2019年高中英语Unit14CareersSectionⅧ（自修课）Writing—求职信教案（含解析）北师大版.docx

Section (自修课) Writing 求职信一、基本结构本单元的写作任务是写求职信。写求职信应包括下列几方面：1写求职信的理由。从何处获悉招聘信息，你的申请目的，加入企业的原因，你要申请什么职位。2做自我介绍。说明你为什么适合申请的职位，提出你能为未来雇主做些什么，而不是他们为你做什么。突出你的优势，即简明扼要地说明为什么你比别人更适合这个位置。强调你所受过的培训、你的经历、技能和成就。3结尾段落中提出你的进一步行动请求，这里你可以建议如何进一步联络，留下可以随时联系到你的电话或地址。当然如果能对阅读者表示感谢，效果会更好。二、增分佳句1I am writing in response to your advertisement in .2Your advertised position of .interests me.3I think I am the right person for the job you advertised, because .4I am writing to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of .5I would like to apply for the vacancy of .6If you give me the chance to ., I would be most grateful.7Thanks for considering my application and I am looking forward to your reply.8If you need to know more about me, please contact me at .9Any favorable consideration of my application would be appreciated.10I have enclosed my resume.题目要求假如你是李华，当闻知某大型酒店招聘10名女服务员的信息后，便写信与酒店经理联系求职。求职信应包括下列全部内容：姓名性别年龄文化程度婚否健康状况李华女20高中未婚良住址深圳市深南路48号个人简历612岁在第一小学学习1218岁 在深圳中学上学18至今 在邮局当邮递员爱好及特长上学期间学习了六年英语，中学毕业后一直不间断学习英语，现在英语口语很棒，打字也不错。 喜欢唱歌和跳舞。2017年曾获深圳市业余歌手比赛一等奖。注意：1.词数100左右；2信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。No.48 Shennan RoadShenzhenFebruary 26th, 2018Dear Mr Margaret，Yours faithfully，Li Hua第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为求职信；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一人称；3确定时态：本文应以一般现在时为主。二、构思第一部分：写信的理由。第二部分：自我介绍。主要介绍自己的简历和特长。第三部分：进一步提出请求，盼回复。第二步：核心词汇想周全1position职位2graduation 毕业3the_instant/moment_. 一就4apply_for 申请5without_hesitation 毫不犹豫6a_variety_of/various 各种各样的7in_addition 此外8pay_off/reward_for 回报9ordinary_worker 普通工人10the_first_prize/place 第一名11the_amateur_singers 业余歌手第三步：由词扩句雏形现1一听说你们酒店招聘10名女服务员的信息，我就非常渴望申请这份工作。 (主谓宾结构；as soon as引导的时间状语从句)As_soon_as_I_heard_ten_waitresses_are_needed_in_your_hotel,_I_have_a_strong_desire_to_apply_for_the_position.2如果我能够被接受，我将非常感激。(主谓宾结构；it作形式宾语)I_would_appreciate_it_if_I_could_be_accepted.3我是一名二十岁的中国女孩，我单身、健康。(and 连接的并列句)Im_a_Chinese_girl_of_twenty_and_Im_single_and_healthy.4我六岁时开始上学。(when引导的时间状语从句)I_started_school_when_I_was_at_the_age_of_six.518岁毕业后，我开始从事邮递员的工作。(after 引导的时间状语从句)After_I_graduated,_I_began_to_work_as/became_a_postwoman_at_the_age_of_eighteen. 6上学期间我学习了六年英语，中学毕业后一直不间断学习英语。(and 连接的并列谓语；完成时态)I_had_learned_English_for_6_years_at_school,_and_have_kept_on_learning_it_since_I_left_school.72017年我曾获深圳市业余歌手比赛一等奖。(主谓宾结构)In_2017,_I_once_got_the_first_prize_in_the_competition_for_the_amateur_singers_in_the_city.8你能让我获得在你们酒店的这个岗位吗？(主谓宾宾语补足语结构)Could_you_let_me_get_the_position_in_your_hotel?第四步：句式升级造亮点1用the instant改写句1The_instant_I_heard_ten_waitresses_are_needed_in_your_hotel,_I_have_a_strong_desire_to_apply_for_the_position.2用定语从句改写句3Im_a_Chinese_girl_of_twenty_who_is_single_and_healthy.3用after 的介词短语作状语改写句5After_graduation/graduating,_I_began_to_work_as/became_a_postwoman_at_the_age_of_eighteen.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇No.48 Shennan RoadShenzhenFebruary 26th, 2018Dear Mr Margaret，The instant I heard ten waitresses are needed in your hotel, I have a strong desire to apply for the position. I would appreciate it if I could be accepted.Im a Chinese girl of twenty who is single and healthy. I started school when I was at the age of six. I studied in No.1 Primary School. At the age of twelve, I went to Shenzhen Middle School for learning. After graduation/graduating, I began to work as/became a postwoman at the age of eighteen. I had learned English for 6 years at school, and have kept on learning it since I left school. Now I can speak English well and type well. In addition, I enjoy singing and dancing. In 2017, I once