高一英语必修一Unit1Writing.ppt

人教课标 高一 必修 1 Unit 1,Miss Wang has received a letter from Xiao Dong. He is also asking for some advice. Read the letter carefully and help Miss Wang answer it.,Dear Miss Wang, Im a student from Huzhou Senior High School. I have a problem, Im not very good at communicating with people.,Although I try to talk to my classmates, I still find it hard to make good friends with them. So I feel quite lonely sometimes. I do want to change this situation, but I dont know how. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.,Before writing the letter , youd better find out what is the problem with Xiao Dong.,He is not good at communicating with people and find it hard to make friends with them.,开门见山，表明写作意图。在本段中，写信人应该先简单介绍对方的问题。并表示给出建议。,Dear Xiao Dong , Im sorry you are_ _ However this situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some _ to help you.,having trouble making,friends,tips,委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告，并给出理由。,Find out the ways to change the situation. Make a list of your ideas and give your reasons.,Ideas(Suggestion),to ask people their likes and dislikes.,To join in discussions and show interest in other peoples ideas.,If you have different opinions , you can discuss with them rather than quarrel with them.,Why(Reasons)(补充细节）,To find classmates with the same interests,To get to know different people and let them see you are friendly.,To respect others and make them find it easy to get along with you.,用适当的连词和句型，把它们连成段落。,表示提建议的句型,Why not/ You should (can)/Youd better/ It would be a good idea if,适当的连词,First/secondly/ Thirdly,First of all / besides / in addition / whats more / last but not least,and/ then.,表达原因的句式（拓展部分）,If you do this/ That way,/ By doing this,Only in this way can you,Because/ since./as,First,Why not ask people their likes and dislikes. If you do this, youll find classmates with the same interests.( By doing this, youll make friends with classmates who has the same interests) Secondly, youd better join in discussions and show interest in other peoples ideas. Then, youll get to know different people and let them see you are friendly. Thirdly, If you have different opinions , you can discuss with them rather than quarrel with them. By doing this,You can show respect to others and make them find it easy to get along with you.,礼貌地总结。,I hope youll find these ideas/suggestions/tips/proposals useful.,英文建议信属于应用文写作范畴，是向征询建议者就某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。,高考中此类信件多属于半开放性作文，要求考生根据所给的材料(多为征求建议信)，提出合理化建议，或者给出有针对性的解决办法。,建议信除了遵循书信的格式之外，还要求在信中针对别人的问题，给出你的观点及解决办法，常用于建议的句式有：,注意格式（书信格式）； 客观地提出建议； 针对对方的问题，给出你的观点； 语言要委婉、精炼，同时要简洁，表达清楚。,巧列提纲，详略得当: 针对问题需要提出什么样的建议，要讲哪些内容，应该先列出提纲，并要做到内容重点突出、详略得当、井然有序，达到提纲挈领的作用。,翻译要点，勾勒脉络: 列出提纲后，可以尝试着将文章中涉及到的建议要点或忠告翻译成相应的英语句子，这样全文的骨架就已经形成了。在此基础上，可增加合理的想象以及适当的扩展。,Li Hong is poor in English