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高中写作专题一类,建议信,典型建议信范文 （1）,Dear Clancy, I have received your letter and I have known that you are not so good at ChineseHere are some tips on how to learn the Chinese language well,First of all，I suggest that you should spend more time practicing，listening and speaking Chinese as often as possible. You know，it takes time and energy to learn a foreign language very well,Then I think that if you have some spare time you may try to watch as many Chinese films or TV series as you can to get your Chinese improved. If so，you will definitely make it in learning Chinese,Thirdly，I think you may try to sign up for some contests，for instance，the Chinese character dictation competitions with your classmates so that you can build up your courage and express yourself well in Chinese,I wish you great success and rapid progress in learning ChineseI am expecting to hearing from you soon. Yours, Zhang Peng,建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。通常使用“三段式”写作。通常包括： 第一段： 说明写信目的。 第二段：提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。 第三段：表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。,文体概述,段首常用表达,Im so glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following suggestions. Here are a few suggestions/tips for your reference. My suggestions are as follows. It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on,表达建议常用表达,When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you (should) It is necessary for you to . In my opinion, it would be better to . As far as Im concerned, youd better . If I were you, I would . It should be a good idea to . Whats more, it will be helpful to you that . Why not .,段尾常用表达,I hope you will find these suggestions useful / helpful/ practical. I believe that you will take my suggestions into account / consideration. Id appreciate if you accept my advice. Waiting for your good news. Im looking forward to hearing from you.,Dear _, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _ , and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: _（建议的内容）. I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Yours sincerely, Li Ming,高中英语满分书信作文模板建议信,作文常常感觉无话可说怎么办？,十句文,1. 收到你的来信，知道你的问题 2.以下是我的建议，希望对你有用 3.第一点建议做法 4.此建议的目的或能得到的结果 5. 第二点建议做法 6. 此建议的目的或能得到的结果 7. 第三点建议。（如果有的话） 8. 以上就是我的建议，如果能做到这些，我相信你肯定 能。 9.希望/祝愿你能尽快解决问题 10.期盼收到你的来信,练习十句式,根据题目列出作文的中文大致内容， 约十句话即可。,假定你是高中生李岳，有感于校园中存在的随意涂写（scribble）和乱丢垃圾（litter）的行为，请用英文给校长写封信。 1. 说明写信的目的。 2.对这些行为提出批评。 3.提出建议。,范文 （2）： Dear Mr. Headmaster， I am Li Yue, a student from class one,senior II. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students ： littering and scribbling.,It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does harm to the image of our school. I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about.,I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behavior. At the same time, students should be encouraged to develop good habits and better behave themselves.,I believe that, with the joint efforts of bother teachers and students,our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thank for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Li yue,假如你是李明，你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信，向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括下列要点： 焦虑症状 头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等 建议 1.考前制定好合适的复习计划 2.考试期间正常作息 3.睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠 其他建议(内容由考生自己拟定) 词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。 参考词汇：头晕dizzy(adj.) Dear editor, Im Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. Im writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams. _ Li Ming,范文（3） (One possible version) I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams. Most of us feel nervous whenever were taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.,First of all, in my opinion, its important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.,(Wed better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.),假设校英语报正向全体师生征集关于“如何创建安全、健康、和谐的校园”的建议，请你就此写篇短文发表自己的看法，内容主要包括： 1. 绿色校园，人人有责； 2. 建立平等合作的教育氛围 3. 多进行紧急疏散演习； 4. 禁止携带手机以防浏览不健康网站。 参考词汇：疏散演习：evacuation drills,范文（4）： As is known to us students, school is our home, so we should try every possible means to make it better and better. The following are my points of view.,First and foremost, it is everyones responsibility to build a green school. So we should keep our school clean and beautiful instead of throwing waste here and there. Besides, it is essential to create an equal and cooperative educational atmosphere where all the students can voice their opinions. Thirdly, I strongly recommend that our school organize evacuation drills on a regular basis to ensure quick response to emergencies such as earthquakes and fires. Last but not least, students should be forbidden to bring cell phones to school in case they surf unhealthy websites.,Believe that only by doing these will we have a more wonderful school.,典题示例,为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART- TO- HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。要点如下： 1. 表示理解并给予安慰； 2. 提出建议并说明理由。 参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪,词句推敲： 1. 给某人提建议 _ 2. 向某人征求意见_ 3. 在做某事时遇到困难 _ 4.依我看来 _ 5.与分享 _,ask sb. for advice,give sb. some advice (on),share . with,have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.,in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view as far as Im concerned,.,6. 认为有用 _ 7. 对有影响 _ 8. 摆脱 _ 9. 向求助 _ 10. 使自己适应 _,findhelpful/useful/beneficial,have an effect on,get rid of,turn to . for help,adapt yourself to.,套用句式 1. 控制你的情绪以及用正确的态度面对现状是 非常重要的。 2. 找他人分担你的苦恼。这是一个有效的办法。,It is of great importance to control your temper and have a correct attitude to face your present situation.,Share your problom with other people. It is an effective way.,3. 保持积极向上的态度，这能帮你摆脱困境。 4. 通过这样，你就能释放压力，成为一个强大而且自信的人。 5. 我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助 6. 如能看到我会非常开心的。,I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful.,I would be more than happy to see,Remain optimistic, and it will help you get rid of your problem.,In this way, you can release your stress and become a strong and confident person.,句式升级,将第2句改写成It作形式主语的句子。_ 将第3句该写成so that 引导的结果状语从句。 _ 将第4句改写成only引导的倒装句。 _,Its an effective way to share your peoblem with other people.,Remain optimistic, so that you can get rid of your problem.,Only in this way can you release your stress and become a strong and confident person.,妙笔成篇（5）,Hi Worried, Im sorry to know that youre having such a ha