英语高考前辅导d.doc

山东英语高考满分150分，客观一卷105分，由机器阅卷，剩余的45分是主观二卷，共两道大题，一是阅读表达（15分），二是写作（30分）那么同学们在写作中还需要注意什么问题呢？第一，注意语句的流畅性。“得分容易，得高分难”是这次阅卷的特点（大约3000多份考卷中得25分以上的不超过百人），突出语言灵活运用。通常，同学们都会写齐要点，现在随着强调语言运用的能力，披卷时越来越注意越强调篇章的流畅性。何谓流畅性？就是象我们写语言作文时一样，注意用词巧妙句式灵活过渡自然等等，使得这篇文章有血有肉很鲜活，而不是单纯地要点翻译，非常干涩单调，干巴巴的只剩下骨头很生硬。所以，孩子们一定要在平常的练习中注重动词的使用；同时使用形容词、副词，使文章生动形象；适当使用强调句、非限制性定语从句、主语从句；注意过渡的词句；再加上平常使用的并列句等等，这就是一篇好文章。第二点，注意篇章结构。通常分为三到四段，首尾段一定要点题，虎头豹尾同样适用在英文写作中，比如，结束段用强调句就有加强语气的作用，中间段落一定要有主题句，这使得文章结构很有条理性，让阅卷老师有清晰的感觉，对咱分数有益。第三点，注意书写。批卷老师的时间是有限的，他们不可能象在学校里给学生面批作文一样，做到细致入微，在批卷的过程中，有任务量有压力，所以他们在尽可能好的阅卷的同时，客观因素也能影响阅卷老师的批阅工作，其中，书写和卷面就是主要的因素。如果书写不公整，势必会给老师带来辨认的麻烦，但在任务重辨别难的情况下，往往直接被判错，本来很好的一篇文章就这么被“葬送”了。想想以为老师每天的任务是500多份考卷，计算他的速度有多快。我曾经和学生做过试验，给大家15秒钟，能看多少文字，给大家30秒能看多少文字，给大家45秒学生们深刻体会到了书写好坏对审阅工作的影响。孩子们，练好字是必须的，每次写字的时候，把给的那条线当作第三条，有一个标准，字显得整齐一些。我经历过网上阅卷，当拿到电子版的写作后，在电脑上能看到的除了你的字你的文章之外，什么都没有，连原试卷中的横线都没有，那种情况下有些字就开始东倒西歪了。当因为书写扣分的时候，孩子们不要怪老师，因为老师实在看不清辨不明，为了自己，也得练好字写好字，最起码要做到工整。(一)阅读表达（共5小题，每小题3分，满分15分）1 Dont stare. Chew with your mouth closed. Manner minding is expected everywhere, at school, work, home, and even the Internet. What is netiquette? Its network etiquette(礼仪), a set of rules for behaving properly online.2 Its easy to misunderstandWhen you communicate online, all you see is a computer screen. You cant use facial expressions, gestures, or tone of voice; words are the only information. Its easy to misunderstand others meanings and forget that they are real peoplejust like you!3 Look good onlineNetworks let you reach out to people youd otherwise never meet. And none of them can see you. You wont be judged by the color of your skin, eyes or hair, your weight, your age, or your clothing. You will, however, be judged by the quality of your writing. So spelling, grammar, and content reallymatter.4 Share expert knowledgeThe reason why asking questions online works is that a lot of knowledgeable people are reading the questions. If you ask a question, its polite to share the answers with others. Ifyoure an expert yourself, _. Its a long-time net tradition, and it makes the network a better place.5 Forgive mistakesEveryone was a green hand at network once. So when someone makes a mistake, whether its a spelling error or a stupid question, be kind about it. If you do decide to inform someone of a mistake, point it out politely.66. What is the text mainly about? (no more than 10 words)_67. Why is it easy to misunderstand others meanings online? (no more than 17 words)_68. List three things to judge the quality of ones writing online.(no more than 5 words)_69. Fill in the blank in paragraph 4 with proper words.(no more than 6 words)_70. Explain the underlined sentence in paragraph 5. _第二节：写作（满分30分）加拿大高中生Tom在互联网上登出启示。希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言、文化。假设你是李华，请在看到这则启示后，用英文给Tom 发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括： 1有幸得知Tom愿望；2. 愿意成为他的朋友；2. 打算如何帮助他；3. 期待他的回复。Dear Tom,I am Li Hua.(二)阅读表达1 Are you a bookworm? Is your head permanently stuck in a book? If so，thats a good thingThere are many benefits to readingGetting into a good novel improves our literacy (读写能力)But who or what encourages us to pick up a book and start reading? 2 Of course，when we are young，our parents and teachers inspire us by introducing us to characters that we loveor love to hateAnd there are the authorsthe people who invent and write about these charactersGood writing can really capture our imagination3 One modernday childrens author is JKRowling，whos known for her books about the wizard，Harry PotterLast year she was named as a literacy hero for her part in improving peoples love of readingThe UKs National Literacy Trust awarded her the title for“turning a generation of children into readers”4 The Trust also honoured schoolchildren，a librarian and teachers for their effort in trying to get people to readThe actor，Henry Winkler，who has dyslexia，was also named for the books he has written about a boy with learning difficulties5Reading books is more than an enjoyable pastime；it can also help people in difficult circumstancesThe author Pat Winslow worked as a writer in prisons and found reading and discussing stories helped prisoners reflect on their patterns of behaviourShe says “Very often we would have discussions about the moral compass of a character，what was the motivation of somebody，why did they behave that way?”6But the main benefit of reading is the improvement it brings to our literacy_，the better we get and who knowsone day you may become the next Tolstoy，Jackie Collins or even William Shakespeare66What does the author think of good writing?(no more than 10 words)_67Why was the author JKRowling called a literacy hero?(no more than 10 words)_Complete the following statement with words from Paragraph4(no more than 3 words) Henry Winkler was wellknown as a literacy hero for the book about a boy who suffered from_.69Whats the main idea of Paragraph 5?(no more than 10 words)_70Fill in the blank in the last paragraph with proper words(no more than 6 words) _第二节写作(满分30分)假如你是某校学生李华，马年到来之际，你的美国朋友Tom来信祝你快乐，并请你谈谈中国人对马的认识，请你根据以下提示给他写一封回信：1马在生活中的作用，如：在交通、农业方面；2马的优良品质，如：活力、毅力、智慧等；3表达你对Tom的祝福，并询问美国人对马的认识。注：1词数120150；开头、结尾已给出，不计入词数。2参考词汇：马年the Year of the Horse；vigor活力；persistence毅力Dear Tom，Thank you for your letter and greetings（三） 阅读表达 (共5小题;每小题3分,满分15分) 1 William Butler Yeats, a most famous Irish writer, was born in Dublin on June 13, 1865. His childhood lacked the harmony that was typical of a happy family. Later, Yeats shocked his family by saying that he remembered little of childhood but its pain. In fact, he inherited (继承) excellent taste in art from his family both his father and his brother were painters. But he finally settled on literature, particularly drama and poetry. 2 Yeats had strong faith in coming of new artistic movements. He set himself the fresh task in founding an Irish national theatre in the late 1890s. His early theatrical experiments, however, were not received favorably at the beginning. He didnt lose heart, and finally enjoyed success in his poetical drama. 3 Compared with his dramatic works, Yeatss poems attract much admiring notice. The subject matter includes love, nature, history, time and aging. Though Yeats generally relied on very traditional forms, he brought modern sensibility to them. As his literary life progressed, his poetry grew finer and richer, which led him to worldwide recognition. 4 He had not enjoyed a major public life since winning the Nobel Prize in 1923. Yet, he continued writing almost to the end of his life. _, he would probably now be valued as a minor (不重要的) poet, for there is no other example in literary history of a poet who produces his greatest works between the ages of 50 and 75. After Yeatss Death in 1939, W. H. Auden wrote, among others, the following lines: Earth, receive an honored guest: William Yeats is laid to rest. Let the Irish vessel (船) lie Emptied of its poetry. 66. What does the first paragraph mainly tell us? (no more than 10 words )_67. Explain the underlined sentence in paragraph 2. ( no more than 10 words)_68. What does the underlined word them in paragraph 3 refer to? ( no more than 5 words)_69. Fill in the blanks in the last paragraph with proper words (no more than 10 words)_70. What can you learn from Yeats as a writer? (no more than 10 words) _第二节：写作 (满分30分)假如你是李华，学校学生会主席。为办好学校今年的英语周，你写信给以前的外教Tom 征求意见，信的内容包括以下几个方面： 询问Tom 现在的工作和生活情况；介绍 学校英语周 活动打算（如：英语演讲比赛等）;请Tom 给出建议。阅读表达(共5小题；每题3分，满分15分)66. Its about some rules for behaving properly online67. Because you cant use facial expressions, gestures, or tone of voice and words are the only information.68. spelling, grammar, and content69. share your knowledge(with others/ other people)70. Everyone had no experience at network in the beginning. / Everyone lacked experience at network for a time.第二节：写作(满分30分) One Possible Version:Dear Tom, I am Li Hua. I am lucky to read your notice on the Internet and know that you have a strong desire to make friends with a Chinese in order to learn about the Chinese language and culture. It would be a pleasure for me if I could become your friend.Being a friend of yours, I am willing to help you learn more about China. Firstly, I will make you have a better understanding of Chinese culture by sending emails. Whats more, Im fluent in both Chinese and English. As a result, I will teach you Chinese by chatting on the internet. The last but not least, if it is convenient to you, please come to China for a visit. I will show you around many places of interest.I hope we can keep in touch with each other. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerelyLi Hua66. Good writing can really ca