高考英语议论文写作提高.ppt

技巧点拨 作者对某一问题持有一种看法，为了使读者同意，提出若干理由，试图说服他人，这种通过议论或说理来表达作者见解和主张的文体叫议论文。议论文的写作要注意以下几点： 1.准确找出论点、论据及其之间的相互关系，即找出要点；,2.合理安排材料的顺序，即论点、论据和结论之间的表述方式； 3.注意文章的时态、语态等。议论文常用一般现在时，但述说过去的事实时，可用过去时态；预测将来时，要用将来时态；也经常使用被动语态；有时假设一种虚拟情况时，还需要用虚拟语气。,必备词句 1. Currently, there is a widespread concern over increasing traffic accidents.时下，不断增加的交通事故已引起人们的广泛关注。 2. Now people in growing numbers are coming to realize that现在越来越多的人正在逐渐意识到 3. The higher education fairness has drawn attention of the public. 高等教育公平问题已经引起公众的普遍关注。,4. There is no denying the fact that private cars do bring convenience to our life. 无可否认，私家车确实给我们的生活带来了方便。,5. Different people have different opinions about it. 关于这个问题，仁者见仁,智者见智。 6. So far as the topic Health and Wealth is concerned, different people have different opinions. 说到健康和财富，不同的人有不同的观点。,7. Recently, we have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city. 最近我们对北京动物园是否应该迁出城进行了热烈的讨论。 8. Some of my classmates are in favor of the move. They think thatHowever, others are against the idea, saying that 有些同学赞成迁出，他们认为然而，其他同学反对迁出，他们说,9. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that通过上面的讨论，我们不难得出结论 10. Just as the saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”.正如俗语所说，“事物都是一分为二的”。,11. From my point of view, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh its disadvantages. 依我之见，出国留言的优点要大于它的缺点。 12. With these done, I think the pollution of the river will be reduced. Meanwhile, we can benefit a lot from these activities. 我认为，如果做到这些，河流的污染将会减少；同时，我们也能从这些活动中受益。,语篇模板,(1)讨论调查型 点明讨论主题The students in our class had a discussion about whether the only way for senior high students to succeed is to go to college, which in fact is a hot topic nowadays. The result is as follows:,描述讨论结果/陈述不同观点About 75% of the students thought it necessary to go to college while 15% had opposite opinion. The rest stated that there was no need talking about it for they didnt care.,发表自己观点In my opinion, going to college is good for us to learn more and improve ourselves. Also, it helps us more easily to find a job in the future. However, there are different roads to Rome, which means to be successful may have other choices besides going to college.,(2)观点论证型 提出论点No one can avoid being influenced by advertisements. 列举论据On one hand, advertising greatly promotes sales. On the other hand, in their efforts to tell people about products and events, advertisers provide us with great amount of the latest information. Therefore, it has become part of our daily life. Meanwhile, to make an advertisement, a lot of people will work together on it. So with the development of advertising, a lot of jobs are being provided.,得出结论In conclusion, advertising is an important business.,5.神奇的礼貌语 (2010江西卷)英语中 “please” “thank you” “sorry”等礼貌用语具有增进友谊、改善关系、化解矛盾的神奇力量，因而被称为“magic words”。请以 “Magic Power of Polite Words”为题写一篇英语短文。,专题练析,写作内容 1.讲礼貌是人与人之间建立良好关系最重要的一步； 2.举例说明使用礼貌用语的神奇力量； 3.作为学生该如何做到讲礼貌。,写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容, 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总句数。 Magic Power of Polite Words More and more people attach great importance to relationship in study and career success. Remember, being polite costs nothing but its worth of million dollars.,写作点拨 1.这是一篇议论文，故要用一般现在时； 2.举例说明可用for example, for instance, take sth for example等； 3.因句数限制，在发挥较多的情况下要尽量使用一些连词，如not only.but also, so, and。,Magic Power of Polite Words More and more people attach great importance to relationship in study and career success. Being polite is the first and most important step to develop good relationship between people, so polite words can be easy yet very powerful in your daily life. For example, always saying “please” and “thank you” will make people feel more comfortable and more willing to offer help when necessary. Always appreciate others kindness and show your gratitude through your mouth.,Although some people may easily ignore the importance of being polite, we students should form good habits and good manners. Not only should we learn to be friendly to our parents and relatives at home but we should also listen attentively when our teachers are instructing us. Remember, being polite costs nothing but its worth million of dollars.,6. 对索钱参加选秀发表看法,某19岁女孩休学参加选秀(talent show),向下岗母亲索要十万元,媒体报道后,引起很大的争议。,写作内容 请根据下表内容写一篇英语短文。,写作要求 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；短文的开头已经给出，不计入句子总数； Recently, there is a widespread concern over the issue that a nineteen-year-old girl who quitted school asked her mother, who has been laid off, for 100,000 yuan in order to take part in talent show.,摆出争议事例Recently, there is a widespread concern over the issue that a nineteen-year-old girl who quitted school asked her mother, who has been laid off, for 100,000 yuan in order to take part in talent shows.,陈述不同观点Some students think talent shows are of great fun and can provide a colorful platform to show their talents, and it is also a way to release their pressure. But many parents and teachers hold different views.,They think that taking part in talent shows will take a lot of time, energy and money, which should be used for study and doing other meaningful things. 表明自己看法In my opinion, I do not approve of taking part in this activity. As young people, we should make the most of our limited time and concentrate on our studies to gain more knowledge in order to better serve our country and people.,如何道歉更有效(课外题目) 假如你明天要在班上演讲，讨论怎样向同学道歉更有效，请你写一篇简短的演讲稿。,写作内容,必备词汇 1. 负责处理从右耳传入的声音_ 2. 使左脑变得活跃_ 3. 求得原谅_ _ 4. 更容易“听进去”_ _,写作指导,have more chance of getting ones message across,earn forgiveness,activate the left side of the brain,process sounds that come in through the right ear,必备句型 1. 对着右耳说道歉更有效。 _ 2. 当谈到的时候，。 _,When it comes to,Apology goes down better through right ear.,重组信息 （按照以下的方式把写作内容中的每个要点重新组合成五句话。） 请根据中文意思将下列句子翻译成英文。 1.我认为对着右耳说道歉更有效。 _,I believe it goes down better through right ear.,2.科学家发现，当人们在生气的时候，右耳变得比左耳更敏锐；因为人的左脑主要负责处理从右耳传入的声音。 _ _ _,Scientists found that when we are angry, the right ear becomes more receptive to sound than the left, which is because the left side of the brain processes sounds that come in through the right ear.,3.当生气使左脑变得活跃时，从右耳传入的声音会被听得更清楚。 _ 4.一声“对不起”往往不足以求得别人的原谅，但如果这声“对不起”是对着对方的右耳说，他会更容易“听进去”。 _ _,If anger activates the left side of the brain, noise from the right will be heard more keenly.,Saying sorry isnt always enough to earn forgiveness but we have more chance of getting our message across if we speak into someones right ear.,5.如果我们想说服别人去做什么事情，最好也对着他的右耳说。 _,If we want to persuade someone to do something, we should also speak in his right ear.,参考范文 How to