如何写出高水平的英语句子课件.ppt

HowtoenrichyourwritingParttwo:advancedsentences,词汇,句型,语法多样化,1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,IdiomaticExpressions:,应对挑战/满足需要/符合标准募捐赶时髦/做自己喜欢做的事我理解不了这个问题兴趣爱好相同由于疏忽所至恶化请某人享受-有所作为或产生影响被罚款/卡住/被抓住消磨时间拿-当急需-接电话当心路滑按要求增进友谊增强体质上下班的高峰期险胜蹩脚的英语破坏自然法则,FeaturesofGoodEnglishArticals:,Linkingwords,Diversesentences,Advancedsentences,有文采为妙,TrytoavoidChinglish,准确为先,流畅为好,Comparethefollowingsentences,andpointoutwhichonedoyouthinkisanadvancedone.1.IlikeEnglishverymuch.Englishismyfavoritesubject.ImcrazyaboutEnglish.2.Weshouldtryourbesttoprotecttheenvironment.Weshouldsparenoefforttoprotecttheenvironment.Weshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironment.3.Althoughthecoupleworkhard,theyarestillpoor.Althoughthecoupleworkhard,theyremainpoor.Hardasthecouplework,theystillcantmakeendsmeet.,Translatethefollowingandtrytodiversifyyousentences.,1.2008年5月12日汶川发生了一场可怕的地震.2.他英语说得太快了,我跟不上.3.他上班迟到了,因为他遇上了堵车.4.他经常吃零食,这使他很容易长胖.5.直到你失去了你才会意识到健康的重要性.6.在英国住了十年之后,他已经习惯了左边驾驶.,高考书面表达经典句型,(一)特殊句式类:1.强调结构itis/was-that-以及not-until强调结构2.倒装句1)as引导让步状语从句2)onlyinthisway/then或onlywhen从句放在句首3)notuntil、so+adj/adv放在句首3.感叹句what/how引导的感叹句4.祈使句+and/or并列句5.therebe结构,Translatethefollowingusingthepatternsabove:,1.使我感到惭愧的是,是这个男孩而不是那个年青人主动为老人让座.(强调)直到他的家人赶到医院,我才离开.(强调)是电脑把我们从疲劳的工作中解脱了出来.(强调)2.只有用这种方法我们才能控制不断增长的价格.(倒装)尽管他很富有,但他从不向慈善机构捐一分钱.(倒装)他如此沉迷于网络以至于无法自拔.(倒装),3.人们逐渐认识到保护环境是多么重要啊.(含感叹)星期天下午能在操场上踢踢足球将是多么有趣啊(fun).4.相信自己,明年你就会成功.(祈使句+and并列句)不要开这么快,否则你会被罚款的.5.我们村子前流淌着一条清澈的河流.(therebe)我们学生没必要拥有手机.,Suggestedanswers:,1.Tomyshame,itwasaboyratherthantheyoungmanthatofferedhisseattotheoldman.Itwasnotuntilhisfamilycametothehospitalthatlleft.Itisthecomputerthatfreesusfromthetiringwork.2.Onlyinthisway,canwecontroltheincreasingprice.Richasheis,heneverdonatesacenttothecharities.SoaddictedishetotheInternetthathecanttearhimselfawayfromit.,3.Peoplehavecometorealizehowimportantitistoprotecttheenvironment.WhatfunitwillbetoplayfootballontheplaygroundonSundayafternoon.4.Believeinyourselves,andyoullsucceednextyear.Dontdrivesofast,oryoullgetfined.5.Thererunsacleanriverinfrontofmyvillage.Thereisnoneedforusstudentstoownacellphone.,(二).it句型类：,Itis+adj+for/ofsbtodosthItissaid/reported/known/expectedetcthat-.Itsohappened/occurredtomethat-Itwillnotbelongbefore-Itwillbetenyearsbefore-Itishightimethat-Itisawasteofmoneytodo/doingsthItisnogood/nousedoingsth.sbfind/believeitimportant/necessarytodosthfeelitonesdutytodosthmakeitaruletodosth,Makesentencesusingitpatterns.,1.使她的第一本HarryPotter出版对于J.KRowling来说非常困难.小女孩真勇敢当众阻止他偷窃.2.人们期望尽快采取措施降低CPI.众所周知定期锻炼对健康有益.3.我个人认为整天上网是浪费时间.4.我突然想起我把钥匙忘在办公室里了.5.实验后把东西放好,我们应当把这当成一种习惯.6.我觉得为灾区(disaster-hitareas)募捐是我们的义务.,Suggestedanswers:,1.ItwasverydifficultforJ.KRollingtogetherfirstHarryPotterpublished.Itwasbraveofthegirltostoptheyoungmanstealinginpublic.2.ItisexpectedthatsomethingshouldbedoneassoonaspossibletoreducetheCPI.Itisknownthattakingregularexercesecontributestooneshealth.(ordoesbenefitto)3.Personally,itisawasteoftimetosurftheInternetallday.4.ItocurredtomethatIhadleftmykeyintheoffice.,5.Weshouldmakeitaruletoputthingsinorderafterexperiments.6.Ifeelitourdutytoraisemoneyforthedisaster-hitareas.,(三).with的诸多含义以及with+O+Oc类,1)._(用手机发信息)seemsmorefashionablethanthetraditionalcommunicationways.2)._(随着社会的发),thecomputerplaysamoreandmoreimportantpartinourdailylife.,Withtearsinhereyes,Sendingmessageswiththecellphone,Withthedevelopmentofsociety,3)._(在向导的带领下),wehadnodifficultyfindingthesecretcave.4)._(有许多工作要做),hecantattendyourbirthdayparty.5)._(因为完成了工作),hegladlyacceptedmyinvitation.6).Shesaidgood-byetohim_(眼含泪水).,Withtheguideleading,Withsomuchworktodo,Withtheworkdone,Withtearsinhereyes,Writeanarticle,usingstructurestoenrichyourarticle.假如你是李华,是一位高中生,请你有英语给某报社写一封信,反映如下情况和你的想法:1.教室是学生学习的地方,需要安静.2.有些学生把手机带进教室,在课堂上经常听见手机的铃声.3.有的同学还在课堂上发短信,浪费宝贵的学习时间.4.建议有手机的同学上课时应把手机关掉,不要接听电话或发短信,集中精力学习.,Homework,Good-bye,Thankyouforattending,CorrectthefollowingChinglish.,1.IverylikeEnglish.2.Undertheteachershelp,Iworkedoutthedifficultproblem.3.Themandressesablackcoat.4.Shereceivedthefirstplaceinthesingingcompetition.5.Hereissuitabletogrowcashcrops.6.Chinaspopulationisthemostintheworld.7.Everywherecanseethekindoftree.8.Ourcountryhastakenplacegreatchanges.,vmuchery,suggestedanswers:,1.AterribleearthquakehappenedinWenchuanonMay12,2008.AterribleearthquakehitWenchuanonMay12,2008.May12,2008sawaterribleearthquakeinWenchuan.2.HespeaksEnglishtoofast,andIcantfollowhim.HespeaksEnglishtoofastformetofollow.HespeaksEnglishsofastthatIcantfollowhim.SofastdoeshespeakEnglishthatIcantfollowhim.HespeaksEnglishtoofast,whichmakesmefailtofollowhim.Hisfast-spokenEnglishisquitebeyondme.,3.1).Hewaslateforwork,forhehadbeencaughtinthetrafficjam.2).Hehadbeencaughtinthetrafficjam,whichmadehimlateforwork.3).Hehadbeencaughtinthetrafficjam;thatswhyhewaslateforwork.4).Havingbeencaughtinthetrafficjam,hewaslateforwork.5).Thathehadbeencaughtinthetrafficjammadehimlateforwork.6).Thereasonwhyhewaslateforworkwasthathehadbeencaughtinthetrafficjam.7).Itwasbecausehewascaughtinthetrafficjamthathewaslateforwork.,5.1).Youwontknowitsimportancebeforeyourhealthhasbeenlost.2).Youwontrealisetheimportanceofyourhealthuntilyouhavelostit.3).No