高三英语一轮写作技能培优：第1阶段第3讲第6课时如何写好定语.ppt

第三部分 写作技能培优,第六课时 如何写好定语,一、前置定语与后置定语 英语中定语的位置与汉语中定语的位置有很大不同，这往往导致学生写出汉语式英语句子，成为失分的主要因素之一。 1前置定语 名词、数词、代词、形容词、单个的分词作定语，一般用在主语或宾语前。 China is a developing country. 中国是发展中国家。,2后置定语 短语、句子作定语时一般放于中心词的后面；另外，形容词修饰不定代词、副词作定语时也常常放于中心词的后面。 As we all know，China is a country belonging to the third world. 众所周知，中国是一个属于第三世界的国家。 The men here are always busy working on the farm. 这里的男人总是忙于在田间干活。,温馨提示 在使用定语时，常出现双谓语错误。 Professor Li comes from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow.(双谓语错误) Professor Li from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow. Professor Li who is/comes from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow. 二、从句作定语定语从句 运用定语从句必须注意两点：由关系代词或关系副词所替代的成分在从句中不能重复出现；定语从句与简单句一样，也要求句子结构既正确又完整。,1.定语从句的结构 将下列每组句子连成一个含定语从句的复合句，并分析定语从句中的成分。,(2012高考江西卷书面表达)As we all know，books are the source of knowledge. 正如我们所知，书籍是知识的源泉。 (2013高考天津卷书面表达)I have been class monitor since I came to our college，which brought me a strong ability of organization. 自从上大学我一直担任班长，这使我有很强的组织能力。,句式升级：恰当地使用定语从句可以提升作文的档次。 Without water，man cant live，so it is of great importance. Water，without which man cant live，is of great importance.(句子“瘦身”。使用定语从句后句子更简练) He made brilliant remarks on the famous film. The remarks that he made on the famous film was brilliant. He thought of an important way to deal with it. The way he thought of to deal with it was of great importance.(使用定语从句突出了brilliant和importance),练一练 把下列每组题中的两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句 (2012高考辽宁卷书面表达)Even the students have turned out to be interested in the subject. The students used to dislike English. _ _,Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject.,(2012高考江苏卷书面表达)To avoid such conflicts，we should be kind to one another.It is essential to enjoy a harmonious life. _ _ They planted the trees.The trees didnt need much water. _,To avoid such conflicts，we should be kind to one another，which is essential to enjoy a harmonious life.,They planted the trees that/which didnt need much water.,They will fly to Beijing.They plan to stay in Beijing for two or three days. _ _ They sent the elderly some fruits，cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.The elderly always feel lonely. _ _,They will fly to Beijing，where they plan to stay for two or three days.,They sent the elderly who always feel lonely some fruits，cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.,.基础巩固(根据汉语意思完成句子) 1(2013高考新课标全国卷书面表达)我写信告诉你我叔叔李明将去你城市开会,我请他给你带去你想要的中国油画。 Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference，and Ive asked him to bring you the Chinese painting _ before. 2(2013高考新课标全国卷书面表达)而且，如果你需要进一步消息，一定让我知道。 Also，do let me know if you need _.,youve asked for,further information,3来中国的最好时间是春天或秋天。 The best time _ is spring or autumn. 4我们的班长正与一位女作家交谈。 Our monitor is talking to _. 5(2012高考新课标全国卷书面表达)我看到过你在网上张贴的夏令营通知，我对此很感兴趣。 I read the announcement of the summer camp _ and I am interested in it. 6你们已经取得了很大的进步，这使老师非常高兴。 You have made great progress，_ _.,to come to China,a woman writer,that you have posted on the Internet,which makes your teacher very happy,.能力提升 1按要求翻译句子 (1)你们是一支全球闻名的乐队。(形容词、介词短语作定语) _ (2)我写这份电子邮件想向您征求一些如何成立乐队的建议。 (介词短语作定语) _ _,You are a wellknown music band all over the world.,I am writing this Email to ask you for some advice on how to form a band.,(3)我们对流行音乐和现代舞蹈感兴趣。(形容词作定语) _ (4)我们怎样才能得到更多的表演机会？(不定式作定语) _ (5)如果您能够为我们的乐队想出一个名字,我们将不胜感激。(介词短语作定语) _ _,We are all interested in pop music and modern dance.,How can we get more chances to perform?,Wed appreciate it if you would come up with a name for our band.,2选用以上句子给凤凰传奇(Phoenix Legend)发一封电子邮件以寻求帮助 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _,One possible version： Dear Phoenix Legend， I am Li Hua.Since you are a wellknown music band all over the world，I am writing this Email to ask you for some advice on how to form a band. We are all interested in pop music and modern dance.And is it enough to practice only at weekends？