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四级作文四级作文 1 三段十二句作文法 1.开头段 （1）引用法：引言名言、谚语或流行语等。如： As the saying goes, time flies. How to spend your time properly is becoming increasingly important to everyone. As the proverb goes, “You are only young once.”(适用于记住的名言) (2) 提问法：提出一个或一连串问题。如： Do you have many friends? Are they similar to you or different from you? Which kind of friends do you prefer? Do you know how many people die from traffic accidents every 23 minutes? Why does cream go bad faster than butter? （3）定义法：如： What is advertisement? It is the words or pictures used on media, TV, for example, to publicize a certain product or give a warning to people (4) 数字法：以针对某一问题客观报道的数字 开头。 Todays TV programs are much too violent. A survey has recently shown that in one week of evenings spent before a TV set, a person may witness eighty-five killings. According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. (5)故事法：用简短有趣的小故事开头。如 ： Six oclock yesterday (June 20th, Friday) afternoon when I was walking along the riverbank of our school, an unbelievable scene caught my eyes. (6) 主题句法 The appeal of advertising to buying motives can have both negative and positive effects. (7) 对比法 When asked ., most of college students say that. But I think quite differently. I would prefer a career that will help realize my potentials. 开头段的长度一般控制在34句话的范围即可 。 如：以The Best Way to Stay Healthy为例 With the development of economy and society, more and more people are not only concerning about their necessity of life, but also their health condition.(引出话题) They all want to stay healthy and have different ways to make it. Some people exercise everyday, while others keep a balanced diet.(简要展开并 限定话题范围） As far as I am concerned, Im for the latter.(提出观点） 用于句首提出论题或现象的句型 Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that. 随 着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题 ，其中之一便是_。 As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes. 然而，对于此类问题，人们持不同的看法。 Hold different attitudes 持不同的看法（ 观点、态度） Come up with different attitudes 有不同 的看法。 As society develops, people are attaching much importance to随 着社会的发展，人们开始关注 As to whether it is worthwhile , there is a long-running controversial debate. It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it. 关于是否值得_的问题，一直以来争论不休。当然，不同的人 对此可能持不同的观点。 Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that. 最近，这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注，有人开始担心_。 The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention. 人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段，经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快 ，随之给我们带来了很多问题。 plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?” _显得非常重要而成为当今世界所关注的最大的问题，这是无可厚 非的。不过，问题是：“我们该如何抉择？” 2. 中间段 常用例证法、对比法、因果法等。如： The discrimination against women is very obvious in reality.（主题句） In the factory or office, it is a female worker or clerk not a male one who is laid off first. In the poor family, it is the girl not the boy who has to drop out of school. In the college, it is difficult for girl students to find good jobs.（举例说明） 中间段是作文获取高分的关键。对于四、 六级作文，中间段的写作重点是找到主题句 ，然后围绕主题句进行扩展即可。在对主题 句扩展的过程中，要注意不同的扩展句之间 要使用必要的过渡词，使整个段落语意连贯 通顺。 如：There are four ways to keep fit. Firstly, we should have our breakfast in the morning。 Second, we should have a nap at noon。 Third, sports exercises are necessary in the afternoon. And fourth, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening to music. 如果感觉字数不够，就在每一句或某些句子上添加些词词就行了。例 如我们感觉上边这段不够长，就可以这样来加词： There are four or more ways to keep fit for everyone of us. - Firstly, we should have our breakfast, such as milk, eggs, bread and so on, in the morning. - Secondly, we should have a short nap, even 30 minutes, at noon. - Thirdly, sports exercises are necessary for everyone and we can do some sports exercises in the afternoon. - And fourthly, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening to both popular and classic music. 3. 结尾段 （1）重复中心思想 回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或 主题句上，达到再次肯定和强调的效果。 With all these benefits, it is no wonder that sports and games have now become more popular with people than ever. （2）作出结论 文章最后用几句话概括全文内容，并 进一步肯定文章的中心思想或作者的观点。 In conclusion/to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, a good teacher-student relationship can be mutual beneficial. The students gain knowledge eagerly and enjoyably, and the teacher gains satisfaction from his job. （3）应用引语 用格言、谚语或习语总结全文!，既言 简意赅又有更强的说服力。 If you have anything to do, try to do it yourself, for that is the safest way to permanent success. Remember the famous saying. “God helps those who help themselves.“ （4）用反问结尾 虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的 ，具有明显的强调作用，引起读者思考。 Therefore, listening skills must be consciously improved. Since it is such an important means of learning and communication, why shouldnt we develop this ability as far as possible? So, what can we benefit from wealth if we do not have health? （5）提出展望或期望 表示对将来的展望或期 待读者投入行动。 I am sure that Chinese will become one of the most important languages in the world in the next century. As China will open further to the outside world， the language is sure to be spread world widely. 用于结尾的常用句型 From what has been discussed / mentioned above , we may conclude that Therefore , it is not difficult to draw / come to the conclusion that It is high time that something was done about From all the reasons / consideration above , it is evident / clear / obvious that Taking into account all these factors , we may reach the conclusion that Given the reasons / consideration I have just outlined / discussed / presented , I strongly recommend that It is clear , therefore , that All in all ,what really matters is , in fact , to It is essential that effective measure be taken to From what has been discussed above , we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that In conclusion ,the most important is On the whole , it is high time that every one As a result , we should take some effective steps to Judging by the figures / statistics , it is not difficult to see that Only in this way / in so doing , can be really 对于一篇作文，自然地结尾是非常重要 的。对于四、六级考试作文，结尾段的字数 控制在34句话左右为妥。 四级作文范例 07年6月英语四级作文点评及范文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an announcement to welcome students to join to a club. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1、本社团的主要活动内容 2、参加本社团的好处 3、如何加入本社团 真题解析： 告示的正文可写13段，针对四级写作 三点提纲的特点，最好写成三段，每点提纲 各写一段、详细展开即可。告示的正文时态 以现在时和将来时为主。 告示的署名可以是个人或单位，针对考 题，应写为单位：某个社团，应写在答题卡 中间偏右的位置。 另外，四级写作最好采用缩进式，段间 不空行，每段首行缩进45个字母并对齐 。 Welcome to Our Club June 23, 2007 Welcome to our club! Our “Easy-to- Learn” English club aims at helping college students to study English in easier ways. There may be all kinds of colorful activities every week in our club, suah as English Corner, English Talk Show, English lectures, English Songs Competition, etc. If you are accepted by our club, you will find you have made a wise choice. To begin with, you may practice and improve your English in our activities in a relaxed and comfortable way. In addition, you may make new friends in the activities, which will make your college life more enjoyable and meaningful. Last but not the least, you may join all the activities at a much lower price or even free of charge. If you are interested in our club, please dont hesitate to join us. You just need to fill in the form and we may contact you as soon as possible. Our telephone number is 7788666, and if you have any problem, please call us. Thanks for your attention and we are looking forward to your joining! “Easy-to-Learn” English club 四级作文范例 10年12月英语四级作文点评及范文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 1、目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2、为了让孩子独立，父母应该 Nowadays many parents tend to make all decisions for their children(引出话题)for fear that they might do something wrong. They cook meals and wash clothes for their children.(列举扩展1）And they even make all the choices for them. (列举扩展2 ）Everything has been done by the parents and the children will do nothing but following their parents decisions. For their childrens future development, parents should help them to be independent by following the suggestions given below.(主题句）Parents should firstly teach their children how to make plan,(扩展句1）an indispensable skill for their future survival. In addition, parents should also give their