书面表达课件.ppt

书面表达,书面表达,高考英语作文高分的5大特性:,条理性:2001年高考英语作文范文,DearDick,Hownicetohearfromyouagain.YouwanttoknowwhatisgoingoninschoolsinChina?Inshort,thingshavebeguntoimprovesinceschoolswerecalledontoreducelearningload.Idontknowaboutothers,butIusedtohavetoworkevenatweekendsdoingendlesshomeworkandattendingaswell.NowIhavemorefreetime,Icanfollowmyowninterestssuchasreadingbooks,visitingmuseumsandtakingcomputerlessons,IntheeveningsIcanwatchnewsonTVorreadnewspapers.Whatsmore,Icangotobedearlier.AsfarasIknow,everyoneishappyaboutthisnewarrangementofthings.,准确性：,1.Imwaitingforyoutocome.,Imlookingforwardtoyourarrival.(NMET2003范文）,2.NowIamgoingtointroducetheroomtoyoucarefully.,NowIamgoingtogiveyouadetaileddescriptionoftheroom.(NMET2003范文）,3.Theworkerwelcomedustovisitthefarm.,Theworkergaveusawarmwelcome.(NMET1998范文）,流畅性：,1、表示平行、对等或选择关系and,bothand,aswellas,also,notonlybutalso.,2、表示转折关系：but,yet,however,nevertheless,inspiteof,although,otherwise,while.,3、表示对比关系：onthecontrary,insteadof,ontheotherhand,justlike,unlike,4、表示因果关系：so,for,therefore,asaresult,because,owingto,dueto,thanksto,5、表示时间、顺序关系:shortlyafter,first、second,then,next,finally,foronething;foranotherthing,intheend,6、表示递进、强调关系:besides,whatsmore,inaddition,aboveall,7、表示解释说明关系:namely,suchas,forexample,inotherwords,andsoon,totellyouthetruth,accordingto,8、表示结论：inshort,inbrief,inaword,ingeneral,asyouknow,asfarasIknow,onthewhole,简洁多样性:,合理利用介词或名词代替动词：,Theflathasanareaof25squaremetresandthereisabedroom,abathroom,andakitchen.(with)Ihaveasurprisetogiveyou.(for),使用短语结构来简化从句或合并短句：,SunShuWeiisaboyof14.Heisaworldchampionindiving.SunShuWei,aworldchampionindiving,isaboyof14.(NMET1993),通过合句,Icanfollowmyowninterests.Icanreadbooks,visitmuseums,andtakecomputerlessons.Icanfollowmyinterests.Suchasreadingbooks,visitingmuseumsandtakingcomputerlessons.,思想性：,Doyouthinkyoulllikeit?Ifnot,Icantryandfindanotherflatforyou.(NMET2003),AsfarasIknow,everyoneishappyaboutthearrangementofthings.(NMET2001),IhopeyoucancometoChinatowatchtheOlympicGame2008.ThenIllbeveryhappytobeyourguide.(NMET2002),重要性历年分值与要求,各种文体书面表达的基本要求,叙述文：以叙事为主，也可写人，都围绕一件或一系列的事件而进行.因为叙述的内容都是已经发生的，所以用英语写作时，其主要时态一般要用动词过去时.,议论文：写议论文要求观点正确、论据充分、语言精练、论证有严密的逻辑性.论点、论据和论证是不可缺少的三要素.,说明文：说明人的事迹或描述物的形态、形状、规模、方位、关系、功能.说明离不开描写，同时带有描写文的特点.,应用文：包括：日常书信、公函、通知、便条、广告、日记、请柬和介绍信.,说明文,时间法和空间法两种,1.以时间顺序展开，按照事情发生和人物动作先后次序为依据展开段落，常用来叙述一件事或讲述一个故事，动作常用过去时.,MadameCuriewasbornin1867.Whenshewasyoung,shebecameinterestedinphysics.In1891shearrivedinPoland.In1895shemarriedPierreCurie.In1898shediscoveredthefirstofthesenewradioactiveminerals,whichshenamed“polonium.In1902Marieandherhusbanddiscoveredradium.In1903Mariereceivedherdoctorsdegreeforherstudyonradioactivematter,2.以空间顺序展开，从上到下，从左到右，由远到近，按顺时针方向，一旦选定一种方向，就要依次叙述下去，直到终了，否则读者会感到迷惑不解.,HongxingDepartmentStoreisalargeonethatsellsclothingforthewholefamily.Asyouenterthestorethroughthemainentrance,thejewelrydepartmentisdirectlyinfrontofyou,inthemiddleofthestore.Onyourleftisthecoatdepartment,andthescarfdepartmentisbehindthecoats.Totherightofthejewelrydepartmentisthecosmeticscorner,youwillfindthewomensshoedepartment.Nexttoit,onthenorthwall,arehatsandgloves.Totherightofthehatandglovedepartmentarethehandbagsandbelts.Thechildrensclothesarebetweenthehandbagandbeltdepartmentandelevators.,表示时间顺序的过度词有：first,atfirst,atthebeginning,tostartwith,afterthat,afterwards,later,then,next,finally,intheend,表示空间顺序的词有：above,across,against,below,closeto,inbetween,nearby,nextto,ontheleft,ontheright,ononeside,ontheotherside,onthetopof,opposite,under,一批美国客人将参加市郊的新华邮票厂，根据示意图写一篇120词左右的文章，将该厂的情况向他们作一简单介绍。注意：1）短文须包括该厂位置及占地面积。2）图中所有标志及位置须表达清楚。3）生词：新华邮票厂XinhuaStampPritingWorks;平方里squaremile;浴室showerroom,北,市区,1.5哩,花园,车库,会堂,工浴室人,办公楼,车间,车间,车间,车间,2.5哩,1哩,ThisisadiagramofXinhuaStampPrintingWorks.Theworkscovers2.5squaremiles.Itliesfifteenileawestofthecity.Thegatefaceseast.Theofficebuildingstandsinthecenteroftheworks.Eastofthebuildingisahall.Onitsleftisagarage,andonitsrightisashowerroomforworkers.Betweenthegateandthehallisagardenwithalotofgreentreesandbeautifulflowersinit.Westoftheofficebuildingtherearefourworkshops.Theyareallbrightandclean.Westoftheworkshopsisalargeplayground.Afterworktheyoungworkersoftenplayballgamesthere.,看图作文如何写？,五个步骤,1、审题,题材、人称、时态、要点,2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。,3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。,4、联句成文：,注意：,主语和谓语,背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）,逻辑关系,开头与结尾,5、检查修改，规范抄写,练习,根据下列图画中Tom骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇短文。短文要写得连贯、完整。字数100字左右。,审题,字词文,参考答案,2000年高考,审题,1、体裁：叙述Tom骑自行车的经历，为记叙文体,2、主要时态：一般过去时，叙述描绘一起交通事故,3、人称：第三人称Tom,4、要点：记叙描绘文体，抓住四个要点：时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过。,字词文,词：,torideabike,tohithisbikeandfalloff,句：,Tomwasridingabikealongthestreet.,Thecarhithisbikeandhefelloffit.,文：,Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreet.Suddenly,acarwasrunningtowardshimfastandhithisbike,thenhefelloffit.,参考答案,Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreet.Suddenly,acarwasrunningtowardshimfast.Hewassofrightenedthathequicklyturnedtotheleftside.Butitwastoolate.Thecarhithisbikeandhefelloffit.Whenthedriverrealizedthathehadcausedanaccident,hegotsuchafrightthathetookflightwithhiscar.Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.Fortunatelyapasser-byhappenedtoseewhathadhappenedandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Hereportedthistothepolice.Nowthedriverhasbeencaughtandwillbepunishedforhiswrongdoing.,NMET2000书面表达,审题,短文改错,小结,2000年高考书面表达审题,1、题材：一份书面材料，报告你所目击的一起交通事故的经过，为记叙文体,2、主要时态：一般过去时，叙述描绘发生过的一起交通事故。,3、人称：为“I”，第一人称。,2000书面表达答案,Itwas7:15inthemorningofFebruary8,2000.1_IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhile2_anoldmancameoutoftheParkontheothersideofthe3_street.ThenIsawayellowcardroveupThirdStreetand4_makearightturnintoParkRoad.Thenextmomentthecarhitted5_themanwhilehewascrossingtheroad.Hefellwithacry.Thecardidtstopanddroveoffatgreatspeedheadingwest.6_Inoticedthedriverwasayoungwoman7_butthep