2012NECCS辅导作文.ppt

NECCS,Writing Lecture Ma Lifei 2012-3-17,30 minutes 30 points 2 tasks,Task I: Practical Writing, 10,Task II: Essay Writing, 20,proper time allotment,近年大学生英语竞赛C类写作部分真题：,考试类别 写作主题 写作题材 字数 05年 初赛 Task I 选择课程 询问信 120 Task II 远程教学 教育学习类 150 决赛 Task I 个人生活 演讲辞 120 Task II 石油污染 环境生态类 150 06年 初赛 Task I 杂志错误 抱怨信 120 Task II WTO与英语 社会热点类 150 决赛 Task I 戒烟 建议信 120 Task II 幸福 情感类 150 07年 初赛 Task I 选课 解释信 80-120 Task 极限运动 生活休闲类 110-150 决赛 Task I 英语俱乐部 广告 100-120 Task 民族文化 文化风俗类 130-150 08年 初赛 Task I 学校信息 询问信 80-100 Task 电脑的应用 教育学习类 100-120 09年 初赛 Task I 辩论比赛 电子邮件 80 Task 时尚产业 生活类 120 10年初赛 Task I 英语读书周 通知 100 Task II 职业选择 社会热点议论文 120 11年初赛 TaskI 新年计划 便条类 100 决赛 Task II 成功 价值信念类 140,Task I 一、评分原则 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整本档次，最后给分 词数少于80的，从总分中减去2分。 如书写较差，以致影响阅卷，将分数降低一个档次。 二、各档次的给分范围和要求： 第四档：810分; 完全符合写作格式的要求，覆盖所有内容要点，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性很好，基本上无词汇和语法错误。 第三档：67分 基本符合写作格式的要求，有个别地方表达思想不够清楚，文字基本通顺、连贯，有少量词汇和语法错误。 第二档：未恰当完成写作格式的要求，漏掉内容要点，表达思想不清楚，文字多处出现词汇和语法错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。 第一档：12分 未完成写作格式的要求，明显遗漏主要内容，表达思想紊乱，有较多词汇和语法的重大错误，未能将信息传达给读者。 。,一、评分原则： 1. 本题满分为20分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整本档次，最后给分。 3. 词数少于120的，从总分中减去2分。 4. 如书写较差，以致影响交流，将分数降低一个档次。 二、各档次的给分范围和要求： 第四档：1620分 完全符合写作格式的要求，覆盖所有内容要点，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性很好，基本上无词汇和语法错误。 第三档：1115分 基本符合写作格式的要求，有个别地方表达思想不够清楚，文字基本通顺、连贯，有少量词汇和语法错误。 第二档：610分 未恰当完成写作格式的要求，漏掉内容要点，表达思想不清楚，文字多处出现词汇和语法错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。 第一档：15分 未完成写作格式的要求，明显遗漏主要内容，表达思想紊乱，有较多词汇和语法的重大错误，未能将信息传达给读者。 0分 白卷；作文与题目毫不相关；内容太少，无法评判；所写内容无法看清,Task2,Task I：技巧性强，考察形式单一 注意不同应用文的格式。 Task II：信息量大，考察考生的书面表达能力； 四六级常见的命题作文或图画作文.,熟悉题型,Task1 Practical Writing,Letter Note Notice Memo Report Resume Poster,Clear Concise direct,Heading 右上角； 小-大； 国家前邮编，后可写电话号码; Oct. 20, 2011 Inside Address 低左上角； 姓名单位地址 Salutation Mr. Mrs. Madam Miss Prof. Dr. Gen. Gentlemen Dear Sir (s) President ViceChairman Premier Ambassador，Director,Dean，Chief Librarian,Curator，Excellency Body of the Letter 右缩进 开门见山，内容简单明了，条理清楚 Complimentary Close Yours (very) truly, Yours (very) faithfully,Yours (very) sincerely， Yours (very) respectfully, Yours (very) obediently, Yours gratefully, Yours appreciatively, Yours, Ever yours, Yours affectionately, As ever, Yours sincerely Yours devotedly, (Most) Fondly yours, Yours excitedly, Intimately yours， Signature 偏右 Enclosure 左下角,1）Application Letter,Para 1 : your purpose of writing the letter ( one or two sentences) Para2. 1) your personal information 2)your education background your 3) working experience Para 3 your wish and the way to contact you,Zhang Ming Three Gorges University Yichang, Hubei, China P.O.BOX: 443002 Phone: (0717)6395578 Nov. 25, 2006 Dear Sir, I am looking for a position as a full-time secretary in your company. As a graduate with a B.A. in English literature from Three Gorges University, I am able to write letters and reports in English for overseas correspondence and briefing purpose. I would be pleased to render all my past experiences to your company for improving your present business.,I would be pleased to render all my past experiences to your company for improving your present business. My references are available and Im ready to send them to you upon notice. I am looking forward to receiving your reply and query in connection with my background of education. Thank you for your consideration, sincerely yours, Zhang Ming,2).Accepting Request for an Interview,Dear Mr. Wang, Thank you for your reply of August 20 about my application for a position. It came to hand this morning as a pleasant surprise. I am glad to tell you that I will attend the interview at the time you set for the morning of August 30. I will bring along full details of my testimonials as you suggested. I would like to introduce myself to the company and hope to be a member of it. I would certainly spare no effort to acquit myself to your satisfaction. Yours respectfully， ,3). Letters of Recommendation,Dear Professor Smith, It is my pleasure to recommend my student Mr. Wang Gang for admission to your department for pursuing a master degree in accounting. I am engaged in accounting teaching at a university in Beijing China, I enjoy my work and all of my Chinese students, who are so clever and friendly. However Mr. Wang Gang excels almost any others. He is not only outstanding in the field of accounting but also gifted for the English language, for he seems to understand almost every word I say in class. As concern as his personality, I find him honest, responsible, and cooperative. I bet youll like him too. I recommend him enthusiastically. If you need further information regarding Mr. Wang Gnag, do not hesitate to contact me. Best regards Sincerely yours, ,4). Letters of Invitation,Dear Mr. Wallace, We know that you are an expert on literature. As students in English major, we want to know some details about literature. We should be very grateful if you could give a talk on “American Literature” to students of the English Department on Saturday, April 19. If this subject does not suit you, any other similar topic would be welcome as well. We have already had several very interesting talks from distinguished visiors from various countries this semester and we look forward eagerly to the opportunity to benefit from your experience and wisdom. Sincerely yours, ,5). Letters of Congratulation,Dear Bill, I got the news from Mike that you have received a Doctorate in literature from Tsinghua University. I congratulate you for this. To have reached this milestone in your scholarship at a young age is really great. It means, I believe, years of assiduous study and hard work on your part. And it is an achievement you can be well proud of. As your best friend, I hope you can reach higher level in your study and do more contribution to the society. My best wishes to you! Sincerely, ,6). Letters of Asking for Help,May4，2010 Dear Ms Wang, I make bold to write this letter to ask you to do me a favour. I have tried to translate several short chinese stories into English for a part-time job. As it is the first time for me to do a translation work, I think there must be many errors and awkward expressions of Chinese English for my lack of experiences. I sincerely hope that you would read over my manuscripts and correct my mistakes and sociolisms. Also could you please give me some other suggestions on my translation work. Thank you for your help with great respect! Your faithful student, ,7).Private Letter of Introduction,Dear Mrs Mark， I am giving Miss Fang Li, a classmate of mine, this note of introduction to you and Mr. Mark, when she goes to visit New York City. Miss Li is my good friend. She is invited by a university to study there for a few months. She is a kind young lady. I believe you will enjoy meeting and knowing each other and become friends. It is my hope that you will kindly invite her to stay in your house for a few days. Kind regards Very affectionately, ,8). Thank-you letter,Dear Professor Ross, Many thanks for the great favor you did me, and the kind interest you took in me. I am glad to inform you that by your invaluable recommendation, I have obtained the position I applied for. I shall exert my best efforts in performing my duties, and try to be worthy of your assistance. My best regards. Respectfully yours, Jim,2. Note,Asking for Leave Invitation Apology Borrowing Reply for Regards,日期： 一般写在右上角略高于称呼的位置， 也见很多写在左上角 通常不必写年月，只写日期或星期几、上(下)午或几点钟,Aug. 22nd To Department Office Secretary Li, Im sorry to apply for ten days leave from the Aug. 23rd to sept, 3rd instant. As I have to leave with the time is urgent. My father now in the hospital is badly ill. I have to go to see him and take care of him for a few days. You know Im the only child in my family. Of course I will show you the telegram about my fathers illness which is recieved from my mother to support my application. As concern as the missed lessons during my absence, I promise I will do my best to catch them on after I come back to the campus. Wish for your allowance. Yours respectfully, ,Dear Li,Jan.8th. Dear Jenny, Thanks for your letter of sympthy I received the day before yesterday. The operation on my leg was a wonderful success. You know I had been suffering a lot from my leg since my childhood. The operation removed the cause of trouble. It is quite worth having the operation. I am daily recovering from my illness. Im confident I will soon be in the office again after proper treatment. Thank you for kind wishes. My best wishes to all your family ,Directions:You have just had a operation, and received a note of regards from your friend Jenny. Now please write a reply to her to tell her your current situation.,3. MEMO,Date：August 12,2009 To: Mr. Gates, leader of the supply section From：Li Ming of the biological laborator Subject: Microscope Dear Sir, Im a student of biology department and we are badly in need of an extra microscope in order to improve our experimental work。 Our experiment will start on Friday, so please issue a microscope to us as soon as possible so that we can prepare better for the experiment.,可不要,4. NOTICE,Jointly sponsored by the Students Union and the Youth League Committee, a professional lecture naming “How the Tariffs changed after China entered into WTO”will be given by Professor Wang Yanqiong. This lecture is mainly about how the import and export polices affect the development of economy, especially the tariffs. Some experts on WTO problems will be present too. They are going to have a discussion during the meeting. The lecture will be held in the terraced classroom No.5 of the building on Friday, October 1,2004 at 2:30 p.m. Welcome all the intelligent students to join in the lecture. Please be punctual. Students Union Sept. 23, 2004,5. Report,Directions:You are preparing for a field report,please write it in about 100words with such items as following： the current situation of the equipments your reason and suggestio,To:Mr.Zhao Minghua,president of Beijing University From:Mr.Li HongJun,Dean of Studies. Subject:Buying computers and videotape recorders. Dear President， Upon the request of the Equipment Division of the university,we have inspected the laboratory of the Physical Department and found its present equipments unsatisfactory to student, particularly to post graduates.Because there are fourty computers in our laboratory,but there are almost ten times the students and 25 percent are postgraduates.The laboratory material is so shortage that the situation have to be improved at once.In order to enhance the effect of experiments,it is hereby recommended that twenty computers and ten videotape recorders be bought and issued to the laboratory. Li HongJun,Date:August13,2010,Football Match,Time: June 30th, 3:00 p.m Place: Provincial Stadium Football Fans should go to the Physical Group for tickets. Five yuan for each. Tickets are limited. The physical Cultural Group of the University June 26th, 2006,Beijing Youth vs Liaoning Youth,Poster,Resume Name: _ Address: _ Telephone:_ Email: _ Education: 2000-2