高考英语基础写作---新闻报道.pptx

认真审题。新闻/活动报道也是记叙文的一种, 但是与日记类型的经历感受又不完全一样。 日记类型的文章考生不但把自己的所见所闻 描绘出来, 还要注意个人情感的表达。 而新闻报道类型的文章需要客观的报道, 因此 语言方面可以相对平实一点。 巧用形容词，副词使文章生动形象（vivid） 新闻报道的第一部分往往为全文的中心 句(topic sentence), 因此这个句子中常包含四 大元素what(事件), when(时间), where(地点) 和who(人物)，有时也会补充说明另一个因素 why（事情发生的原因或目的）。 而在下文则要补充事件的过程和细节, 例 如how(具体过程)等。 假设为了让青少年更了解诗歌, 上个周末你校举办了一场面向全绍 兴的诗歌大赛。假设你是学校报社 的通讯员, 为这个活动写一篇报道。 举办目的why让青少年更了解和学会欣赏诗歌 举办时间when2015年5月24日, 上周日 举办地点where 稽山中学 参与人数who200多个来自全市不同学校的高中生 举办详情how1. 参赛者背诵自己的作品, 交流经验 2. 参赛者积极参加并高度评价此次比 赛。 参赛者感受通过比赛与诗歌有了更多的交流. 本人感受和期望 1.诗歌可以帮助释放压力, 帮助我们快 乐成长. 2. 鼓励大家像诗人那样思考, 对世界更 敏感和真诚 1. 欣赏诗歌 2. 背诵作品 3. 交流想法 4. 积极参加 5. 从没参加过更的活动 6. 高度评价 7. 与交流 8. 释放压力 9. 快乐地成长 10. 对敏感 In order to help teenagers learn more and appreciate poetry, a poetry contest was held in the Jishan High School last Sunday, on May 24th, 2015. More than 200 senior students from different high schools all over Shaoxing, gathered together, reciting their works and exchanging thoughts. This contest achieved a great success, during which everyone took an active part in it, expressing that never before had they experienced a more amazing competition. Many competitors thought highly of this activity, adding that they had a much closer communication with poems through this competition. It is well known that poetry could help us release pressure and grow up more happily. Therefore, wed better think as a poet does, that is, be sensitive and sincere towards the world. 活动报道的第一段第一句是开门见山地介绍 活动的情况：活动的时间、地点、目的和内容都 包含在里面。第二句包含了参与人数与活动详情, 范文用了伴随状语（高级结构）reciting their works and exchanging thoughts连接了这两个内 容。 第二段中用了一个非限制性定语从句（take an active part in）和现在分词伴随状语 (expressing that amazing)以及倒装结构描述 了比赛细节（高级结构）。另外，还从参赛者角 度出发高度评价了（think highly of）此次活 动。 第三段针对“poetry”阐述个人感受和评价， “点题”并呼应前文。 巩固练习1 Professor Hudsons lecture methods of how to improve English students performance and evaluation take an active part in think highly of your opinions 假设你是林华, 本月是你们学校的英语月,全校开展了 丰富多彩的活动.上周五你们有幸邀请浙江大学外籍教 师Hudson教授给你们班开了一个题为“How to Improve English ”的英语讲座,请你根据提示和下面 表格的内容,用英语为校报写一篇120词左右的报道. 词汇：evaluation评价. 注意：1. 报道的开头已经给出,不计入总词数； 2. 可根据内容要点适当发挥,使行文连贯； 3. 行文中不得提及考生所在学校； 举办目的why英语月活动（首句已给出） 举办时间when上周五 举办地点where 你们学校 参与人数whoProfessor Huston, my class(we) 举办详情howmethods of how to improve English 参加者感受think highly of 本人感受和期望 如何更好的学好英语（倒装句，强调句 型等） 1.做了一个讲座 2.methods of how to improve English 3.对留下了深刻的印象 4.难忘的 5.吸引了的注意力 6.积极参加 7.高度评价 8.从来没有体验过更好的 9.全身心投入 10. 只有才能 This month is our schools English month. We held all kinds of colorful English activities. Last Friday we had the honor of inviting Professor Hudson, a foreign teacher from Zhejiang University, to give an English lecture to the students. All the students attended and were deeply impressed by this unforgettable English lecture. Mr. Hudson began the lecture with an interesting English story, which drew the attention of all the students at once. And delivered it in an easy-understanding way. Deeply absorbed, everyone took an active part in the activities in this lecture. After the lecture, many students interviewed thought highly of it. saying that never before had they experienced so interesting a lecture. From his lecture, I realized that only if we put our hearts into it can we improve our English. 时间上周 地点华文中学 事件一批英国学生到访 行程了解中国学生的校园生活、参观佛山的著名 景点，体验当地文化 佛山印象洁净的市容、友善的学生、美味的食品 回访计划华文中学38名学生应邀明年三月访问英国 (2008年佛山一模) 上周, 一批英国学生到达佛山华文中学进行访问交流。假 设你是该校通讯员, 请根据以下内容给当地一家报社写一 篇英文报道。 写作内容 1. learn about 了解 2. be to set for 将前往 3. places of interest 名胜古迹 4. an exchange visit 回访 5. gather together 集中 6. get close to 靠近 7. the best-known tourist spot 最著名的旅游景 7. at the invitation of 在的邀请下 8. be impressed by 被给予深刻印象 句2： (1) 感受校园生活：_ _ 句3： (2) 参观著名景点：_ _ (3) 体验当地文化：_ 词汇整理 翻译或完成下列短语。 learn/know about the local culture experience the campus life of Chinese students visit / pay a visit to some places of interest / tourist attractions 句4： (4) 洁净的市容, 友善的学生, 美味的食品： _ _ _ _ 句5： (5) 回访：_ the clean city, friendly students and delicious food / the cleanness of the city, kindness of the students and niceness of food(注意并列 词组的词性一致) an exchange visit 难句翻译 请用高级结构或优美的句式翻译下列句 子。 句4： 洁净的市容、友善的学生、美味的食品给学生留 下了深刻的印象。 The British students were deeply impressed by the clean city, friendly students and delicious food. / What expressed the British students deeply was the clean city, friendly students and delicious food. / The clean city, friendly students and delicious food left a deep impression on the British students. 句5： 华文中学38名学生应邀明年三月访问英国。 In return, 38 students in Huawen Middle School are invited to visit Britain next March. / At the invitation of a British school, 38 students in Huawen Middle School are to set for Britain for an exchange visit next March. 1. During their one-week stay in Foshan, the students experienced the campus life of Chinese students.在佛山为期一周的逗留 中, 这些学生们体验了中国学生的校园生 活。 2. The British students were impressed by the kindness of Chinese students. 英国的学 生们对中国学生的友好印象深刻。 相关句式 3. At the invitation of a British school, 38 students in Huawen Middle School are to set for Britain for an exchange visit next March.在一个英国学校的邀 请下, 华文中学的38名学生明年三月将 启程去英国进行交流访问。 4. It was also said that poetry could help them release pressure.据说诗歌还 有助于缓解压力。 5. Its likely that that famous sports star will also run with the torch.很可能 那位著名的体育明星也要参加火炬接 力。 连句成篇 参考范文 Huawen Middle School in Foshan City received a group of students from Britain last week. During their one- week stay in Foshan, the students experienced the campus life of Chinese students. They also visited some places of interest in Foshan and learned about the local culture. The British students were impressed by the kindness of Chinese students, cleanness of the city and niceness of food. At the invitation of a British school, 38 students in Huawen Middle School are to set for Britain for an exchange visit next March. 假设你是英文早报的兼职小记 者, 伦敦组委会公布了奥运火炬传递的 路线, 你将为这一事件进行报道, 以下是 报道的内容。 基本情况伦敦奥组委员会公布伦敦奥运火炬传递路线 公布时间11月7日 具体详情1. 途经多个著名景点 2. 历经1000多个村庄， 城镇和城市 3. 6200多万英国人中的95%的人口都可以目睹 4. 历时70天 5. 在温德米尔湖火炬在汽船(steamboat)上传播, 在 泰晤士(the Thames)河在划艇(rowboat)上传播, 在某 处还会在马上传播 火炬传递者 8000名, 大多数是普通的公众, 但也可能有著名球星, 如:贝克汉姆 写作内容 参考词汇：伦敦奥组委员 the London Organizing Committee of the Olympic Games 火炬传递 Torch Relay温德米尔 Lake Windermere As is reported, the London Organizing Committee of the Olympic Games released the route of the London 2010 Olympic Torch Relay on November 7. The Olympic Torch will visit some of Britains best-known tourist spots, covering 1, 000 villages, towns and cities across the country and reaching more than 95% of Britains 62 million population. The 70-day torch relay will be carried in a steamboat across Lake Windermere, on a rowboat on the Thames, and on horseback elsewhere. According to the Committee, most of the 8, 000 torchbearers will be ordinary members of the public, but its likely th