初中英语作文写作指导.ppt

英语写作指导,中考作文命题方向,1、近年来中考作文题目： 03年：To be a lovely Shanghainese 04年：Leaving school 05年：Growing pains and gains 06年：I have a dream 07年：Things I hate to do 1)贴近学生生活（使得考生有话可写） 2)有时代感 3）写作手法夹叙夹议，着重写自己感受，纯粹议论和记叙不多见,家庭生活作文题材,第一类:（以下题材应以记叙为主） My mother(father)（写人） My flat(neighbourhood)（写地方） My favourite present(写物） A birthday party/ A trip to(写事情） 第二类:（以下题材应夹叙夹议，着重写自己感受） My family life My thanks to my mother(my father) 第三类（以下题材应以议论为主） How to spend pocket money The importance of breakfast The advantages of doing housework,学校生活作文题材,第一类: My teacher(friend, classmate) My school 第二类: My hobby/My My dream/My school life 第三类: My view on exams The advantages of after-school activities Homework/Sports/Reading Is it necessary to wear school uniforms My good (bad) study habits 第四类: A football match/An interesting lesson,社会热点话题,The Olympics and I (2008 and I ) Being a lovely Shanghainese for the World Expo in 2010 My view on online games Mobile phones at school Its easy to be green Is a family teacher necessary Is it necessary to have a net-pal,学生作文失分原因分析,-内容： 1）偏题甚至离题如: FriendMy friend My family lifeMy family,2）素材(例子)问题 A: 没有典型性,不切合题目 B: 缺乏说服力,难以支持个人的观点 3) 意思重复、文章思路混乱缺乏层次感,语法- 1）名词的单复数前后不统一 Exams are necessary because it helps improve ourselves in many ways. 2）时态、语态、主谓不一致 Having family teachers are very common among students. 3）副词位置或选用不当 We also can do something for our parents to show our thanks .,4)表达随意,中国式英语比比皆是 There are a large number of tourists visit Shanghai every year. 5）语言表达繁琐或生硬 Ill try my best to study hard. I want to get good marks. (建议用in order to 连接) To buy things on line makes our life more convenient.(用Shopping on line),Endless homework lets me have little time to do things I like. -Endless homework always keeps me too busy to do things I like. -I have little time to do things I like because of endless homework.,写话常见体裁,初中阶段的写作体裁主要包括记叙文、议论文和应用文。,记叙文的训练包括记人、叙事、写景状物。教师要帮助学生分析不同类型文章的写作规律。,记人 ( My best friend) 文章可通过介绍人物的年龄、外貌、职业、爱好、 学习工作等方面来展现人物鲜明的个性。 (叙述的原则是从外到内）,叙事： ( An interesting lesson) 文章需要交代以下五个要素，Who、When、Where、What、How,写景状物 A：写物(A nice present) B：写景( My home town) be located in / has a history of/be famous for/ attract /It is not surprising thatvisit /hope.,应用文: 应用文的写作形式有书信、日记、报告、便条、通知、倡议书、电子邮件等。首先要理清不同形式的写作格式，然后分析写作的具体内容。,夹叙夹议文体： 1)My childhood 2) A problem Ive ever had B: 1)I am proud of_ 2) _ is special to me,议论文（纯粹） A:支持(正面） - Breakfast/Sports B:反对（反面） - Fast food/Online games AB: 一分为二型(正反两方面） -My view on exams/Family teachers,写作技巧,仔细审题，吃透要求 明确内容，把握要点 语言地道，表达恰当 仔细检查，认真修改,写作模式(以议论体裁为例),开头,必须简明直接，亮出自己的观点，如提倡什么，支持什么，反对什么,也可以借用社会现象引出自己观点,开头的几种方法,主体段,结尾,呼应开头、避免重复句型,提升主题,展望,号召,建议,感悟,教学生列提纲,Is a family teacher necessary,depend on a family teacher- cant listen to teachers attentively in class-work less efficiently,waste money,reasons,waste time - take a lot of time of ones weekend-do the same kind of excises -have little time to review other subjects,Suggestions-work hardimprove ways of learning instead of having a family teacher,conclusion,My view on exams,be fair to everyone,to know how we learn /if we learn well/what we are poor at-change or improve our ways of study (teaching),Show our abilities/ win more confidence (become more confident),Important part of school life/ learn a lot from mistakes through exams,necessity,conclusion,realize the importance of exams be not everything,收集写作素材,A:了解一些新闻人物，如刘翔、姚明等 B:积累生活中让人难忘、激动的事件 C:关注社会热点，如北京奥运、上海世博等 D:了解时事新闻 E: 体会学生佳作中有效素材及出彩语句 E: 利用好手头有效的教辅材料，英文报，选取好的议论文体裁、题材多样的文章，选取精彩语段或语句进行背诵，积累好句，同时拓展学生思路,常用的衔接词,1、引出文章： nowadays , It is adj.to do 、I think, as we all know 2、承接上文：also/too、 of course、in fact、in other words 、besides、in addition、whats more、furthermore、more importantly 3、转折： however , yet, though/although ,but, 4、举例：for example (跟句子）,such as（短语） 5、因果：therefore、That is to say 6、对比： while, on the other hand. 7、总结： for these reasons, generally, in a word ，as the famous saying goes(如以下著名的谚语所说）,介绍多种表达法,1)Reading is fun. 2)Reading is enjoyable. 3)Reading is a pleasure. 4)Reading makes us happy. 5)Reading brings /offers us a lot of fun. 6)It is fun to do some reading . 7)We can get great fun by reading.(from books) 9)Nothing can be more interesting and helpful than reading 8)Reading provides not only knowledge but also fun with us. 10)What other way can be more relaxing and enjoyable than reading!,常用的谚语,A friend in need is a friend indeed. (写朋友） All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.（写如何享受生活） Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.（养成生活好习惯） Where there is a will, there is a way.（写志向） Its never too late to lear