高考英语作文总复习课件.ppt

,Writingcourse,Imitatethesentencestructure,1.eachcontributionnomatterhowsmall-canhelpmakeadifference.nomatter与what/who/when/where/how/whether连用，表示无论，不管，引导让步状语从句。e.g.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwontbelievehim.,2.Iamdiscoveringthatbeingavolunteerbringsmanypersonalbenefits.e.g.Doingmorereadingcanimproveyourreadingcomprehension.Listeningtomusicmakesyourelax.,3.LuHaohasalsofoundtheirrelationshipbeneficial.find+n./pron.+adj/v-ing/v-ed/prepph,e.g.1)Ithinkit(un)necessarytotalkfacetoface.2)Ifindithelpfultostudyingroups.3)Hemadehimheardbyraisinghervoice.4.)Wefoundhimsleepingintheclass.,4.EveryTuesdayandFridayhevisitsanelderlygentlemanwholivesalone.,5.ThisishowAmericanjeanswereintroducedtotheworld.This/Thatishow/why/when/where.,e.g.ThisiswhyChinesepreferridingbicycles.ThatishowIfailedtopasstheexamination.,GuideforwritingTransitionalWordIX连接词,therefore,so,otherwise,asaresult,thus,asaconsequence,afterall,but,evenif,although,butevenso,inspiteof,because,forthisreason,becauseof,duetoonaccountof,thanksof,as,firstofall,inthefirstplace,tobeginwith,butlateron,first,second,atfirst,butsoon,tosumup,tosummarize,inaword,inbrief,Onthewhole,5.,Forexample,forinstance,foronething,foranother,namely,suchas,thatis,indeed,aboveall,inanycase,infact,Mostimportantofall,whatsmore,inadditionbesides,againalso,moreoverfurthermoreWhatsmore,Worsestill,TransitionalWord连接词IXContrast(对比类）,Jeansarethefirstchoicefor72%ofthoseinthe15-19agegroup,whereaslessthanhalfoftheteenagersintheUKwearothertypesofcasualtrousers.,unlike,incontrast(相反）however,but,yet,onthecontrary（正相反）still,whereas,while,instead,Unlikehermother;sheistallandhermotherisveryshort.2.Chinaisadevelopingcountry,incontrast,Japanisadevelopedcountry.Guangzhouhasverygoodvegetables.Dalian,however,hasmuchbetterseafood.4.HewantstogototheWestLake,buthedoesnothaveenoughmoney.,Hlovedswimming.Yethehadneverbeentotheseashore.Youmustbetired.Onthecontrary,Ifeelwideawake.7.Hehadfailedmanytimes,stillhekeptontheexperiment.8.Thehusbandwantedaboy,whereasthewifewantedagirl.9.Somepeoplelikecoffee,whileothersliketea.,1.Unlikehermother;sheistallandhermotherisveryshort.2.Chinaisadevelopingcountry,incontrast,Japanisadevelopedcountry.Guangzhouhasverygoodvegetables.Dalian,however,hasmuchbetterseafood.4.HewantstogototheWestLake,buthedoesnothaveenoughmoney.Helovedswimming.Yethehadneverbeentotheseashore.Youmustbetired.Onthecontrary,Ifeelwideawake.7.Hehadfailedmanytimes,stillhekeptontheexperiment.8.Thehusbandwantedaboy,whereasthewifewantedagirl.9.Somepeoplelikecoffee,whileothersliketea.,Learntosay,Appreciate,Differentpeoplelikedifferentmusic.Amusiciansaid,“Musicisathingthatcanmakeyoucalm.”Actually,musicisathingthatcanchangeonesmood.Generallyspeaking,youthlikethemusicwithaquickrhythmlikerockmusicandjazz,whiletheoldlikecalmmusiclikeclassicmusic.,Appreciate,IwillneverforgetthelessonMissWanggaveme.BecauseIcamefromavillageschool,myEnglishwasverypoor.WhenIwasaskedsomequestionsinthefirstEnglishcourse,Icouldntanswerthem.ItoldMissWangitwasdifficultformetolearnEnglishwell.MissWangwasntangrywithme.Instead,shetoldmenottobediscouraged.,Practicewriting,假如你叫李平，你校高三同学正在开展一场讨论，讨论的主题是：高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼?请你根据下面所提供的信息,给某英浯报社写一封信，介绍讨论情况,composition,写作步骤:第一步审题,做到四确定1.体裁格式,2.主题时态3.中心人称4.内容要点:,55的学生认为应该每天进行体育锻炼例如做早操、打乒乓球、打篮球，但不要时间太长。锻炼能增强体质，减少疾病而且，运动使大脑休息，使复习效果更好。,45的学生认为锻炼浪费时间，锻炼使人疲劳，运动以后很兴奋较长时间不能复习功课。运动中可能会受伤。,书信格式议论文,一般现在时,第三人称,讨论的主题是:高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼?,第二步列提纲,写信常见开头句，点题。全文综述句。55的同学的意见综述句。意见一。意见二。意见三。7)45%的同学的同学的意见综述句。反面意见一(8）反面意见二(9）反面意见三,CompositionFromWangYaNan,DearEditor,ImwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwevehadaboutwhetherthestudentsofSenior3shouldbetakephysicalexercise.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.About55%ofthestudentsareinfavorofthis.Theybelievestudentsmusttakeexerciseeveryday.,suchasplayPing-pongball,basketballanddomorningexercise.Butnotforalongtime.Takesomeexercisecankeepourbodyhealth,meanwhileitcankeepourbodyawayfromillness.Whatsmore,dosomesportsalsocanrelaxourbrains.Becauseofthis,wecanstudybetter.However,about45%ofstudentsareapprovedtotheidea.Theythinkitwillwasteourtimeanddosomesportsalwaysmakepeopletired.Thenitisveryeasytobecomeexcitedafterdoit,andwecantstudycarefullyinthissituation.Worsestill,wemaygetininjuredwhenwedosomesport.,CorrectingCompositionFromWangYaNan,DearEditor,ImwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwevehadaboutwhetherthestudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercise.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.About55%ofthestudentsareinfavorofthis.Theybelievestudentsshouldtakeexerciseeveryday,suchasplayingPing-pongball,basketballanddoingmorningexercises.Butitwonttaketoomuchtime.Takingsomeexercisecankeepourbodyhealthy,meanwhileitcankeepourbodyawayfromillness.Whatsmore,doingsomesportalsocanrelaxourbrains.Becauseofthis,wecanstudybetter.However,about45%ofstudentsareopposedtotheidea.Theythinkitwillwastetheirtimeanddoingsportalwaysmakespeopletired.Thenitisveryeasytobecomeexcitedafterdoingit,andwecantstudycarefullyinthissituation.Worsestill,wemaygetinjured.,Appreciate,55%ofthestudentsinvestigatedagreewiththeideathatweshouldtakephysicalexerciseseveryday-fromRenlulu55%ofthestudentsthinkitnecessarytotakeexerciseseveryday,Icankeepourbodyhealthyinaddition,itcanreducedisease.-fromChenYanHavingsportscanmakeourbodystronger,sothatwecangetlessdisease.Also,havingsportscangiveourbrainarestandmaketheresultofreviewbetter.-fromZoXiang4.Asaconsequence,studentswillhavemoreenergytostudy.-fromLiuchiyuan,5.Theythinkitunnecessarytoletthestudentstakeexercise.(LiuYan)6.Inthisway,wewillreviewoursubjectsbetter.Theythinktakingexerciseisawasteoftime,(ZhangJingxing)7.Soyouaretooexcitedtoreviewyourlessonswell.(YangFei)8.Theyconsideritalsocanmakethemmoreexcited,whichisbadforourreview.(Cuiweile)9.Worsestill,wemaygetinjuredwhenwedosomesport.,Correctyourmistakes,1.Wedohavedifferentopiniononthismatter.2.Butitisntabletocostsomuchtime.3.Wecanttaketoomuchtimeonit.4.Havingsportsshouldletusbecomeexcitingforlongtimes.5.Thenitiseasytobecomeexcitedafterdosomesport.,DearEditor,lmwritingtotellyouaboutadiscussionwevehadaboutwhetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercise.Wedohavedifferentopinions.55%ofthestudentsthinktheyshouldtakeexerciseeveryday,suchasdoingmorningexercises,playingpingpongandplayingbasketball,butshouldnttaketoomuchtime.Exercisebuildstheirbodiesandreducesdiseases.Sportscanlettheirbrainshavearestsothattheirreviewingwillbemoreeffective.Ontheotherhand45%believetakingexerciseisawasteoftimeanditstiring.Afterhavingsports,theyaretooexcitedforalongtimetopayattentiontotheirlessons.Besides,theymightgetinjuredinsports.,Sample,写法点评,1.开门见山，点名主题。2.要点齐全，议论有条理。3.文章中使用了多个复合句（宾语从句，状语从句，虚拟语气，还是用了现在分词和动词不定式，体现了作者较高的语言素养。4.连接词suchas,besides,but,sothat的使用，使得本文意义连贯，全篇浑然一体。5.能较好地使用一些较高级的词汇