英语作文导航.ppt

英语写作英语写作 词汇,句型 , 语法多样化 1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构 和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的 连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 要 点 全 连 接 词 如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？ 写好结构 三段或四段 首尾段写好 注意：写得很一般的句子不要独立成段 ！ 如何写好句子 用高级结构！ 从句、非谓语、倒装、强调、高级词汇 there are many visitors enjoy the dish. there are many visitors who enjoy the dish. 1.句子要正确 2.句子要平行 in my spare time, i enjoy popular music and collecting stamps. in my spare time, i enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. 3.句子要连贯连贯 go into the park. go forward. cross the street. turn right. after you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight till you come to a stream. cross the stream and turn right. 4.句子要有逻辑性 im very interested in computer and won first prize last year. i was very interested in computer and won first prize last year. 5.句子要避免过多重复. you will continue to walk. youll see a hill. you will go around the hill. youll get to a lake. after walking for a while, youll come to a hill, walk round to the other side of the hill. there youll see a lake. 6. 6.句子要避免头重脚轻句子要避免头重脚轻 chinese, maths, english, physics, chinese, maths, english, physics, chemistry and computer are the chemistry and computer are the main subjects.main subjects. the main subjects are chinese, maths, english, physics, chemistry and computer. 7.句子要避免汉式英语 my spare lovers are swimming, skating, collecting stamps and listening to popular music. in my spare time, im fond of swimming, in my spare time, my hobbies are swimming, skating in my spare time, i enjoy swimming, skating 1 when he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用v-ing形式）. 2. to his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词 性从句） 3. though im weak, ill make the effort. (使用倒装句) 4. he did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 5. i passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气） on his arriving, please give me an e-mail. what surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式 weak as i am, ill make the effort. it was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. i couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. 6. she walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用 过去分词) 7. they sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用v-ing 形式) 8.i wont believe what he says. （使用状语从句） 9.if you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句） 10he had no sooner come back from beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句) no sooner had he come back from beijing than he was sent abroad. followed by many students, she walked out of the lab. singing and laughing, they went back to school. no matter what he says, i wont believe. study hard and youll make rapid progress. 如何运用衔接词 1. and, in addition, first, second, third 2. before, after, when, later, immediately 3. beyond, beside, behind, below, inside 4. but, still, however, even, though 5. because, so, therefore, thus, otherwise 6. so that, indeed, above all, for example 7. finally, in other words, in brief 1.(因为)_ his help, i finished the work at last. thanks to as a result of owing to due to 因为 because of /with 2.more roads will have to be built with more cars, _（所以）well have less field to grow rice. therefore so as a result consequently thus 结果 3.the rent is reasonable, _, the location is perfect. 房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。 whats more moreover/furthermore in addition besides 另外( 递进 ） 4. the young man didnt enjoy his old job. _(相反 ) he finds the new job very interesting. on the contrary, however, 转折 but/yet/while 5. _(总之), we should make good use of computer. in general in a word/all in all 总结 in short/brief generally speaking 6._(我认为) , student