《基础写作教学》PPT课件.ppt

基础写作 Basic Writing 基础写作的命题特点： 按所给的内容及要求，用5个规范的英语 句子描述所给信息的全部内容，并组成 连贯的短文。 简而言之，考查整理信息和组词造句成 文的能力。 基础写作的评分标准？ 1 2 3 4 句子内容的完整性(Completeness) 句子结构的正确性(correctness) 句子结构的复杂性(Variety) 句子内容的连贯性(Coherence) 基础写作步骤 一、审题 理清文字信息 判断文章格式、人称、要点、时态、 信件、故事、简介 记叙文、说明文、应用文 单一时态 on one hand, on the other hand 转转折关系but, however, while(虽虽然), though, otherwise，on the contrary, in spite of, no matter what 因果关系because, since, due to, owing to, thanks to, as a result (of), consequently, therefore 条件关系as long as, so long as, in case, on condition that, if, unless, 递进递进 关系 whats more, moreover, besides, furthermore, in addition, to make matters worse, whats worse, worse still 解释说释说 明 for example/ instance, such as, that is, namely, in other words 总结总结in short, in general,all in all, to sum up, to conclude, generally speaking, in a word, on the whole A recent survey shows that in todays society, Chinese young peoples life goals have become more diversified than before. When asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves. In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving their life quality or to be a rich person while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job. As for how to achieve their life goals, most of them prefer struggling to realize their dreams. The survey shows that the society is making progress and peoples life goals have become more practical. It is usual that many students parents and teachers consider marks as everything, but in fact, marks only show whether one gains more or less achievement in a certain period. It does not mean students who get high marks are top or excellent ones. Whats more, marks can be truly improved if you work hard at your lessons. However hard you feel at present, you will be happy in the future, so you should adjust your mind to reality and make up your mind to make progress. As a matter of fact, if you put your heart into your study, whatever the result is, there is nothing left for you to regret. 写作步骤： 整合信息 组词造句 连句成篇 1. 长、短句结合 2. 简单句、复合句结合 3. 从句、分词、不定式结合 4. 衔接词、过渡语、连接词 1.按逻辑关系划分5个信息块 2. 内容要点不能遗漏,增加 1.5个句子（所有内容要点） 2.不同的表达方式（避开生词 ） 1.保持冷静，听命令 2.在教室 3.在操场 4.远离高楼 5.互助 stay calm/ keep calm, follow the teachers command/ do as the teacher says on the playground, stand still/ stay where you are, crouch and protect in class, hide stay far away from, jump off help each other, go through difficulties 1.stay calm/ keep calm, follow the teachers command/ do as the teacher says 3.on the playground, stand still/ stay where you are, crouch and protect 2.in class, hide 4.stay far away from, jump off 5.help each other, go through difficulties Stay calm and do everything as the teacher says. If you are in class, hide under your desk quickly. If you are on the playground, stay where you are, crouch and protect your head with your hands. Stay far away from tall buildings and dont jump off the tall buildings. We should help each other and go through difficulties. What should we do at school when an earthquake breaks out? First, be sure to stay calm and do everything the teacher tells you. If you are in class, take cover under your desk quickly and do not move until the floor stops shaking. If you are on the playground, stay where you are, crouch and protect your head. Dont stand near high buildings that may fall down and dont jump off the buildings. Help your classmates if you can and try to go through the disaster together. Your assessment ： good points shortcomings Advice 1. 要点齐全； 2. 语句表达基本正确。 1. 部分用词不规范 2. 语句不够连贯 1、使用常见句型，丰富句式； 2、句子之间使用关联词或过渡词。 No more/less than 5 sentences! Its better to write in only 1 paragraph! Dont add other information! Dont use the same sentence pattern! Pay attention to the logic! Show your best hand-writing! 最近，学校学生会提议议全校同学参与一项项公益活动动。以 下是活动动内容： 活动时间动时间 在纪纪念5.12大地震一周年之际际 活动动内容1.你每购买购买 一张张主题为题为 “Carry on with Love” 的贺贺卡，就意味着你向乡乡村孩子赠赠送了一本 儿童读读物。 2.每张贺张贺 卡售价10元，含1.2元邮资邮资 。 活动动目的通过过参加这这一项项目，希望为为灾区学校、乡乡村 学校筹集到300，000本图书图书 。 购买购买 方式可从链链接到“淘宝网专营专营 店（Taobao Shop）”。 【写作要求】 请用5个句子表达以上全部内容，首句和尾句已给给出，不计计入5个句子中。 (周年纪纪念：anniversary; 乡乡村的：rural; 邮资邮资 ：postage.) 1. 活动时间 2.