书面表达.PPT

书面表达,高考大纲中常用的连接词 1. 表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容 另外，还有（肯定）：what is more; besides; also; moreover; in addition （否定）Whats worse / Even worse / Worse still /To make matters worse 2. 表示转折关系 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.,3. 表示因果关系 因为，因此，所以: since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示条件关系 如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless 否则: or else,5. 表示时间关系 当 的时候 : when ; while 在之后: after 在之前: before 直到: until 一就 : as soon as 后来， 然后: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近来: lately; recently 自从 :since 从那时起: from then on,6. 表示特定的顺序关系 首先， 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the end 7. 换一种方法表述 换句话说: in other words; that is to say;,8. 进行举例说明 例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as 9. 用于陈述事实 实际上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact 跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth,10. 对一个话题进行总结 总而言之，总的来说: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word,假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter打算来中国深造，来信向你咨询做好哪些准备。 请你根据下列要点写封回信。 要点：1参加中文学习班； 2看中文书刊、电视； 3了解中国的风俗、饮食等习惯； 4.交中国朋友。 注意：1)词数100左右； 2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3)开头语已为你写好。(08全国）,Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to be well -prepared for further education in China Best wishes， LiHua,步骤1 列要点(全)。全是指全面，写书面表达时不能丢要点，要点不全定失分。要点以词组或短语的形式表达出来，它要成为句子的骨架、核心。这篇书面表达的要点列为： take a Chinese course watch TV and read magazines，books，newspapers in Chinese learn some customs and eating habits in China make Chinese friends,步骤2 扩成句(精)。精即精确、精练。 现在人们有这样一个共识：一篇100字左右的英语作文，如果每句10词左右，10句即可满足字数上的要求，所以同学们在写作时请谨记：不要在你觉得有话可说的那个要点上洋洋洒洒写个停，而忽略其他不易于表达的内容。当你把短语扩成句子时，要精练。这一步也最能体现一个人的写作水平，要注意一下几点： 一是避免汉式英语， 二是要避免用词、句式的重复， 三是要尽量使用高级词和复杂句式来表达，如非谓语动词、定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句、强调结构、倒装等。,It is important to take a Chinese course because you can learn Chinese from your teachers and classmates It is also helpful to watch TV and read magazines，books，newspapers in Chinese whenever you have time and wherever you may be Learning some customs and eating habits in China is useful as wellAs the saying goes，do in Rome as the Romans do Youd better make Chinese friends，which may improve your spoken Chinese,步骤3 连成文(顺)。顺顾名思义就是通顺、顺畅。这一步要注意以下三个方面： 首先，要条理清楚地把上面的句子串联起来，可采用层次分明的firstly，secondly，lastly形式，也可以使用first，then，besides，last形式明确每个要点，这样判卷老师看了会一目了然。,第二，这种提纲式作文多有一两句英文 开头语，同学们还需要把所给的文字和自己所写的内容有机的结合起来，其实这也是一个暗含的要点，许多同学在写作文时却忽略了这一点。根据上面的提示，你需要写一封提建议的回信，这个承上启下的过渡句可以； 这样写：Here are some suggestions；Next let me offer you some advice,第三，这是一封书信体作文，最后还有收尾的套话，你可以把它写成紧扣主题的收尾； Im looking forward to receiving your letter in Chinese这一句实际上成了最后的一条建议，让Peter在写信的实践中练习中文。,步骤4 检查誊写(整)。整这里指书写 工整，卷面整洁。把扩成句的要点连成文后， 还要认真检查是否有拼写错误、语法上的毛病等，然后工工整整的誊写在试卷上，还要注意保持卷面的整洁。,Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to be wellprepared for further education in ChinaHere are some suggestions Firstly，it is important to take a Chinese course because you can learn Chinese from Your teachers and classmatesSecondly，it is also helpful to watch TV and read magazines， books，newspapers in Chinese whenever you have time and wherever you may beThirdly，learning some customs and eating habits in China is useful as wellAs the saying goes，do in Rome as the Romans doLast but not least，youd better make Chinese friends， which may improve your spoken English by communicating with themin Chinese,Im looking forward tO receiving your letter in Chinese Best wishes， LiHua,范文点评 1第一、二点用了it做形式主语，不定 式做真正的主语结构，同时还用了because 引导的原因状语从句和whenever wherever 引导的让步状语从句。 2第三点用了动名词做主语，同时还用 了as引导的定语从句和一个谚语。 3第四点last but not least用得很别致， 同时还用了which引导的定语从句。 4句子Here are some suggestions和 Im looking forward to receiving your letter in Chinese不但起到了承上启下和收尾的结 构作用，还可以作为建议的内容，可谓一箭 双雕，一举两得。,范文二,Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. First ,it is important to take a Chinese course ,as you ll be able to learn from the teacher and practise with your fellow students .Then ,it also helps to watch TV and read books ,newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.,Besides ,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, by doing so youll learn and rememb