2014高考英语二轮限时高效训练短文改错24.doc

2014高考英语二轮限时高效训练：短文改错241.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Thanksgiving Day is one of the most important family holiday in America. All the members of a family ，no matter where far away they are ，will try to get together in that day. The first Thanksgiving in America takes place in October 1621. In 1620， the group of Englishmen sailed to Massachusetts. They were looking for a freely place to live in as they chose. So they experienced a hard winter. Half of them starved death. The next spring ，they began farming. With the help of local Indians ，they learned to be plant corn and raise animals. In the fall ，the fields produced a good harvest. Filling with joy and thanks to God ，they held a celebration. In 1863，it became a national holiday.2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）花掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第1处起）不计分。A few years before, Jack and I had a quarrel over score in a football match. From then on, we didnt speak to each other any longer. One day, when I was standing by a tree read, a ball flew to me and I kicked it back with looking at the player, but while I put up my head, I found it was Jack. Seen him, I was feeling very embarrassed. However, he was smiled to me, so I smiled either. Then we began to make up. This way the walls between us were torn down with a smile but we become good friends again. 3.假设你叫李华，是新浪微博（sina microblog）的一名实名注册用户。最近你在网上看了一部经典的电影阿甘正传（Forrest Gump），觉得很值得一看，并在微博中向广大博友推荐该部影片。观看影片：阿甘正传；出品年份：1994年；主演：Tom Hanks，获六项奥斯卡大奖内容介绍：阿甘（Forrest Gump）用乐观的态度，面对生活中不确定的因素带来的各种挑战和困难推荐理由：1、树立了一个好榜样，激励我们勇敢面对挑战，永不放弃,对我们高三学生很有指导意义； 2、观看英文影片有利于提高我们英语的听说水平，帮助我们了解更多的外国文化。建议：博友们介绍几部自己最欣赏的电影，相互交流【写作内容】 根据以上内容要点，用英语写一篇微博推荐该影片，写作要点：1. 向大家推荐这部制作于1994年的经典影片； 2. 推荐的理由；3. 向博友们建议。参考词汇： 奥斯卡Oscar【写作要求】 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。 开头已为你写好。 4.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分Last summer , I had a unforgettable experience. It happened on my uncles farm which there are many flowers. In a Saturday morning, we heard a great noise coming outside. Looking out the window, I saw a mass of bees flown above the farm. There were too many bees that the whole farm seemed dark.We were very frightening. For some moments, the bees advanced our house. My uncle were draggedme into the back room which was very dark. We covered us with a blanket, shaking with fear. A few hours later,we came out of the back room and found the bees had flown away.5.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分Once there lived a boy was very fond of reading. But he was so poor to buy any books. So she had to borrow them from a rich man lived far away. The boy always tried hard to finish read the books and returned it to the owner within the given time. So the rich man was willing to lend him any of the books he wanted. In this way he read a lot of and late became a well-known writer of his time. So, the rich mans son who dont like to study remained a man with little knowledge.6.下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在该句下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realized my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. now whenever I am close to lose my patience, Ill think of this experience.试卷答案1.Thanksgiving Day is one of the most important family holiday in America. All the holidaysmembers of a family，no matter where far away they are，will try to get together howin that day. 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In the movie, Mr. Gump sets us a good example to face challenges bravely and never to give up, which is instructive to us Senior 3 students. Besides, watching English movies is good to improve our listening and speaking skills in English and it can also help us learn more foreign culture. My dear bloggers, I suggest we each recommend several movies so that we can share our favourite.4.Last summer , I had a unforgettable experience. It happened on my uncles farm which there are an where(或which前on) many flowers. In a Saturday morning, we heard a great noise coming outside. Looking outthe On ofwindow,I saw a mass of bees flown above the farm. There were too many bees that the whole farm flying soseemed dark.We were very frightening. For some moments, the bees advancedour house. My frightened towards/on uncle were dragged me into the back room which was very dark. We covered us with a blanket, 去掉 ourselvesshaking with fear. 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