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高效测评卷(二十三)写作训练一第卷 (非选择题，共35分)第四部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)(2012河北高考模拟)Dear Brad，I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school.Ifeel uneasily recently.At home I feel like prisoner.I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet.The only thing I have to do it is studying.Every time I got a low mark，my parents will scold me sharply.Theres a generation gap among my parents and me，but its always difficult to communicate.Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful，isnt it？How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university？I am very unhappy and lost.I need your help.Best wishes，Li Ping第二节书面表达(满分25分)(2012山西四校高三第二次联考)假定你是李华，从中国日报上的广告得知某公司需要一名秘书，请你根据以下信息写一封求职信。1年龄23岁，将从山西大学毕业；2专业(major)是经济管理(business management)，学习成绩优秀，英语和计算机学得好；3大学期间在校报做编辑；4喜欢办公室工作。注意：1.词数：100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir/Madam，Im writing to apply for the position of secretary that you have advertised in China Daily._详解答案：高效测评卷(二十三)短文改错Dear Brad，I am a boy in the first of a senior high school.Ifeel recently.At home I feel like prisoner.I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet.The only thing I have to do it is studying.Every time I a low mark，my parents will scold me sharply.Theres a generation gap my parents and me， its always difficult to communicate.Life supposed to be colorful and wonderful，isnt it？ should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to a good university？I am very unhappy and lost.I need your help.Best wishes，Li Ping书面表达Dear Sir/Madam，Im writing to apply for the position of secretary that you have advertised in China Daily.I feel that both my education and experience suit it well.My name is Li Hua，twentythree years old now，and will soon graduate from Shanxi University.My major is business management and my grades remain outstanding in my class.Having been learning English for years，I have a good command of spoken and written English，as well as computer.I have been one of the editors of the school newspaper of our school for the past few years.The most important thing is that I like office work very much.Im sure I can do it