高中英语基础写作指导.ppt

时间分配,基础写作的命题特点：考生按所给的内容及要求，用5个规范的英语句子描述所给信息的全部内容，并组成连贯的短文。简而言之，考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力。,对于书面表达的要求：,1.Coverallthelanguagepointsandgiveninformation.覆盖所有的语言要点,Avoidgrammarmistakesandwrongspelling应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性,3.coherent,tight上下文的连贯性即有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。,4.usethewordsproperly语言的得体性,5.Writeyourarticleclearly.,6.Mindthenumberofyoursentences.,月考基础写作评讲总结,StudyingGoals,Learntocombinesentencesandwritecomplexsentencesinwriting:I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：1)借助名词短语做同位语2)借助介词短语做定语3)借助介词短语做状语4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语II.巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句III.用好从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句）和引导词写出规范的复合句：,Combinethetwosentencesintoone1.Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwoman.2.Shehastwobigeyesandlonghair.名词短语做同位语Myhistoryteacher,abeautifulwoman,hastwobigeyesandlonghair.with介词短语做定语Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwomanwithtwobigeyesandlonghair.定语从句Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwomanwhohastwobigeyesandlonghair.,Revision&Leading-in,Combinethetwosentencesintoone1.AustraliaislocatedinthesmallestcontinentOceania.2.Australiaisthesixthlargestcountryintheworld.名词性短语做同位语Australia,thesixthlargestcountryintheworld,islocatedinthesmallestcontinent.非谓语动词做状语LocatedinthesmallestcontinentOceania,Australiaisthesixthlargestcountryintheworld.,Combinethetwosentencesintoone1.Australiaismadeupof6states.2.MelbourneandSydneyarethelargestcitiesinthesixstates.定语从句Australiaismadeupof6states,inwhichMelbourneandSydneyarethelargestcities.,Combinethetwosentencesintoone1.Australiacoversanareaof7,686,850squarekilometers.2.Australiahasapopulationof20million.Australiacoversatotalareaof7,686,850squarekilometerswithapopulationofabout20million.and引导的并列句Australiacoversanareaof7,686,850squarekilometersandithasapopulationof20million.,Combinethetwosentencesintoone1.Australiaisfamousforitsbrightsunshine,countlesssheepandcattleanditsuniquewildlife.2.Thetouristsfromallovertheworldcometoenjoyitsscenery.状语从句BecauseAustraliaisfamousforitsbrightsunshine,countlesssheepandcattleanditsuniquewildlife,thetouristsfromallovertheworldcometoenjoyitsscenery.,写作要求1.使用5个句子表达全部的内容。2.句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。,写作内容：,Letsmakepreparations.,.,Usefulwordsandexpressions:,以为背景草原主要角色羊族乐观童趣启智迄今推出奖项相关的,besetin/ongrasslandsmain/leadingcharactergoatfamilyoptimistic/holdapositiveattitudetowardlifefunnyinspiringuptonowputforwardawardrelevant,Letstranslatethesimplesentences!,.,.,Translatethefollowingsentences:,这个动画片以生活在草原上的羊群和狼群为背景。故事童趣但不幼稚，启智却不枯燥。喜羊羊是主要角色之一。喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄。喜羊羊聪明伶俐，乐观勇敢。贪婪的灰太狼总是带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子。无论怎样，它总是抓不住羊。由于取得巨大成功，迄今卡通公司获得很多奖项，并推出了玩偶，图书，游戏等相关产品。,这个动画片以生活在草原上的羊群和狼群为背景。1.Thiscartoonseriesissetonthegrasslandswherethegoatsandwolveslive.故事童趣但不幼稚，启智却不枯燥。2.Thestoriesarefunnybutnotchildish,inspiringbutnotboring.,喜羊羊是主要角色之一。OneofthemaincharactersisPleasantGoat.喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄。PleasantGoatisalittleherointhegoatfamily.喜羊羊聪明伶俐，乐观勇敢。PleasantGoatisclever,braveandholdsapositiveattitudetowardhislife.合并句子（同位语，定语从句）3.OneofthemaincharactersisPleasantGoat,alittleherointhegoatfamily,whoisclever,braveandholdsapositiveattitudetowardhislife.,贪婪的灰太狼总是带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子。（with介词短语做定语）ThegreedyBigBigWolfalwayswearsayellowhatwithpatches.无论怎样，它总是抓不住羊。（状语从句）Nomatterhowhardhetries,hecannevercatchanygoats.合并句子（非谓语动词做定语）4.ThegreedyBigBigWolf,alwayswearingayellowhatwithpatches,cannevercatchanygoats,nomatterhowhardhetries.,由于取得巨大成功，迄今卡通公司获得很多奖项，并推出了玩偶，图书，游戏等相关产品。（状语从句）5.Becauseithasmadeagreatsuccess,uptillnowthecartooncompanyhaswonalotofawardsandputforwardrelevantproductsliketoys,booksandcomputergames.介词短语做状语(becauseof)BecauseofthegreatsuccessofPleasantGoatandBigBigwolf,uptillnowthecartooncompanyhaswonalotofawardsandputforwardrelevantproductsliketoys,booksandcomputergames.,Thiscartoonseriesissetonthegrasslandswherethegoatsandwolveslive.Thestoriesarefunnybutnotchildish,inspiringbutnotboring.OneofthemaincharactersisPleasantGoat,alittleherointhegoatfamily,whoisclever,braveandholdsapositiveattitudetowardhislife.Bycontrast,thegreedyBigBigWolf，alwayswearingayellowhatwithpatches,cannevercatchanygoats,nomatterhowhardhetries.BecauseofthegreatsuccessofPleasantGoatandBigBigwolf,uptillnowthecartooncompanyhaswonalotofawardsandputforwardrelevantproductsliketoys,booksandcomputergames.,Appreciation,Appreciatesomecompositionsofyourclassmates,andtrytofindoutsomecomplexsentences.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：1)借助名词短语做同位语2)借助介词短语做定语3)借助介词短语做状语4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语II.巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句III.用好从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句）和引导词，写出规范的复合句：,Homework用5个规范的句子写一则日记，内容如下：,我又一次考试不及格，回家遭到父亲的责骂。他说我过度沉溺于电脑游戏.我心情很沮丧，不知道该干什么，独自一人在外边漫无目的地闲逛。突然抬起头，看见树上有一个鸟巢，鸟妈妈正在给小鸟喂食。只有在这时候我才意识到，父亲所做的一切都是为了我好。我知道我以后我该怎么做了。,我又一次考试不及格。回家遭到父亲的责骂（scold）。他说我沉溺于(beaddictedto)电脑游戏。我心情很沮丧。(depressed)不知道该干什么。独自一人在外边漫无目的地闲逛(wander)。突然抬起头，看见树上有一个鸟巢(nest)。鸟妈妈正在给小鸟喂食。只有在这时候我才意识到，父亲所做的一切都是为了我好。我知道我以后我该怎么做了。,1.Ifailedintheexamagain.2.Icamebackhome.3.Myfatherscoldedme.4.becauseIwasaddictedtoplayingcomputergames.5.Iwasdepressed.6.Ididntknowwhattodo.7.Iwanderedoutaimlessly.8.Ilookedupandsawanestinthetree.9.Themotherbirdwasfeedingherbaby10.AtthistimeIrealizedthatwhatmyfatherdidwasforme.11.IknewwhatIshoulddoinfuture.,Havingfailedintheexamagain,IwasscoldedbymyfatherwhenIcamebackhome.HesaidthatitwasjustbecauseIwasaddictedtoplaying