高考书面表达写作原则.ppt

书面表达系列讲练（2） 三部分原则,Dear Helen, I am writing this letter in response to your advertisement. I am a girl of the same age with you. And I come from a happy and warm family, which includes my father, my mother, my sister and me. I am studying in a key school far from my hometown, but I never regretted for my own choice, for the life here is very colorful and challenging. I am interested in stamp collection and I have colleted more than three thousand stamps. I also like swimming, playing tennis and some other sports. I wish that one day we could be good friends. Yours Truly, Wang Lin,第 一 部 分,第 二 部 分,第 三 部 分,给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,Heading 点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性;书信体开门见山 2. Body 中心记述部分；层次分明 3. Ending 小结；呼应主题,怎样写开头（第一段）,请你给中国日报写一篇稿件，谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法。 原因： 1、 家庭贫穷，供不起儿童上学，他们不得不在家赚钱 2、部分家长认为女孩上学无用，不愿让她们上学。 3、 部分儿童对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。 看法： 1、 每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会。 2、全社会都应重视儿童教育，他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用。,怎样写开头（第一段）,Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. There are different kinds of reasons why country children can t go to school. As is known to all, many children in the country are out of school today, which results from various causes. Nowadays, more and more attention is paid to the country children out of school. 5. In the country, many children cant go to school today.,精彩回放,常用开头语句,As far as .is concerned, . . . It goes without saying that. As the proverb goes that every coin has two sides. Different people hold different opinions. People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem. People who are for/against the idea think Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. There are several reasons that account for ,Practice: 怎样写开头（第一段）,假如你是李华, 你的美国朋友Alice听说中国的中小学正在实施素质教育, 来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写封回信，谈一谈“素质教育”实施后你们学校生活发生的变化。,注意： 1、写信日期为2004年2月20日； 2、词数：100左右； 3、注意书信格式。,怎样写开头（第一段）,Dear Alice, How nice to hear from you. You want to know what is going on in schools in China? Now, I will tell you about it.,二班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目是：学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始？请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。(2004湖北卷 ),怎样写开头（第一段）,The students of Class 2 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. Actually, different persons hold different opinions.,怎样写开头（第一段）,I always thought English was easy to learn. However, what happened to me this evening changed my idea.,怎样写记事部分（Body),逻辑清晰; 关联词语恰当 层次分明 尽可能的使用较复杂的语句。如定语从句、各种状语从句等。 尽可能的使语句多样化。如倒装句、强调句、感叹句、分词及短语等。 尽可能的长短句搭配。,For one thing, some families are too poor to afford their children to go to school. As a result, they have to make money to help their parents to support the families. For another, part of the parents believe that its no good sending their daughters to school, in which case they would rather do their sons. Last but not least, some children find their schooling too dull to attract their interest. Therefore, they are unwilling to waste any time at school,怎样写结尾 1.总结性 2.概括性 3.呼应主题 4.自己观点,In my opinion, each child, including girls, should have the rights and opportunities to receive proper education, to which the whole society ought to pay more attention, for they are the future of our nation. 2. I think every child should go to school. The society should pay attention to it, because they are the builders of our future. 3. Our society should make sure that they go to school, not only boys, but also girls.,精彩回放,结尾常用语句: We can draw the conclusion that In my opinion/Personally, In short/ in brief/ in a word, Its clear from the chart that The results seem to suggest that Therefore, we have the reason to believe that. All things considered, it can be concluded from the discussion that. It can be concluded from the chartdata that.,Practice: 怎 样 写 结 尾,假如你是李华, 你的美国朋友Alice听说中国的中小学正在实施素质教育, 来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写封回信，谈一谈“素质教育”实施后你们学校生活发生的变化。,注意： 1、写信日期为2004年2月20日； 2、词数：100左右； 3、注意书信格式。,怎样写结尾,In one word, I am rather satisfied with our school life today. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua,二班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目是：学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始？请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。(2004湖北卷 ),怎样写结尾,In short , the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.,怎样写结尾,What a stupid mistake I made! From now on, Im determined t