file九年级英语中考写作训练全讲解(课件).ppt

英语（新标准） 写作训练 写作训练 教学大纲对九年级写作的要求 能依据写作要求，收集、准备素材； 能独立起草短文、短信等，并在教师的 指导下进行修改； 能使用常见的连词表示顺序和逻辑关系 ； 能简单描述人物或事件； 能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落 或操作说明； 新标准英语写作归纳 (七年级上) 模块块写作 Module1Introducing yourself to your new friends 向新朋友做自我介绍绍 Module2Giving and asking for personal in- formation 给给出或询问询问 个人信息 Module3Writing a letter describing your school 写信描述你的学校 Module4Writing about your family 谈谈谈谈 你的家庭 Module5Making a food and drink poster 制作食物和饮饮料的海报报 新标准英语写作归纳 (七年级上) 模块块写作 Module6Inviting friends to do sth 邀请请朋友去做某事 Module7 Talking about my school day 谈谈谈谈 我校园一日 Module8 Choosing a birthday present 选择选择 一份生日礼物 Module9 Making a poster of your favorite animal 为为你喜爱爱的礼物制作海报报 Module10 Doing a questionaire about computer 关于电脑电脑 做一组问题组问题 新标准英语写作归纳 （七年级下） 模块块写作 Module1 Writing a postcard 写一份贺贺卡 Module2 Writing a letter about the spring festival 关于春节节写一封信 Module3 Saying what you are going to at the weekend?说说说说 你周末去干什么？ Module4 Designing your dream school 设计设计 你梦想的学校 Module5 Making a poster comparing two cities or rivers in China 新标准英语写作归 （七年级下） 模块块写作 Module6 Making a sports poster 制作一份体育海报报 Module7 Interpreting data 通译译数据 Module8 Writing your partners past life 写写你同伴的过过去的生活 Module9 Telling a story 讲讲故事 Module10 Writing about people in the past 新标准英语写作归 （七年级下） 模块块写作 Module11 Giving a talk about a hero 关于一位英雄的演讲讲 Module12 Writing an email to a friend 给给朋友写一份邮邮件 新标准英语写作归纳 （八年级上） 模块块写作 Module1 Writing your English study plan 写一份你的英语语学习计习计 划 Module2 Doing a questionaire about experiences 关于经历经历 做一组问题组问题 Module3 Making a poster about space travel 关于太空旅游制作一份海报报 Module4 Writing a leaflet to raise money for the Hope School为为希望学校募捐写传传 单单 Module5 Talk about the music you like best 谈谈谈谈 你最喜爱爱的音乐乐 新标准英语写作归 （八年级上） 模块块写作 Module6 Writing a short story about your past 对过对过 去的经历经历 写一个小故事 Module7 Writing a description of someone 描述某个人 Module8 Giving directions around your town 在你的小镇镇周围围指路 Module9 Writing about animals in danger 处处于困境中的动动物 Module10 Writing and acting out a scene from a play从剧剧本中表演或写一个场场景 新标准英语写作归纳 （八年级上） 模块块写作 Module11 Preparing some advice on the best time to visit China 准备备一份关 于参观观中国的最好时节时节 的建议议 Module12 Writing advice for foreign guests to a Chinese family 为为来中国家庭的外国客人写一些建议议 新标准英语写作归纳 （八年级下） 模块块写作 Module1 Writing about my classmates hobby 关于同学的爱爱好 Module2 Writing someone or something which changed your life 改变变你的生活的某人某 事 Module3 Writing about important events in past and background information Module4 Writing a short story about how a mobile phone saved someones life Module5 Writing a problem letter 写一封问题问题 信 新标准英语写作归纳 （八年级下） 模块块写作 Module6 Writing a report about a film 关于一部电电影写份报报告 Module7 Writing about the Wulingyuan Scenic What worse, not onlybut also, neithernor 等等 。 再有学生语文水平的滑坡，使得英语 老师不得不带领学生完成写作内容的 挖掘。 写作注意的几个问题： 选词：普通的叙述文或短文，应 该选择简洁、朴实、准确的大众 化词语，避免使用矫饰、复杂、 故弄玄虚的词，并尽可能挑选积 极的动词。 写作注意的几个问题： 措辞：能写出树的具体名称an apple tree, 就不要使用tree; 能说 清具体数字时，就不要使用some; 知道是某种专门的活动，就不要使 用do去描述，词意越具体，越能 给读者鲜明的印象。 写作注意的几个问题： 你如何写开头 1.开头常用词语： as far as we know 据我们所知 as everybody knows 众所周知 at present 目前 first of all 首先 To tell the truth 老实说 1.结尾常用词语： after all 毕竟 at last 最后 in a word 总而言之 finally, 最后 we hope that 我们希望 In short 简言之 clearly 显然 你如何写结尾 如何添加过度句、连接词 补充说明 for example, besides， In addition(此外）， Whats worse! Whats more! Worst of all. 转折 however, yet, but 原因 thanks to, because of 结果 as result of , so ，sothat 范文2：I m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First， some of us arent interested in English. They think studying English is such a boring thing to do. And then Its so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us 作文如何添加过度句、连接词 作文如何添加过度句、连接词 dont have enough confidence to keep up English study . And we are always afraid to join in the group discussion. Whats more, there are so many new words we hadnt meet before in the passage. I dont know what to do. Sometimes we cant understand the main idea, let alone 作文如何添加过度句、连接词 answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us ? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write to me soon. Yours Fang Hua 信息点与承接词的关系 信息点是珠子，承接词是线，用 线把珠子串连起来就是一条熠熠 生辉、优雅华贵的项链。单独看 某一方就成为一条破绳子，一堆 烂珠子。 如何写好好人好事的结尾 be proud of speak highly of follow ones example come true 你如何写结尾 近年中考写作的特色：描述+看法/感想 1.写这类作文要求同学们先审题，弄清图 示情境中的故事梗概。审题的内涵较广 ，不仅只对作文题的审视，也包括审视 写作提示词、主题句、图以及对作文字 数的要求。审题一旦出现偏误，就会“差 之毫厘，谬以千里”。大部分同学不会写 作，主要原因是不会审题, 通过审题， 抓取有效信息。考题在描述上是有限定 的， 发表看法及感想是自由发挥的。 范文1： 在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务 活吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇80字左 右的短文，描述你平时所作家务以及你对 家务的看法。 提示：1.扔垃圾 2. 扫地 3. 帮助妈妈做饭 4.洗衣服 5. 为花浇水 6. 饭后洗 碗 要求：语句通畅，语法正确。 不得逐句翻译。 学生的优秀范文 （15分） AS we all know, Its important to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help them do housework. I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morning. I help my mother cook the lunch . I always wash clothes for my family. My parents are very happy. Besides, Watering the flowers is also my duty. I like them very much and take good care of them. After supper, I always wash dishes . I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.（即总括 又阐明看法） 学生的优秀范文 （15分） 2007年天津市书面表达考题 日前,由教育部,国家体育总局,共青团 中央联合举办“全国亿万少年阳光体 育运动” 启动仪式,其影响巨大,意义 深远.你在本校参加了此项活动,请根 据表格中所给信息写一篇英语短文. 2007年天津市书面表达考题 内容感想 1.学校师师生收看了启动动 仪仪式; 2.开展了一个小时时的集 体体育活动动,如;跑步,做 操,打篮篮球等 1.锻炼锻炼 有利于强 健身体; 2. 运动动使大脑脑休 息,学习习效率更高. 3. 每天锻炼锻炼 一小 时时,幸福生活一辈辈 子. 注意: 词数80100 个左右. 2.短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词 数. 3.短文须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐 句 翻译,可适当加入细节,可适度发挥,使 短文通顺,连贯. 4. 文中不得使用真实姓名,校名. 书面表达考题 书面表达考题书面表达考题 参考词汇： the launching ceremony 启动仪式 build up ones body strength 强身健体 More effective 效果更好 “Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” launched on April 29, 2007.The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony . 学生优秀范文 （15分） After that, all of us went to the playground. We had different kinds of sports that we liked for an hour. Some took part in running, some played basketball and football, and some did exercises. We enjoyed doing sports so much that we all forgot the time. We really had a good time. 学生优秀范文 （15分） Doing sports is very good for us. It helps to build up our body strength, Besides, our brains can have a good rest after doing sports. So our study can be more effective. So why not join us ? Doing sports an hour everyday, you can have a happier and better life. 优秀范文讲评 讲评: 该文结构严谨, 思维清晰,在内容 及感想间使用了不同的时态;一般过 去时及一般现在时,发挥适度,长句短 句交叉使用,句式赋于变化,用词得体, 有很强的可读性, 文章的开头与结尾 相互呼应,浑然一体,使主体得以升华. 做到了naturally and clearly. 好人好事 假如你叫小明。下面的图图画讲讲述了你和一位男孩在 上周一发发生的事情。请请根据图图画写出一篇日记记。日 记记的开头头已经给经给 出 Go to school Saw fall off Carry to Visit with Be fine thank 看图作文 Who was lying on the ground? What happened to the boy? When did it happen? Where did it happen? Why did it happen? How was the boy? 要求：1.日记应包括图画中所有内容。 2.词数：70-80词。 Monday June 2, 2008 Fine Last Monday, I went to school in the morning. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ “Not at all. I just did what I should do .” 把好人好事做到底 范文1 Monday June2, 2008 Fine Last Monday, I went to school in the morning. When I was at the school gate, I saw a boy fell off his bike and lie on the road. He was badly hurt and couldnt move, so I carried him to the hospital. When he was in hospital, I visited him with some flowers and he was very happy. After he was fine, he came to the school and said to me, “Thank you very much, Xiao Ming.“ I said, “Not at all. I just did something that I should do.“ 好人好事 Though we didnt see the film, we were happy. After all we did Sth kind. Sth right 要记住哟 仿写 英语有一句名言“Originality is always better than imitation”有创见比模仿好 。 但对于英语的初学者来说应该反过来说 更好，即“模仿比创见好。”仿写可使学 生尽快入道， 可以进行段落仿写，课文 仿写 甚至于经典句子的仿写。 例如新标准英语九年级上Page 34有这 样一句话： Im looking forward to this. (仿写1) Im looking forward to hearing from you. (信尾使用） (仿写2) Im looking forward to your reply. (仿写3) I look forward to the summer holiday. 仿写 句式富于变化 例如；1.Jack came home at 7am yesterday. -Jack didnt came home until 7am yesterday. 2. We are good friends. We should help each other. ( good) -We are good friends and we should help each other. (better) -As we are good friends , we should help each other. ( best) 3. I was careless. I lost a bag on the ground. (good ) -I was careless and lost a bag on the ground. (better) -I was so careless that I lost a bag on the ground. (best) 句式富于变化 如何训练学生 1.写一篇是一篇， 写文章的过程是不断修改 提高的过程， 学生写好后，先相互修改， 然后再交给老师修改。在批改作文时，教 师把学生的作文共性的问题做笔录，为全 班讲评。 2. 请三位好中差典型的同学利用课间把作文 抄写在黑板上，进行集体讲评，这样达成 双向交流评语，避免有些同学看不懂老师 的评语。 3. 考前强化训练是非常必要的，平时没 有这么多的精力练写作，借助考试这 股东风，提高写作水平，绝不是搞突 击，走形式，玩技巧，拿个高分完事 。练习基础的知识，为写作铺路搭桥 ，如重新组合句子，删除多余的句子 ，加过渡句，写主题句等等。 如何训练学生 4. 学生不写作文老师着急，学生写了作文 ，老师更着急，批改作文的速度远远慢 于学生写作的速度。考前老师工作量很 大，这时我就采用学生限时写作，写完 后再听写范文，最后学生对照两篇文章 ，自我修改，再收上来，我们的工作量 大减，同时学生也知道怎样写好作文。 如何训练学生 1.统一批改符号，例如： 删除 插入 替代 佳句 句子不通畅 训练学生记住批改符号 Look the book read 对学生口语中错误不必“见错就纠”， 但学生作文中差错，均应全部纠正， 这时因为书面语言具有永久性，人们 对书面语差错的容忍度总是小于对口 语中差错的容忍度，另一方面，书面 语中的差错得不到纠正，就会在口语 中再现。 纠错 纠错小到标点符号，大到文章结构， 逻辑次序，语序等等。比如英语中没 有顿号；省略号是三个点“” 而不 是汉语的六个点“”； 再有冒号 ，中文里用冒号的地方，英语中常常 用逗号；英语里句号是实心点，汉语 里的句号空心点。 纠错 最近你校同学正在参加某英文报组 织的讨论，其中的一个话题是：高考前有 些家长在考场附近租住宾馆，陪孩子复习 ，这样做有无必要。请根据下表提供的信 息给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况 。75% 的同学认为不必住宾馆浪费钱， 住在哪里与考试无关，父母陪伴反而增加 压力。25%的同学认为有条件还是住宾馆 好适应环境，节省路途用时，父母督促提 高效率。 例例8 8： Dear editor, When we discuss about whether it is good to book a room for kids at a hotel near the school where the exam will be taken, we have different opinions: 75% of the students think that it is not necessary to rent a room at a hotel. They think it wastes money. They say the place where they stay has little to do with the exam. They also say it will increase their pressure if they stay with their parents. 25% of the students think it is better to rent room if their parents have the money. They believe it will help them suit to the surroundings; they also believe it will save the time f