（浙江专用）高考英语写作技能专题四写作模板构造完美框架第三讲即时演练课时训练（含解析）.docx

第三讲 即时演练A阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。From the first day he entered my classroom, Willard P. Frank existed in his own world, shutting out his classmates and me. My attempts at building a friendly relationship with him were met with complete indifference. I could see that his classmates fared no better. Willard was strictly a loner who seemed to have no desire or need to break his silenceShortly after the Thanksgiving holiday, we received word of the annual Christmas collection of money for the less fortunate people in our school district.“Christmas is a season of giving，”I told my students. “There are a few students in the school who might not have a happy holiday season. By contributing to our Christmas collection, you will help buy food, clothing and toys for these needy people. We will start the collection tomorrow.”When I called for the contributions the next day, I discovered that almost everyone had forgotten except for Willard P. Frank. The boy dug deep into his pants pockets as he_walked_slowly_to_my desk. Carefully, he dropped two quarters_into the small container.“I dont need milk for lunch，” he_mumbled. For a moment, just a moment, he smiled. Then he turned and walked back to his desk.That night, after school, I took our few contributions to the school principal. I couldnt help sharing the incident that had taken place.“I may be wrong, but I believe Willard might be getting ready to become a part of the world around him，” I told the principal.“Yes.” he nodded. “And we might do well to have him share a bit of his world with us. I just received a list of the poor families in our school who most need help through the Christmas collection. Here, take a look at it.”As I gazed down to read, I discovered Willard P. Frank and his family were the top names on the list. Seeing this, I decided to do_something_for_him注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：On that Sunday, I paid a visit to Willards family._Paragraph 2: The next day, I had a special class for Willard._One possible version：Paragraph 1： On that Sunday, I paid a visit to Willards family. On entering his house, I was surprised to find a barely empty room with only a broken bed and a dirty second hand sofa. Willard told me that his mother died a few years ago and that his father was missed, leaving him to live with a sick grandma. When asked why he had given the two quarters,_Willard mumbled,_“There are people poorer than me, so I just want to do some help by contributing my milk money.” Hearing his words, I couldnt help bursting into tears. I thought I should help him break his silence.Paragraph 2：The next day, I had a special class for Willard. I shared his story with the whole class and said “Now, on behalf of the people in need, I should say thank you Willard, you are great！”. After a silence, all the students clapped, saying “Willard, you are great! Willard, you are great！” and They walked_slowly_to him and hugged him tightly. A friend relationship was built and Willards silence was broken by a smile on his face.B阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。It was 8 am. Kathy, a 25yearold nurse, had just finished a 12hour night shifts at a hospital. She was tired, but glad to be sailing along highway to where she lived. Although the local government had posted a snow alert(预警), the calm grey sky convinced_Kathy the drive would be safe. “I figured Id be in bed in an hour，” she says.Snow began when she was halfway home. Listening to the radio, Kathy learned the highway was closed because a tractor had slid off the road. She texted some friends and her mom, and tried not to sleep as she waitedAfter a couple of hours, however, conditions worsened. Strong winds began rocking Kathys car. She couldnt see anything outside, and snow was drifting up her doors. It was, she says, “a total whiteout and rows of cars and trucks.”Late in the afternoon a police officer came and asked if she was in any difficulty. She said she was fine. She asked the police officer if there was any way to get past the trucks. “No, maam，” he answered. “Youre not going anywhere.”Once as it got dark, Kathy_began_to_worry. She texted his brother Cris, telling him to drive snowmobiling_buddy(雪地汽车) to get to the highway and find her.As Cris rode slowly alongside the rows of cars and trucks, people would roll down their windows and ask for help. “I was the first person theyd seen in six hours.”He explained he was picking up his sister. He told them, “Nobodys coming and I cant take you.”Near 10 pm. Cris reached Kathy. He directed Kathy to pull_her_car onto the shoulder and asked her to get into his snowmobiling buddy.As they headed for home, the fun started. About five kilometres into the journey, Cris made a mistake. What he thought was a shallow ditch(浅沟) turned_out to be a deep trough(水槽). Instead of coming out the other side, they just kept going down. They were trapped. And feathery snow was over their heads.注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：At that moment, they had to take action and get out._Paragraph 2：When Kathy arrived at her home, her mother was waiting for her._One possible version：Paragraph 1：At that moment, they had to take action and get out. They shouted at the top of their voice, but no one could hear them. They began_to_worry and were convinced they had to stay in their snowmobiling_buddy for the night. Suddenly, a good idea occurred to Kathy. She took off one of her clothes and burned it. Seeing the fire, people ran over and managed to pull_her_car out with all their efforts, making Cris ashamed for his refusal to others.Paragraph 2：When Kathy arrived at her home, her mother was waiting for her. She asked Kathy what had happened. Kathy explained，“I made a terrible mistake. But for others help, I couldnt have been home for the night.”When asked what she would do when someone had difficulty,_Kathy answered immediately that she would do anything to help others because todays experience turned_out to be a great lesson for her.C阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。To be honest, sometimes, I hate it when I start thinking about money because it brings me down and drives me sad. When I was younger, I always wondered why money was so important. There wasnt anything I needed. Its good to be a kid, since he or she doesnt have to worry about responsibilities. But as everyone get older, of course that changes. I work almost every day, but its still not enough. Thats what is discouragingits never enough.Right now I have to sacrifice(牺牲) the money I make. I put my school on hold so that I can pay for my girlfriends school fee and everything else. Im very supportive in everything I do, and she is also very supportive. We warm each other up. Hoping she really gets everything right, because we only have each other. I find that hope is my inspiration and that everything will work out however hard it gets. Even though I find that life is hard, it never stops me from helping others, especially those who are less fortunate. While I might be going through hard times myself, there are those out there who could be_going_through_even harder times.Last night, on my way home I stopped by to buy some burgers in a fast food restaurant. A homeless man approached me and asked，“Do you have any bottles lying around？” I knew he would recycle them for a few cents, but I didnt have any. I said，“Sorry, I dont.” And again he asked，“Can you spare some change？” I smiled and said，“Sorry, I cant.”He was very _polite. He smiled back and said，“OK, thank_you” Even though he didnt have anything, he was still in_good_spirits. Just from the way he spoke, I could tell he was fine.注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：I went in and ate my meal, but in my head I wondered if the homeless man was hungry._Paragraph 2: No matter how hard life is, there are always ways to handle it._One possible version：Paragraph 1: I went in and ate my meal, but in my head I wondered if the homeless man was hungry. After I finished my meal I decided to order another one for him. I didnt know if he was still around, but I thought my helping would warm him up. They handed me the hot chocolate first and as I waited for my burger, I noticed the homeless man standing beside me. I asked, “Are you hungry? This hot chocolate is for you and theres a burger coming up for you too.” He replied politely,_ “Thank_you. Thats very kind of you.”Paragraph 2: No matter how hard life is, there are always ways to handle it. And its not always through money. Its through love. If you love someone, you will help him and give him what he needs. The love you give today might be forgotten tomorrow. But it doesnt matter. Love everybody because thats the greatest thing you can give and it is the start of your life trip.D阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。It was a warm and sunny morning at the Central Park Zoo. Abigail and her classmates were abuzz with_excitement as their school bus entered the zoo park lot. Today, Abigails class was going on a field trip to the zoo to learn more about the animals and their natural habitats.“Before you leave the bus, please make sure you have your buddy！” Mrs. Brown announced. To make sure no one got_lost in the zoo, each student had a buddy (companion/friend). Abigails buddy was named Derrick. Derrick loves animals and was also excited to go to the zoo. But sometimes, Derrick does not follow_the_rules and gets in trouble. Abigail hoped that today, Derrick would follow the rules so they would not get in trouble.While the rest of the students got off the bus, Abigail and Derrick quickly ran off to explore. They found the exhibits for many different kinds of animals and learned a lot about their natural habitats. They saw the elephants playing and they saw giraffes eating. They saw the polar bears sleeping and the monkeys leaping. Abigail asked Derrick：“Derrick, what is your favorite animal？”“I think I like chimpanzees best. They have_a_lot_of_energy,_just like me! What animal do you like, Abigail？”“I love polar bears! I think their lifestyle in the Arctic is very interesting.”A few hours later, Abigail and Derrick started to feel hungry. They made their way back to the zoo entrance to eat lunch at the Rainforest Cafe. The Rainforest Cafe is both Abigail and Derricks favorite restaurant because there is an aquarium inside. The restaurant is also famous for its chocolate cake, which Abigail ordered for dessert after they had finished their lunch.As Abigail was finishing her cake, Derrick excused himself to go to the restroom. About ten minutes later, a sudden alarm began to go off and a voice came over the loudspeaker.“Attention! Someone has opened the chimpanzee exhibit! Some chimpanzees have escaped！”People were screaming and starting to run. Abigail looked for Derrick, but he was nowhere to be found.注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：As more and more people ran out of the zoo, Abigail began to think _Paragraph 2