正反观点对比类书面表达.ppt

,welcometomyclass,目前，对帮助或救助他人现象在社会上引起了很多争议，有些人表示赞同，有些人表示反对。请你结合下表，以“Shouldwehelppeopleinneed?”为题目，写一篇英语短文来介绍这一现象并给出自己的看法。,注意：1，对所给要点，不要简单翻译，要有适当发挥；2，词数120左右，开头已经写好，不计入总数；3，参考词汇：美德virtueAtpresent,inoursociety,thereisaheateddiscussiononwhetherweshouldhelppeopleinneed.,书面表达如何写？,五个步骤：,1、审题（文字信息，图画信息）,题材,人称,时态,要点,2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。,3、连词成句。,4、连句成文（借助过渡词）。,5、检查修改，规范抄写。,表达赞同的观点：1,Somepeoplethinkthat.2,Someofpeopleholdtheviewthat.3,Someareinfavoroftheideathat.4,Someofthemholdtheopinionthat5,Peoplewhoarefortheideathinkthat.6,Somepeoplebelievethat7,Manypeopleagreethat.8,Otherpeopleagreeto.,表达反对的观点：1,However,someofthemholdadifferentview.2,Someofthemholdoppositeopinions.3,Othersarguethat4,However,someareagainsttheidea.5,However,somepeopledontthinkso.6,Otherpeoplethinkdifferently.Theyholdtheviewthat.,表达个人观点：1,Inmyopinion/eyes,.2,Inmypointofview,.3,Personally,.4,AsfarasIamconcerned,.5,Inmyopinion,everythinghasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.6,Inmyopinion,everythinghasitsstrengthsandweakness.7,Eachcoinhastwosides.Personallyspeaking,.,过渡性词汇：and,besides,first(firstly),second(secondly),then,finally,aswellas，besides,also,inaddition,moreover，meanwhile,atthesametime,whatsworse,foronething,foranother,whatsmore.,keywords:,virtuelifeencouragesocietynoneed/notnecessary/unnecessarygethurtfallintotroublelaughat,1、Asaresult,theplanwasafailure.,Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.,2、Shecantcorrectlypronouncetheword.,Shehastroubleinpronouncingtheword.,3、Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.,Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff.,Whichoneshouldbebetter?(对比）,4、LiMingandIwenttoBeijingZoo.Thereweremanypeopleinthezoo.Mostofthemwerechildren.Inthezoo,wesawelephants.Wesawbears.Wesawlions.At12oclock,wewentbackhome.Wehadawonderfuldaytoday.Wefelttired.Wefelthappy.,LiMingandIwenttoBeijingZoo.Thereweremanypeopleinthezoo,mostofwhomwerechildren.Inthezoo,wesawmanykindsofanimals,suchaselephants,bearsandlions.At12oclock,wewentbackhome.Whatawonderfuldaywehadtoday.Althoughweweretired，wefeltveryhappy.,Atpresent,inoursociety,thereisaheateddiscussiononwhetherweshouldhelppeopleinneed.Differentpeoplehavedifferentideas.SomethinkthathelpingpeopleinneedisoneofthetraditionalvirtuesoftheChinesepeople,whichshouldbeencouragedamongyoungmen.Besides,sometimeswhenwehelpothers,wecansavetheirlives.Asweallknow,nothingismoreimportantthanlife.Themorekindmen,themorebeautifuloursociety.,However,otherpeopleholddifferentopinionsaboutthis.Theythinkthatthereisnoneedtohelpothersbecausethepeoplewhoareintroublearenottheirrelativesorfriends.Whatsworse,itisverylikelythattheymaygethurtorlosetheirlives.Meanwhile,thisactionmaymakethemfallintotroubleandtheycanbelaughedat.Inmypointofview,nomaterwhoandwhereweare,weshouldhelpeachother.Becauseitisourduty.,1、注意选词2、多用短句，