2019高中英语Unit12CultureShockSectionⅧ（自修课）Writing—建议信教案（含解析）.docx

Section (自修课) riting 建议信应用体类别中的“建议信”往往要求我们就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。一、基本框架1开头(beginning)开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点。2主体(body)对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议。3结尾(ending)呼应开头，重申观点。二、注意事项1开门见山，直入主题。在建议信正文的开头找准话题的切入点，自然而然地引出自己想要谈的主题。写信时要充分了解情况，有的放矢，以提高书信的针对性。2给出希望对方采取或者终止某种行为的理由。在陈述理由的过程中要换位思考，尽量为对方考虑。要用事实说话，以增强说服力。3语气要和缓。让对方考虑你的想法或者建议，以理服人是关键，不能把自己的想法强加于人。4给出合理建议。通过提建议让对方明确行动的方向，从而达到写信的最终目的。三、增分佳句(一)开头语1I am very glad to hear from you.2Thank you for your letter.3I was very pleased (happy/glad) to receive your letter. (二)结束语1I hope to have a letter from you before long.2Please write to me soon and tell me all about yourself.3Im looking forward to your reply.题目要求假设你是李华。你的外国笔友Jane打算于七月来中国，特来信了解中国的社交习俗。请你用英语写一封回信，词数100左右。从以下几个方面给出建议：1见面时的问候方式；2对赞美的回答方式；3接收礼物时的回应方式；4餐饮礼节。第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文为建议信；2确定人称：本文人称应为第一人称；3确定时态：本文时态应用一般现在时。二、构思第一部分：表明写此信的目的；第二部分：介绍一些中国的社交习俗；第三部分：提出你的建议，表达你的愿望。第二步：核心词汇想周全1hear_from_sb.收到某人的来信2overpraise 过奖3be_helpful_to 对有帮助4show_good_manners 表现得很有礼貌5in_addition_to 除之外6put_away 收拾好7welcome_to_. 欢迎来到8look_forward_to 期望，盼望 第三步：由词扩句雏形现1很高兴收到你的来信，欢迎七月来中国。Glad_to_hear_from_you_and_you_are_welcome_to_China_in_July.2下面就是一些中国习俗。The_following_are_some_Chinese_customs.3我们通过说“你好！”或者问“你去哪儿？”“你忙吗？”这样的问题来相互问候。We_greet_each_other_by_saying_“Hello！”_or_asking_such_questions_as_“Where_are_you_going？”or_“Are_you_busy？”4当受到表扬时，我们用“噢，不！”或者“过奖了。”来表现出好的礼貌。(用状语从句)When_we_are_praised,_we_reply_with_“Oh,_no！”_or_“Im_overpraised.”_to_show_good_manners.5当收到礼物时，我们常说“没必要。”还有“谢谢！”来表示礼貌，然后再把礼物收起来。When_we_receive_a_gift,_we_usually_say_“Its_unnecessary.”_in_addition_to_“Thanks！”_to_show_politeness_and_then_put_it_away.6在宴会上，当喝酒祝福某人的健康或成功时，我们通过大声谈话和碰杯来表现我们的热心。At_dinner_parties,_we_talk_loudly_and_touch_glasses_when_drinking_to_someones_health_or_success_to_show_that_were_warm.7如果你能“入乡随俗”，你在这儿会体会更多。If_you_“Do_as_Romans_do_when_in_Rome.”，_youll_enjoy_more_of_your_stay_here.8我希望上面提到的将会有些帮助，期盼着你的到来。I_hope_whats_mentioned_above_will_be_helpful_and_I_am_really_looking_forward_to_your_coming.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用省略句式改写句4When_praised,_we_reply_with_“Oh,_no！”or_“Im_overpraised.”_to_show_good_manners.2用现在分词作状语的形式改写句5Receiving_a_gift,_we_usually_say_“Its_unnecessary.”_in_addition_to_“Thanks！”_to_show_politeness_and_then_put_it_away.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear_Jane，Glad_to_hear_from_you_and_youre_welcome_to_China_in_July._The_following_are_some_Chinese_customs.Firstly,_we_greet_each_other_by_saying_“Hello！”_or_asking_such_questions_as_“Where_are_you_going？”_or_“Are_you_busy？”Secondly,_when_praised,_we_reply_with_“Oh,_no！”_or_“Im_overpraised.”_to_show_good_manners._Next,_when_receiving_a_gift,_we_usually_say_“Its_unnecessary.”_in_addition_to_“Thanks！”_to_show_politeness_and_then_put_it_away._Finally,_at_dinner_parties,_we_talk_loudly_and_touch_glasses_when_drinking_to_someones_health_or_success_to_show_that_were_warm.Anyhow,_different_cultures,_different_customs._If_you_“Do_as_the_Romans_do_when_in_Rome.”，_youll_enjoy_more_of_your_stay_here.I_hope_whats_mentioned_above_will_be_helpful_and_I_am_really_looking_forward_to_your_coming.Yours_sincerely，Li_HuaOn a foggy day, I was wandering along the street when I saw a number of people were gathering at a broad street corner. We are familiar with the scene, which indicates an accident has happened. A man was injured and he was wiping his blood with a handkerchief. No one offered to help him. On the contrary, a minority of them were staring at him curiously and whispering to each other. Some time later, a man covered him with a blanket, because it was very cold. Then a jeep arrived at the spot. The driver offered to give him a lift to the hospital. The crowd lifted him cautiously into the jeep. After they left, the people there decided to request a detective to look into the accident in expectation of finding the criminal. Several days later, the criminal was found. He made an apology to the injured man. All of us belong to a big family society. It is reasonable for us to help each other. We should not forgive unfair behaviour. We should try our best to make our world more splendid. If so, our world will be full of laughter.在一个雾天，我正沿着街闲逛，这时我看到许多人正围在一个宽阔的街角。对于这一情景我们很熟悉，这表明发生了交通事故。一个人受伤了，他正在用手帕擦血。没有人主动帮助他。相反地，少数人好奇地盯着他看，而