初中英语看图作文基础训练.ppt

作文的评分标准,1：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地表达思想。可得0-2分2：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3-5分3：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得6-8分4：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1-2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得9-10分,看图作文可采用以下几个步骤：1、理解图意，确立情景2、注意所给的中英文提示3、明确时态，理顺思路4、连词成句，然后再连句成文5、反复审核，修改错误,假设下面五幅图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面内容，写一篇80字左右的日记。,英文日记的格式,英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。中、英文的日记格式大致一样。英语日记的书端是写日记的日期、星期和天气的。左上角是日期（年、月、日）、星期。右上角写上当天的天气情况，如：Sunny，Fine，Rainy，Windy，Snowy等。日记的正文是日记的主要部分，写在星期和日期的正下方，可以顶格写，也可以内缩3至5个字母的空间。,今天下午我去看电影.,gotoamoviegotothecinemaseeafilm,Itsafinedaytoday.,thisafternoon,Iwenttoamoviehappilythisafternoon.,在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来.,Ontheway,Ifound/sawacasefalldownfrom/offamansbike.,onthewayfalldownfrom/falloffsee/find+复合宾语,我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却没听见,走远了.,Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedtotheman,buthedidnthearmeandrodeaway.,pickupshouttorideaway,于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主.,Istoppedataxitotocatchupwiththeman.,stopataxicatchupwith,我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他.,失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了.,Icaughtupwithhimatlastandgavethecasebacktohim.,Themantookoutsomemoneytothankme,butIrefused.,giveback/returnrefuse,May3rd,FridayFineThisafternoon,Iwenttoseeafilm.Ontheway,Isawacasefalloffamansbike.Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedtothemantostop.Buthedidnthearmeandrodeaway.Istoppedataxiandgotintoitwiththecase.Andwecaughtupwiththeman.Igavethecasebacktohim.Themanthankedmeverymuchandwantedtogivemesomemoney.ButIrefused.,Ipickedupthecase.Ishoutedatthemanloudly.,Afterpickingupthecase,Ishoutedtothemanloudly.,把两个或多个句子合并为简单句,1、把其中一句改为介词短语,Igavethecasebacktotheman.Themantookoutsomemoneytothankme.,Gettingthecasebackfromme,themantookoutsomemoneytothankme.,2、把其中一句改为分词短语,Iwenttoseeafilmthisafternoon.Onethewaytothecinema,Isawacasefalloffamansbike.,IwasonmywaytothecinemathisafternoonwhenIhappenedtoseeacasefalloffamansbike.,把两个或多个句子合并成复合句,Buthedidnthearmeandrodeaway.,Butherodetoofasttohearme.,IstoppedataxiasquicklyasIcouldinordertocatchupwiththeman.,适当选择固定句型,Iwantedtocatchupwithhim,soIstoppedataxiquickly.,May3rd,FridayFineThisafternoon,Iwenttoseeafilm.Ontheway,IsawThemanthankedmeverymuchandwantedtogivemesomemoney.ButIrefu