广东省广州市天河区2019高考英语二轮复习书面表达01专题训练（含解析）.docx

书面表达01一为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1表示理解并给予安慰；2提出建议并说明理由。注意：1词数120左右；2信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪Hi Worried，Im sorry to know that youre having such a had time at the moment. Yours,Jamie【考点】考察半开放性作文【写作指导】本文属于半开放性作文，要为你编辑Jamie的口吻回复Worried的求助信，他的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。要点：1.很遗憾听说对方有此问题。并解释每个人都可能会遇见这样的问题，所以不必担心。只有的是要学会控制自己的脾气。2.提出建议：与信任的人进行交流，告诉别人你的困扰，释放自己的压力。同时多参加各种户外活动，和朋友多玩球类运动。保持乐观的心态。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【一句多译】每个人都会有过这样的一段时期，在这时情况都很糟糕，所以你不要太担心了。（1）The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont have to worry much.（2）It is true that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont have to worry much.【参考范文】Hi Worried,Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont have to worry much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret. Here are three useful tips:First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your ftiends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours,Jamie二.第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35 分） (15分) 你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括： 1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。注意： 1.词数不少于50. 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Chris,_Yours,Joe【考点】考察提纲类作文【写作指导】本文属于应用文中的书信，要求写信给英国朋友Chris说明取消计划的原因并建议推测旅行至8月份。以第一人称为主。要点：1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。【一句多译】我可以建议把旅行推迟到8月份早些时候吗？（1）Can I suggest that we put it off until early august?（2）Would you mind if we we put it off until early august?【参考范文】Dear Chris,How is everything going?I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now bucause my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.Im sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early august? I wish you could understand. Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours, Joe第二节（20 分）假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。注意：1. 词数不少于 60. 2. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.【考点】考察看图作文【写作指导】本文属于看图作文。叙述的是李华和同学们向学校建议解决自行车存放的问题。属于记叙文，使用第一人称和一般过去时。要点：1.在自行车存放处前面，我看见很多人都拥挤在一起；2.找到几个同学一起讨论具体解决方法。3.找到校长提出建议；4.校方采纳建议，多开了一个进出的门。看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局。要求考生把看到的图画用文字表达出来，除了能表达清楚图画中的信息外，考生还需要根据词数要求，适当拓展并发挥想象，从而使文章的叙述不单调。如果是记叙文类的写作素材，考生要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、过程、结果这六个要素。【一句多译】在我们学校自行车存放处有一个长久以来就存在的问题。（1）There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school（2）The parking place for bikes was an existing problem for a long time in our school。【参考范文】One possible version There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school, I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggfestions. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there.三.第二节 书面表达(满分25分) 一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文、家庭工作业余生活注意：1、次数100左右； 2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好I often imagine what my life will be like in the future._【考点】考察半开放性作文【写作指导】本文的话题是“十年后的我”，要求考生从家庭、工作和业余生活来想象十年以后的自己。文章应该使用将来时和第一人称。要点：1.十年以后的生活和现在是完全不一样，我会成为一个成年人，有了自己的家庭，甚至有了可爱的孩子。2.希望自己能够在自己喜欢的计算机行业工作，做一个程序设计师。工作顺利和同事相处融洽。3.在业余生活中经常参加锻炼，如游泳，登山等等。假期里出去旅游，生活多姿多彩。本文要求考生充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【一句多译】我希望我可以在一家电脑公司里做程序设计师。（1）I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer.（2）I hope I will work in a company which produces computer, and I can design some kinds of very good computer。【参考范文】one Possible Version I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.四.第二节 书面表达（满分25分）如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。 “Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm. - Sir Winston, Churchill 内容要求： 1你对该引语的理解： 2你的相关经历： 3恰当的结尾。 注意： 1短文开头已给出，不计入总词数： 2文中不能出现考生的具体信息： 3词数：120左右。 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that _.【考点】考察开放性作文【写作指导】本文属于开放性作文，要求考生根据丘吉尔的名言“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.发表自己的理解，并举例说明。属于议论文的一种，主要使用第三人称和一般现在时。在讲述各人经历时可以使用过去时。要点：1.该名言告诉我们：面对失败，我们不应该泄气，相反我们应该鼓足勇气充满热情继续努力。2.各人经历：学习骑自行车的例子。3.如果我们不尝试，我们就不可能成功，最重要的是我们要坚持下去。本文对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。【一句多译】回顾这一切，我感觉如果我失去信心，我就不能学会骑自行车了。（1）Looking back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.（2）When I looked back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike If I had lost heart.【参考范文】This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldnt get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures. At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better. Looking back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Actually, we cant succeed in everything we try. Whats important is that we should stick at it.五.第一节 基础习作你接受一项写作任务，要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道。写作内容请根据以下信息写一篇英文报道，内容包括：人物：英国人查理德阿维斯（Richard Avis）出生日期：1974年12月1日时间：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义相关信息： 借助当地媒体寻找 迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家 职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等 计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人 打算根据此经历写一本书 同年同月同日生的人：time twin写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【考点】考察提纲类短文【写作指导】本文属于提纲类短文，叙述寻找同年同月同日生的人的Richard Avis所做事情的具体信息。使用第三人称和一般现在时为主（在叙述过去发生的事情时使用一般过去时）。要点：人物：英国人查理德阿维斯（Richard Avis）出生日期：1974年12月1日；时间：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人；目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义：借助当地媒体寻找；迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家；职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等；计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人；打算根据此经历写一本书提纲类书面表达主要特点是：要点明确，范围具体，贴近生活，易于动笔。此类试题中有较多的文字说明，实际上规定了考生表述的思路，对考生的写作范围作了较为明确的限定，试题中规定的要点一个也不能回避。考生极易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和语汇上的单调，因此平时要多练习，活用语言，使文章流畅。【一句多译】借助当地媒体寻找；迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家；职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等；（1）With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females. Their positions include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on.（2）With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females, including government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on.【参考范文】Richard Avis, a British, was born on December 1st, 1974. In order to understand the meaning of successful life in different cultures, Richard, from 2011, began to seek time twins around the world. With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females. Their positions include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on. Richard intends to find 40 time twins before his birthday and he is going to write a book based on this experience.第二节 读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Oseola McCarty spent more than 75 years washing and ironing other peoples clothes. As a laundrywoman, she was paid only a few dollars each time. Certainly nobody would consider her rich, so they were all amazed when Miss McCarty decided to donate $ 150,000 to the University of Southern Mississippi.The money was i me savings. She could save such a large amount of money because she lived a very simple life. She never learned to drive, and when she wanted to go somewhere, she just walked. She never flew to anywhere till the donation（捐助），and in 50 years she had been out of the South only once. The house in which she li