2019年高中英语Unit3TraveljournalSectionⅤWriting_电子邮件教案新人教版必修1.docx

Section Writing 电子邮件本单元的写作任务是写一封电子邮件，电子邮件是互联网时代人们进行书面交流的重要文体，应引起我们的高度重视。一、基本框架1开头：在电子邮件开头点明写信的目的非常重要，这样才能更好地引出邮件的主要内容。2正文：这是电子邮件的主要部分，大多把话题分成几个小主题，每个小主题一段。写电子邮件语言要简洁，通常多使用短句，意思要清楚。当然，对重点部分要作详细介绍。内容较多时可以以附件的形式发出。3结尾：常用敬语，表示客套和礼节，措辞应恰当。二、增分佳句1开头语I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about our oneday tour next weekend.收到你的来信我非常高兴，我写信告诉你下周末“一日游”活动的事情。I am much pleased to inform you that I got the first place in the English competition.很高兴通知你我在英语竞赛中取得第一名。How are you getting along with your study?你的学习怎么样？2正文常用语Could you come to visit our school?你能来参观我们学校吗？I would very much like you to join us.我真想你能加入我们。Id love to come, but I cant because I have much work to do.我很想来，但我不能去，因为我有很多工作要做。In my opinion, you should study hard.我认为你应该努力学习。3结尾语Im looking forward to your early reply.期盼尽早收到你的回信。All my best wishes to you.给你最好的祝愿。Good luck to you.祝你好运。题目要求假设你是王阳，你的网友李明给你发来电子邮件，告诉你今年寒假他要去国外旅行，想让你给他一些有关国外旅行的建议。请根据下面的提示给他回一封电子邮件。1建议：事先了解该国语言、历史、文化及风俗习惯；保管好身份证、护照、钱及其他贵重物品；遵守当地法律，尊重当地风俗习惯；遇到麻烦，向警察或中国大使馆求助。2祝李明旅途愉快。注意：1.词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：大使馆 embassy第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为应用文(电子邮件)；2确定人称：以第一人称和第二人称为主；3确定时态：主要用一般将来时和一般现在时。二、构思第一段：点明写电子邮件的目的。第二段：具体介绍国外旅行的建议。第三段：祝愿。第二步：核心词汇想周全1culture_and_customs文化和风俗2keep_an_eye_on 注意3obey 遵守4turn_to_a_policeman 求助警察5be_in_trouble 有困难6ID_card 身份证第三步：由词扩句雏形现1知道你寒假要到国外旅行，我很高兴。Im very glad to know that you will_travel_abroad to spend your winter vacation.2我愿意给你一些建议。Id like to give_you_some_tips.3这些建议将有助于你安全快乐的旅行。The tips will help_you_travel_safely_and_happily.4为了旅途愉快，你应该了解该国语言、历史、文化及风俗习惯。In order to enjoy your trip, you should learn_about_the_language,_history, culture and customs of the countries.5当你旅行的时候保管好你的物品，例如身份证、护照、钱及其他贵重物品。When travelling,_keep an eye on the things you take, such_as_your_ID_card,_passport,_money_and other valuable things.6除此之外，不同的国家有不同的法律和风俗。In_addition,_different countries may have_different_laws_and_customs.7你必须尊重和遵守当地法律和风俗习惯。You must obey_local_laws_and_customs.8你处境困难。You are_in_trouble.9你应求助警察或中国大使馆。You should turn_to_a_policeman or go to the Chinese embassy.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用定语从句合并句2、3Id_like_to_give_you_some_tips_that_will_help_you_travel_safely_and_happily.2用状语从句合并句8、9If/When_you_are_in_trouble,_turn_to_a_policeman_or_go_to_the_Chinese_embassy.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇(注意使用first of all, second, finally等衔接过渡词)Dear_Li_Ming，Im_very_glad_to_know_that_you_will_travel_abroad_to_spend_your_winter_vacation._Id_like_to_give_you_some_tips_that_will_help_you_travel_safely_and_happily.First of all, in order to enjoy your trip, you should learn about the language, history, culture and customs of the countries. Second, when travelling, keep an eye on the things you take, such as your ID card, passport, money and other valuable things. In addition, different countries may have different laws and customs, and you must ob