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高中英语写作课How to develop a contrast(对比) essay:高中英语写作课 Teaching Design for writing from reading年级高二学科英语教师张新彩课程名称Writing from reading学时1具体学习内容How to develop a contrast essay课 型writing学习内容分析本节课是按照新大纲，高考的要求和根据学生的实际水平设计的，有针对性的引导学生在写作中更好的切合要求，形成规范，有助于教师与学生今后更好的开展备考的工作与学习。以最为常见的对比性议论文入手，旨在让学生初步形成规范。课前让学生了解对比性文章的特征。课中对学生进行详细指导，让他们明确如何对比，如何衔接成文。课后设计了相关的练习，让学生巩固写作本类型文章。学习者分析1.学生已积累了一定的基础知识和写作经验，但是作为普通高中学校的学生，他们的基础不够扎实。2.学生对各类别的写作尤其是对比性议论文写作还不是很熟悉，有待形成规范。3.刚刚进入高二，学生还不大会整理写作信息。教学目标知识与技能：1. 学习和掌握对比性文章的常用表达。2. 初步学习整理信息。能力目标：1. 把握对比性文章的写作结构，从而形成规范。2. 在写作中能正确运用所学词汇与句型表达写作材料。情感目标：通过自主学习和小组讨论，培养学生自主学习和合作学习，培养合作、交流与分享的良好习惯教学重点学会比性文章的写作结构；整理写作信息教学难点避免中文式的表达。教学方法Task-based teaching and learning; co-operative learning; 教学媒体The multi-media and blackboard教学流程教学环节和内容活动目标Pre-class Pre-class reading is a passage named Living in the city or countryside.Get the Ss to finish task 1 and task 2 so that they can know about what is a contrast essay.促进学生自主学习与合作学习，了解什么是对比性文章，为课堂学习扫除部分障碍。While-class. RevisionShow pictures of city and countryside and ask the students whether they like living in the city and the country and tell the reason.Check thepre-class reading exercises. Lead-inLead the Ss to the writing strategy on how to develop a contrast(对比) essay according to task two.1. Write a title if needed. Be sure your title lets the reader know the two things youll be contrasting.2. Write an introduction.Briefly tell your reader about the two things youll be contrasting.3. Body. Discuss your topic, using words or phrases that show contrast, such as however, but on the other hand, etc.4. Conclusion. Be careful not to repeat ideas that you have already discussed in your essay. Ask yourself: what do I want my reader to remember?.Presentation Making a composition.1. Get the Ss to tell which kind of teachers they prefer and their reasons.2. Ss discuss and express the information on the Bb. Practice1. Students individual writing, using the skills learned above according to the task.2. Students discuss and display samples, giving comments and grades. 3. The teacher gives some comments. 4. Appreciate a model sample.Post-class assignment1. Share their compositions with their partners and help each other to find out the mistakes and give some suggestions to each other. 2. Finish another composition 了解对比性文章的特点及常用的表达。 整体把握对比性文章的结构。 引导学生组合信息，应用所学的结构和表达来写作 形成一篇完整的文章。明确作文的评分标准。 巩固所学内容Self-assessmentsSs learn how to grade from the chart access themselves.让学生反思本节课的收获和有待改进之处。教学反思学生学习教师教学 Writing from reading: paper for students (学案) How to develop a contrast(对比) essay:Pre-class reading (课前阅读):Task One:Fill in the blanks according to the following material.Passage ALiving in the city or living in the countryside？Nowadays, people are often asked, “Would you like to live in the city or live in the countryside?” This makes them puzzled and unable to give a specific(具体的) answer. In fact, living in the city and living in the countryside are completely different lifestyles.Take living in the city for example; the public transportation services there are very convenient. Taxis, buses and the subway can quickly take people anywhere they want inside or outside the city. Also people enjoy the entertainment and the goods of the city. There are many public places for entertainment, such as parks, cinemas and nightclubs(夜总会). Shops and supermarkets are well stocked(备有) with goods of all kinds, high in quality and low in price. Third, some people like to live in the city for its fast pace(节奏) of life.Compared to living in the city, though public transportation services are not good in the countryside, you dont have to stand the noise, traffic jams(堵塞) and pollution that people in the city experience. Though the countryside provides fewer entertaining places and supermarkets, it is close to nature. Fresh air, green hills, and beautiful flowers are here and there. Third, the pace of life in the countryside is much slower and people are more open and friendly.The decision, whether city life is better or country life is better, really depends on peoples different point of view. However, the best lifestyle would have to be the lifestyle that meets ones needs.Organization of the text:（阅读文章，分析文章篇章结构）IntroductionTopic: 1 BodyLiving in the cityThe 2 services are very convenient.There are many public places for 3 and goods in the city are high in 4 and low in priceSome people want to live in the city for its 5 pace of life.Living in the countrysideThere is less noise, 6 and fewer traffic jams in the countryside.Countryside is close to 7 . Fresh air, green hills, and 8 flowers are here and there.The pace of life in the countryside is 9 and people here are more open and friendly.ConclusionThe best lifestyle should be the one that 10 ones needs.总结：对比性文章用于比较分析两个人或事物的_。此类文体的常用结构模式是：在开头明确交待 ，然后各用一个段落分别说明事物之间的 ，最后进行 。Task Two: AppreciationWork with your partners to fill in the expressions to complete the passage.1._ (目前) there is a heated discussion over the issue of whether people like living in the city or living in the city. The opinions concerning this topic vary from people to people.Some people feel like living in the city. 2._(首先), the entertainment services are very convenient. 3._(其次)，there are many public places for transportation and goods in the city are high in quality and low in price. 4._（再者），some people want to live in the city for its fast pace of life.Others , 5._（然而）, differ in their opinions on this matter. 6._（在他们看来）, there is less noise, pollution and fewer traffic jams in the countryside.7._（一方面）, countryside is close to nature. Fresh air, green hills, and beautiful flowers are here and there. 8._（另一方面）, the pace of life in the countryside is slower and people here are more open and friendly.9._（在我看来），the best lifestyle should be the one that meets ones needs. 总结： 的使用使得文章连贯，一气呵成。 参考一：英语作文中部分常用的连接词(1) 表层次:first, (second, third ); firstly，(secondly, thirdly); to begin with；last but not the least, finally, whats more/worse，moreover，worse still，furthermore，besides，in addition；more importantly, etc(2) 表转折或对照at the same time，meanwhile, but，however, on the one hand, on the other hand ,instead, still, etc(3)表个人观点：in my (point of) view, in my opinion, as far as I can see，as far as Im concerned，from where I stand，as for me, etc.自我评价1:我最擅长的连接词有： 我还可以补充一些连接词： While-class (课中学习)Task Three:观察与学习 对比性文章写作攻略1. 体裁格式: 2. 主题时态: 3. 中心人称: 4.对比性文章结构1.Write if needed .Be sure your title lets the reader know the two things youll be contrasting.2.Write an .Briefly tell your reader about the two things youll be contrasting.3. .Discuss your topic, using words or phrases that show contrast.4. .Be careful not to repeat ideas that you have already discussed in your essay. Ask yourself: what do I want my reader to remember?参考二：描述对比类文章常用的模板:When it comes to _, some of the people will choose to _ while others want to _.Some people think that_，firstly_, secondly_,Other people, however, believe that_, besides_, more importantly_In my opinion, _, because_,习作：最近，你们班级进行了“年青教师和中年教师，你喜欢哪一类老师”的话题讨论，请把讨论结果和你的观点写一篇英文报道。字数100字左右.观点喜欢年青老师喜欢中年老师你的看法？ 理由 1年龄相仿，有共同话题；2.有活力和创意 1有丰富的教学经验；2知识面广；3.善于组织；?写作内容1. 讨论的时间、对象和内容。2. 讨论的结果。3. 你的看法。写前热身1中年（教师） 2（年龄）相仿 3有共同话题 4经验 5知识 6组织 1. 与同学互相修正作文，评分标准请看参考二。2. 欣赏范文，并欣赏好词好句。3. 完成自我评价 参考三：评分标准参考。项目(items) 分数内容完整性(completeness)54321句子结构正确性（语法、单词拼写）(correctness)43.5321句子结构复杂性(complexity)43.5321篇章连贯（句子、语意）(consistence)21.510.50卷面整洁（主观因素）可直接影响档次A (13-15) B(10-12) C(7-9) D(4-6) E(0-3) 自我评价2：我属于 级。 我的优点是： 我有待改进的是： Post-class assignment(课后作业)Task Four:你在广州电视台参加了一次谈话节目，主题是电子书是否会取代传统书。观点电子书会取代传统书电子书不会取代传统书你的看法？ 理由 1人们容易快捷查找到他们想要的书，节约了宝贵时间2.方便携带。3.节约大量的纸张。 1对眼睛没有伤害。2读传统书时，可以随时在书上做笔记。3.多数人认为看传统书才感觉是真正的读书。? 写作内容1. 介绍人们的不同观点2. 你的看法。注意：1. 开头已为你写好 2.词数120左右(开头部分不算)。写前热身1.电子书：e-books 2.传统书：traditional paper books 3方便 4伤害 5.做笔记： We had a discussion over whether e-books will replace the traditional paper books on a TV program Keys:Task one:1.Living in the city or living in the countryside? 2. transportation 3.entertainment 4. quality 5. fast 6. pollution 7. nature 8. beautiful 9. slower 10. meets 对比性文章用于比较分析两个人或事物的异同。此类文体的常用结构模式是：在开头明确交待所要比较的对象，然后各用一个段落分别说明事物之间的相似点和区别，最后进行总结。 Task two:1. At present 2. Firstly 3 secondly 4. Last but not least 5. however 6. In their point of view 7. On the one hand 8. On the other hand 9. As far as Im concerned At present there is a heated discussion over the issue of whether people like living in the city or living in the city. The opinions concerning this topic vary from people to people.Some people feel like living in the city. Firstly, the entertainment services are very convenient. Secondly, there are many public places for transportation and goods in the city are high in quality and low in price. Last but not least, some people want to live in the city for its fast pace of life.Others, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. In their point of view, there is less noise, pollution and fewer traffic jams in the countryside.On the one hand, countryside is close to nature. Fresh air, green hills, and beautiful flowers are here and there.On the other hand, the pace of life in the countryside is slower and people here are more open and friendly.As far as Im concerned，the best lifestyle should be the one that meets ones needs.（171words）Task three:Recently, we had a discussion about “what kind of teacher do you like, young or middle-aged?” in our class.The result shows that some students prefer young teacher, saying that they are of similar age so they have a lot in common. Besides, most of the young teachers are energetic and creative. Other students, however, are fond of middle-aged teachers, claim