如何提高高考英语书面表达能力.ppt

英语书面表达评分标准概要, 内容要点 语法结构及词汇运用 语言表达 文章的总体评价,4）全文字数不足80或多于120者，从总得分中扣除2分。 5）如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次（5分）。 6）内容要点可用不同方式表达。 7）对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。 8）开头、结尾的内容须合乎逻辑，语言得体。,（二）需注意的问题 1书写规范，字迹清楚，书写不勾不划,卷面美观。 2表达要准确。（保证第一句话正确无误） 3. 文中不要出现汉语表达。 4格式要正确。不同的书面表达形式有不 同的格式，如书信、日记、便条、通知等各有其特殊的格式。 5. 注意答题时间。,如何使用恰当的连接词,如何使用恰当的连接词,二） 熟练变化句式 1）尝试使用不同的句式结构造句 （在基本句型的基础上，用不同形式的句子构成主、谓、宾成分） 2）加强句子组合练习 e.g. He is a boy. He is twelve years old. 改为：He is a twelve-year-old boy. He left home. He didnt take any money with him. 改为：He left home without taking any money with him. I bought a dictionary last week. It was recommended by my English teacher. 改为：I bought a dictionary that was recommended by my English teacher.,1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. 4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.,The plan turned out to be a failure.,Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.,一、怎样使用较高级的词汇,We all think highly of him .,A good idea occurred to me.,/ A good idea suddenly struck me.,Books are free for the students there.,6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow. 7. She went to Austria in order to study music. 8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. 9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms. 10.You can find my house easily.,She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.,At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.,The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.,Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.,Youll have no trouble finding my house.,1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）. 2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） 3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句) 4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型),On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.,What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,二、怎样使用较丰富的句式,Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,书信格式示例 ： 25 Tianshui Road Lanzhou, China January 3rd, 2003 208 Hope Road Sydney, Australia Dear_Laura, _How_are_you_getting_on_now?_ Yours sincerely, Zhou Lan,掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式,I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school.,I hope you come and see for yourself some day,How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in schools in China?,Im so glad to learn that youre coming in September.,Do you think youd like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.,Im glad to learn that you are coming to China and will stay at my home. Im looking forward very much to meeting you soon.,I am so sorry that I wont be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon.,Im Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. Im very happy to learn that youre going to stay with my family while youre in Beijing. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. Well try our best to make your stay in Beijing a pleasant experience.,Id like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program. Welcome to our school if you have any chance.,Im very glad to have received your letter you sent me two weeks ago. Ive been thinking about the question you asked me. Therefore, I think its a good idea for you to return. So what are you waiting for?,Im writing for more information about the day tour to London.,经典语句汇编(常用的结束语),Best wishes/regards! Good luck to you! Wishing you success/ good luck! Give my best wishes/regards to you parents! Looking forward to your early reply! Please give my best regards to.,通知格式示例： 书面通知格式示例 NOTICE In order to arouse the students interest in learning English, the Student Union has decided to set up an English Club with the help of the teachers of English. _ _ Student Union November 9, 2004,掌握下面几种常用的英文文体的格式,经典语句汇编(致辞),Im very glad to welcome you to our schooll on behalf of us students. Now let me give you a brief introduction of our class. Its an honor for me to speak for my classmates. First of all. I hope that the friendship between you and us will exist forever. We all hope you will keep in touch with us and we hope you will come to China again. Now lets express our heartfelt thanks to him and wish him a pleasant journey home and good health.,以2009年高考英语试卷书面表达题为例： 假设你是李华，正在英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上的一则广告引起了你的注意，但是一些具体信息不明确（箭头所指内容）。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。 注意：1词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。2可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3参考词汇：牛津- Oxford 费用- fee,l 要求写一封电子邮件。 l 写作的背景是：你是李华，正在英国牛津参加短期语言培训；计划星期天去伦敦旅；你对互联网上的一则关于旅游广告引起你的注意，但是一些具体信息不明确，你想询问这些信息。 写作的目的是询问关于一则广告的具体信息。 文章的读者是旅行社工作人员，非熟人或朋友，因此写作的文体应该略显正式，语气应该礼貌，用词应较为正式。 l 写作的内容是：（仔细阅读箭头所指问题，确定内容要点：5个） l 字数100字左右,2 写作阶段 1）根据内容要点列出简要提纲，即内容要点。 开头语 （开头） 询问是否有购物时间，学生票价 费用是否含景点门票、午餐 返回牛津的时间 结尾 （收尾）,2）构思文章内容的布局，完成初稿。,第一段：开头，开门见山，说明写信的目的： I read your advertisement about the Day Tour in London and Im writing for more information about it.,第二、三段：正文，包括内容要点,As a student at Oxford University, Id like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food? How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, Id like to know the time to return, Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.,第四段：结尾，说明写信人的愿望 或期望等,I will be looking forward to your reply.