高考英语写作人物篇.ppt

How to introduce a person?,A description of Dr.Yuan,You may include the following information Birth of date / place Education Appearance invent super hybrid rice Achievements: circulate his knowledge Hobbies- give some examples His dreams- two dreams Your ideas about him ,In my eyes, Dr.Yuan is considered to be a pioneer for all people. -the beginning- Birth of date / place - was born in_ Education - graduated from_ Appearance- adj.(s) invent super hybrid rice Achievements: circulate his knowledge Hobbies- give some examples His dreams- two dreams -the body- Your ideas about him -the ending-,人物简介的写作步骤,1. Birthday and birth place 2. Family background 3. Education 4. Big events in his or her life ( in order of time ) 5. Evaluation,Our Monitor Our monitor Wentao is not tall or handsome, but he is very popular at school. He has a good personality. He is funny and forgiving. His stories and jokes make all of us laugh, especially when we are in low spirits. Yet when someone tries to make fun of him, he never gets angry. As a monitor, Wentao is friendly to every classmate. No matter who asks him for help, he is always warm-hearted and generous. He is also a reliable person. Both teachers and students trust him. Every day he is the last one to leave the classroom, making sure that all the windows are locked and the lights are off. Such is our monitor, Wentao. We all like him.,As a monitor,Wentao is friendly to every classmate.,No matter who asks him for help, he is always warm-hearted and generous.,Wentao is funny and forgiving.,His stories and jokes make all of us laugh, especially when we are in low spirits. Yet when someone tries to make fun of him, he never gets angry.,He is also a reliable person.,Both teachers and students trust him. Every day he is the last one to leave the classroom, making sure that all the windows are locked and the lights are off.,How to describe a persons personality or characteristics,When you describe a persons character and behaviour, please remember to support your description with examples.,Organization of a composition,Brief introduction Name of the person The relationship between you and him/her Main body Personality characteristics His/Her activities or achievements Conclusion Your comments/feelings about the person,写人常用结尾句：,他不仅是我们的老师也是我们的朋友， 我们尊重他,爱戴他。 他是我们学习的榜样。 有他这样的朋友我感到很骄傲。 这就是我的父亲：勤劳、善良。我爱我的父亲。,He is not only our teacher but also our friend. We all respect and love him.,He has set a very good example for us all to follow.,I feel proud to have such a friend.,My father is such a person: kind-hearted and hard-working. I love my father.,1. 性别与婚姻（Sex & Marriage） Im a man of forty and have a 9-year-old daughter. She got married in 1980 and now she has been married for more than 20 years. I m 35 ,male and unmarried. I got married five years ago but now Im single.,By the age of 14, he had set up a chemistry lab of his own.,1他出生在2000年, 现在10岁了. 2他1992年出生, 今年18岁, 是一名大学生. 3在14岁时候,他开始自己谋生. 4在他50岁时,他感到自己老了. 5 到他14岁的时候,他已经建立了他自己的化学实验室.,He was born in 2000 and is ten years old now.,Born in 1992 he is now an 18-year-old student, studying in a university.,He began to make a living at the age of 14 /at an early age.,In his fifties, he began to feel his age .,2.年龄（Age）,He is a tall man, with blue eyes and blond hair.,1她是一个圆脸,大眼睛,皓齿长发的可爱的女孩. 2他又瘦又高戴着一副深度近视镜. 3他是一个很好看的男人,留着浓密的小胡子但是却没有头发. 4他是一个高个子男人,有着蓝眼睛黄头发.,She is a lovely girl, with a round face, big eyes, white teeth and long waving hair.,He is thin, tall and wearing a pair of thick glasses.,He is a good-looking/funny-looking man, with a thick moustache but no hair left.,3.外貌特征（Appearance）,(deep-set eyes , big bright eyes, long straight nose, brown curling hair, broad shoulders),4.身高（Height） He is 1.76 meters tall. He is 176 centimeters tall. He is 176 centimeters in height. The boy is not tall enough to reach the apple overhead. He is really a tall man, about 1.98 meters in height. My height is 1.76 metres .(不合英语习惯) Im 1.76 meters high.（身高不宜用high）,5.健康状况（Health） 1)由于被照顾的很好,孩子们看上去很健康. 2)我身体不强壮,但是很健康. 3)住了六周的院,现在她看上去很虚弱.,Well looked after, the children look healthy.,Im not so strong, but (Im) in good health.,Having been in hospital for six months, now she looks very weak.,6.教育状况（Education） 1我1984年入学,12年后毕业. 21984年我进入北京大学, 4年后毕业. 3我们学很多课程,包括 4我已经在天山小学上了2年多了, 下学期就毕业了. 51998年4月我获得了数学学士学位.,I started school in 1984 and left school 12 years later.,I went to study in Beijing University in 1984 and 4 years later I graduated (from that university).,We learned many courses, including,Ive been studying in Tianshan Primary School (No.1 Senior Middle/High School) for more than two years and will graduate next semester.,I got my bachelors (masters, doctors) degree in mathematics in April 1998.,7.特长爱好（Specialty & Hobbies） 1我很擅长口语,计算机是我的强项. 2我在去年的英语演讲竞赛中获得了第一名. 3他在网页设计大赛中获得了第一名. 4我最喜欢的运动是游泳和打乒乓. 5在我的业余时间里,我喜欢读书和旅游.,Im good at spoken English and even better at using computers.,I won the first prize in the English speech contest at school last year.,He got the first place in the homepage designing contest.,My favorite sport is swimming and playing table- tennis.,In my spare time, I like reading and enjoying traveling.,8. 详细特色（Something in detail） 举例法（Giving examples） He was strict with everybody and in everything he did. One day, we were having classes when He was very forgetful. Once he came across an old friend of his in the street and . He had a strange way of making his classes lively and interesting. I still remember my first day as a chemistry student.,写作练习： 你是李华,申请到一家外企工作.对方要求你用英语写一篇 短文, 介绍自己的基本情况.短文应该包括下表所列全部内容. 姓名： 李华 出生年月： 1977年2月 出生地： 辽宁大连 学历： 1984-1990 年光明小学 1990-1996年大连市第六中学 所学主要课程： 语文、 数学、 英语、物理、 化学、电脑 特长： 英语、电脑、（去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第一名） 业余爱好： 游泳、滑冰、集邮、流行音乐,My name is LiHua . I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province in February 1977. I started school in 1984 when I was seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. After that I went to No.62 Middle School of Dalian and graduated this summer. The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, English, physics, chemistry and computer. I like computer and English best and I am very good at them. Last year, I won first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. My favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.,写作练习： 刘华是我市去年的高考状元，被北京大学录取。 假若你是她的好朋友，请你介绍一下她的情况。 要点如下： 1.有目标（考取北大）有信心； 2.有周密计划，知道每天干什么； 3.有良好的学习习惯，不拖拉，不开夜车； 4.乐意助人，同学和老师都喜欢她； 5.你从她身上学习了许多东西，对你有很大帮助。 注意事项： 1.要按要点进行写作，根据行文需要，内容可不分先后。 2.不要逐条翻译，根据行文需要可适当增加细节。,Liu Hua, a good friend of mine, is now quite well known because she took the first place in the college entrance examination and was enrolled by Beijing University last year. I am proud of her and enjoy her success. When she studied in the middle school we often exchanged learning experience, so I know clearly why she was able to achieve such a success.