Writing英语写作.ppt

Writing,英文写作的三大技巧及常用句型,(一)掌握技巧：(1)注意篇章结构，合理布局开始部分(openingparagraph)说出文中的要点、核心问题。正文部分(Bodyparagraphs)围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。结尾部分(concludingparagraphs)对全文的总结和概括。要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容.(2)确定主题句主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。写主题句应注意以下几点：归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点提炼出一句具有概括性的话主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。,(二)巧用连接词要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会确使用连接词表示罗列增加,表示比较besimilarto,similarly,thesameas,incontrast,comparedwith(to)justlike,justas,表示目的forthisreason,forthispurpose,sothat,inorderto,soasto,表示强调indeed,infact,surely,certainly,nodoubt,withoutanydoubt,truly,obviously,aboveall,表示概括归纳inaword,inshort,inbrief,onthewhole,generallyspeaking,inmyopinion,asfarasIknow,Asweallknow,ashasbeenstated,asIhaveshown,finally,atlast,insummary,inconclusion。表示转折关系but,however,while,though,or,otherwise,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,incontrast,despite,inspiteof,eventhough,except(for),instead,ofcourse,afterall,(三)掌握常用句型：,1.inordertoHeworkedveryhardinordertorealizehisdream.为了实现他的梦想，他学习非常努力。2.inorderthatSheworkedhardinorderthateverythingwouldbereadyby6oclock她拼命干活以便到六点时把一切都准备就绪。3.sothatTheywereallsotiredthattheycoulddonothingbutyawn.他们太累了，除了伸懒腰什么都做不了了。4.suchthatItwassuchacolddaythattherewasnobodyonthestreet.天气非常冷，以致于街上一个人都没有。5.wouldratherdothandoHewouldratherlistentoothersthantalkhimself.他宁愿听他人讲而不愿自己说。6.preferdoingtodoingHeprefersmakingspeechesaftercarefulpreparation.他宁愿在精心准备后去做报告。,7.prefertodoratherthandoComparedwithwomen,menalwaysprefertosleepathomeratherthanspendsomuchtimeshopping.比起女人，男人总是宁可在家睡觉也不愿花那么多时间来购物。8.notonlybutalsoInjustthreeyears,shehadnotonlyfinishedallthelessons,butalsoreceivedherdoctorsdegree.在短短的三年的时间里她不但完成了所有课程，而且还获得了博士学位。9.eitherorYoucouldeitherbuyanMP3orgotoYunnanforavisitifyoupasstheexam.如果考试过关，你可以买一个MP3或去云南玩一趟。10.NeithernorHeisaboringman.Helikesneitherentertainmentnorreading.他是一个无聊的人，既不爱娱乐，也不爱读书。11.aswellasHewaskindaswellashelpful.他善良,12.aswellThechildisactiveandfunnyaswell.这个小孩活泼又可爱。13.OnetheotherHaveyouseentwopensonthedesk?Oneisred,theotherisblack.你看见桌子上有两只笔吗？一支是红色的，另一支是黑色的。14.SomeothersEveryoneisbusyinclassroom.Somearereading,othersarewriting.每个人都很忙，有些在读书，有些在写作。15.make+adj/nWhatwedowillmaketheworldmorebeautiful.我们所做的可以让世界更美丽。16.notuntilIdidntknowthetruthuntilshetoldmewhathappened.直到他告诉我发生的事，我才了解真相。17.asifHetalksalotasifheknowseverything.他夸夸其谈好像什么事都知道。18.Itisnouse(good)doingItsnousepretendingthatyoudidntknowtherules.假装不懂规则是行不通的。,19.findit+adjtodoIfinditnecessarytotakedownnoteswhilelistening.我觉得作听力时有必要作笔记。20.Itis+timesinceItistwoyearssinceIlastmethim.我已经有两年没见他了。21.Itis+timewhenItwas8oclockwhenIgottothecinema.我到电影院时已经八点钟了。22.Itis+timebeforeIwontbelongbeforewecanmeetagain.不久我们就会再见面的。23.ItisthatItisfriendshipthatIvaluemost.我最珍视的是友谊。24.Itis+n/adj+that/todoItisamustthateverybodyshouldknowhowtousecomputers.每个人都必须懂得如何使用计算机,在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！四六级考试越来越使模板无用武之地，阅卷老师在阅卷的过程中更多的是关注同学们的用词和句型的使用。,高分作文标志：1、四级120-150字；六级150180字；2、是否长短句交叉；3、用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；,写好一篇作文的注意事项：,1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾六级作文的最后一段：Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Bydoingso，itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.,2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说：Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat,3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper,approaches替换ways,implement替换carryout,sharpenonescompetitiveedge替换enhanceonescompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力),30个最经典的替换词,1.individuals,characters,folks替换(people,persons)2:positive,favorable,rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换good3:dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill(有害的)替换bad4.(anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof,many,ifnotmost)替换many.注：用many,ifnotmost一定要小心，many后一定要有词。Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat.同理用most,ifnotall,替换most.5:asliceof,quietafew,several替换some,6:harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat)替think(因为是书面语，所以要加that)7:affair,business,matter替换thing8:shared代common9.reaphugefruits替换getmanybenefits)10:formypart,frommyownperspective替换inmyopinion11:Increasing(ly),growing替换moreandmore(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.,12.littleifanything,或littleornothing替换hardly13.beneficial,rewarding替换helpful,14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer15.exceedingly,extremely,intensely替换very16.hardlynecessary,hardlyinevitable.替换unnecessary,avoidable17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sbtakeinterestin/sb.beinterestedin18.captureonesattention替换attractonesattention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect20.beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear21.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替换cause.22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth替换.reasonsforsth,23.desire替换want.24.pourattentioninto替换payattentionto25.bearinmindthat替换remember26.enjoy,possess替换have(注意process是过程的意思)27.interaction替换communication28.frownonsth替换beagainst,disagreewithsth29.tonameonlyafew,asanexample替换forexample,forinstance30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,替换nearly/almostimpossi,Inrecentyears,thevolunteeringspirithasspreadamongtheChinesepeople,especiallyamongyoungsters.Accordingtoasurvey,in2008,therewereabout1,700,000volunteerswhoofferedserviceforOlympicGames.Actually,anincreasingnumberofpeople