如何写劝说性建议信.doc

如何写劝说性建议信【单元写作呈现】Miss Wang has received a letter from Xiao Dong. He is also asking for some advice. Read the following letter carefully and help Miss Wang answer it.Dear Miss Wang,Im a student from Huzhou Senior High School. I have a problem. Im not very good at communicating with people. Although I try to talk to my classmates, I still find it hard to make good friends with them. So I feel quite lonely sometimes. I do want to change the situation, but I dont know how. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.Yours,Xiao Dong【写作分析】 本单元的写作要求是根据Xiao Dong的一封来信，假借Miss Wang的口气写一封回信。体裁属于劝说性写作（persuasive writing）范畴中的“建议信（letter of advice）”。话题“无法融入班集体及交友的苦恼”是中学生成长过程中经常碰到并感到困惑的问题，题材贴近学生生活，属于开放性的话题，思维空间相对较大，有利于学生自由发挥，运用自己的思维方式去解决问题。这符合书面表达的要求，即能够正确运用英语进行交际。【审题要素】 写作时应注意下面几点：1. 确定文体：这是一篇应用文，是学生熟悉的书信，写作中应注意书信的常规格式。2. 主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。3. 主体人称：由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。4. 内容要点：问题介绍；建议一；建议二；建议三；我的愿望。5. 注意恰当使用连接词，使各个要点之间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。【思路引导】 本题要求写一封回信，谋篇布局时应注意以下几个步骤： 首先，回应来信中提出的问题，并分析原因。 其次，针对该问题，提出2-3条合理的建议并说明理由。Ideas Why1. to ask people their likes and dislikes1. to find classmates with the same interests2. to join in discussions and show interest in other peoples ideas2. to get to know different people and let them see you are friendly3. .3. . 最后，写一两句结束语，如：希望我的建议对你有帮助等等。【语言积累】1. Introduction: Im sorry (that) you are having trouble / difficulty / problems in making friends. I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on .However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. / Here are a few suggestions.I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.2. Ideas & Reasons:First(ly), why not .? If you do this, .Secondly, you should / can . Then / That way, .Thirdly, it would be a good idea if . By doing this, .Last but not least (最后但并不是最不重要的) .3. Conclusion:I hope you will find these ideas useful.As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above.I hope whats mentioned above might be helpful .I believe that if you follow my advice, youll get along well with your classmates.I believe, with your determination, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.【参考范文】Dear Xiao Dong,Im sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.Firstly, why not take an active part in discussions? If you do this, you can express your own opinions, and at the same time, learn to listen to other peoples views.Secondly, you should learn about your classmates likes and dislikes. Then you can find common interests with them. In this way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are friendly. Last but not least, Im always here ready to help. We can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others.I hope you will find these ideas useful. Yours sincerely,Miss Wang 通过学习这篇写作指导，你掌握了如何写劝说性建议信的方法了吗？试着写一下吧，然后与范文加以对照，找出其中的不足并加以改进。2012年高考英语书面表达劝说性信函(persuasive letter)写法这种类型的书面表达一般都是回信。写劝说性信函时,首先,必须清楚对方的意图和困惑以及郁闷的问题是什么。然后,就对方的问题,简要分析原因害处。最后,提出自己的见解建议和希望。写劝说性信函的语言要委婉、贴切,尽量使对方乐意接受你的话。常用句式。下笔引出问题。Im delighted/glad that you would like toshare your trouble with me and Im sorry to hear that you haveso much trouble/diffcoulty with sth/in doing sth.Dont worry/Take it easy,your problem is very common among students atyour age.(缓解对方紧张情绪,容易接受,产生共鸣。)接下来分析危害。However,for one thing/for the onehand,as we know,doing sth is harmful to your/doing sth cancause great damage to your;for another thing/for the otherhand,doing sth has a bad effect on your(使用了动名词作主语和定语从句)提出建议。So,I have some suggestions/ti (本文共计1页).How to write a letter of advice安徽省巢湖市烔炀中学 238072 葛平 BOOK 1 Unit 1 Writing: Miss Wang has received a letter from Xiaodong. He is also asking for some advice. Read the following letter carefully and help Miss Wang answer it.Dear Miss Wang,Im a student from Huzhou Senior High School. I have a problem. Although I try to talk to my classmates, I still find it hard to make good friends with them. So I feel quite lonely sometimes. I do want to change the situation, but I dont know how. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice. Yours, Xiaodong【题型分析】本单元的写作要求是根据学生Xiaodong的一封来信，以Miss Wang的口吻给他写一封回信。体裁属于说服性写作（Persuasive writing）范畴中的“建议信（letter of advice）”。话题“无法融入班集体，交友的苦恼”，涉及中学生成长中经常碰到并感到困惑的问题，题材贴近考生生活，属于开放性的话题，思维空间相对较大，有利于考生自主地发挥，运用自己的思维方式去解决问题。这符合书面表达的要求，即能够正确运用英语进行交际。【审题要素】写作时应注意下面几点：1.确定文体：这是一篇应用文，是考生熟悉的书信体，写作中注意书信的常规格式。2.主体时态：文章中以一般现在时为主。3.主体人称：由于给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。4.内容要点：问题介绍；建议一；建议二；建议三；我的愿望。5.注意恰当使用逻辑词语，使各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。【思路导引】 本题要求写一封回信，谋篇布局时应注意以下几个步骤：首先，回应来信中提出的问题，并分析原因。其次，针对该问题，提出2-3条合理的建议并说明理由。 Ideas Why1. to ask people their likes and dislikes1.to find classmates with the same interests2. to join in discussions and show interest in other peoples ideas2. to get to know different people and let them see you are friendly3.3. 最后，写一两句结束语：希望我的建议对你有帮助。特别要注意句与句、段与段之间的衔接要自然，逻辑要严密。适当地运用连词或副词等使句子或段落衔接紧密。【语言积累】1.Introduction:Im sorry(that) you are having trouble/difficulty/problems in making friends.I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice onHowever, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you./Here are a few suggestions.But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advice below.2.Ideas & Reasons:Firstly, why not ? If you do this, Secondly, you should/can Then/ That way, Thirdly, it would be a good idea if By doing this,3.Conclusion:I hope you will find these ideas useful.With time going on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can do as the above.I hope whats mentioned above might be helpfulI believe that if you follow my advice, youll get along well with your classmates.I believe, with your effort, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.【参考范文】Dear Xiaodong,Im sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you:Firstly, why not take an active part in the discussions? If you do this, you can show your own opinions about the matters, and at the same time, learn to listen to other peoples views.Secondly, you should learn about your classmates likes and dislikes. Then you can have much in common with them. This way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly.Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you could keep smiling every