him and all respected him . 他是中国最伟大的小说家之一, 人们永远记 这位杰出的人物. 2）He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will _ an outstanding man. 5.评价：尽量运用一些动词短语. set us a good example to us spoke highly of be always remembered as be remembered as be respected by everyone speak/ think highly of be highly thought of be honored as (an excellent athlete) be awarded the title of获得称号 the pride of China/our class. 用于评价的短语 Writing task : introduce one student in our class using five sentences. 写作点拨 1.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。 2.注意运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性 格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的 出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去 时。 One version: Born in Fucheng Town in 1993, he is a boy with a pair of glasses . He is very active in class and is ready to help classmates whenever they have problems.