高考英语书面表达复习课件.ppt

,CompanyLogo,高考英语书面表达复习,Adoctorandalawyerlovedthesamegirl.Thelawyerwentawayforaweekandgavethegirlsevenapplesbeforeheleft.Why?,Becauseanappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.,1汉式英语2写作中复合句常见的错误3书写不规范,Commonmistakes,CompanyLogo,写作中复合句常见的错误,1.只有从句，没有主句,Thekeeperwhohadlivedinthetowerforalongtime.,Thekeeperwhohadlivedinthetowerforalongtimewasmyfriend.,CompanyLogo,2.以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子,Thehallwhichismadeofglassisdifferentfromallotherbuildings.,Thehallisdifferentfromallotherbuildings,itismadeofglass.,Thehallmadeofglassisdifferentfromallotherbuildings.,Thehallisdifferentfromallotherbuildingsanditismadeofglass.,CompanyLogo,3.过多地使用并列句组合信息,Itisabeautifulday,andthesunisshiningandabreezeisblowing.,Itisabeautifuldaywiththesunshiningandabreezeblowing.,CompanyLogo,书写不规范,CompanyLogo,9分,CompanyLogo,6分,CompanyLogo,24分,CompanyLogo,书面表达注意：,1.格式2.人称3.要点4.时态5.字数6.语法7.书写,CompanyLogo,词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）,1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑4.语言得体,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,语言地道，规范,CompanyLogo,1.改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头,可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。,Theboyisveryhungryandhehurriedhome.,Hungry,theboyhurriedhome.,CompanyLogo,2.Transformationofsentencesinwriting.(写作中的句型转换),把其中一句改为分词作状语Hehadfinishedsupper.Hewentouttohaveawalkthen.,Havingfinishedsupper,hewentouttohaveawalk.,A.合并为简单句,CompanyLogo,2.把其中一句改为with的复合结构Hewasbroughtin.Hishandsweretiedbehindhisback.,Hewasbroughtin，withhishandstiedbehindhisback.,Transformationofsentencesinwriting.(写作中的句型转换),CompanyLogo,B.合并为复合句TheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnight.Thenewscheeredeveryoneofus.(改为同位语从句）,ThenewsthattheChineseartistsweretoperformherethatnightcheeredeveryoneofus.,CompanyLogo,2Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast.Allthesemakepeopleslivesconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.（改为非限制性定语从句）,Inrecentyears,Beijinghasbeenadvancingveryfast,whichmakespeopleslivesconvenient,pleasantandcolorful.,CompanyLogo,3.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等特殊结构.,Thoughheiswealthy,heworkshard.（运用as引导的让步状语从句；despite/inspiteof连接句子）,Wealthyasheis,heworkshard.,Inspiteof/Despitehiswealth,heworkshard.,CompanyLogo,3.要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等特殊结构.,Hedidntgetupuntil7oclock.（运用notuntil的倒装结构；它的强调句）,Itwasnotuntil7oclockthathegotup.,Notuntil7oclockdidhegetup.,CompanyLogo,Assoonaswearrivedatthevillage,wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagers.(运用ondoing;themoment/immediately;Nosoonerthan结构）,Onarrivingatthevillage，wewerewarmly.,Nosoonerhadwearrivedatthevillagethanwe,CompanyLogo,4.Using“complicated/advancedwords”,注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。,Dontworryaboutyourexpensesforuniversityeducation,andwewilltrytohelpyou.,andwewillmakethegreatesteffort/doourbest/tryeverymeanstohelpyou.,CompanyLogo,Atthattimethetaxidriverhadtoaskthetouristforhelp.,Atthattimethetaxidriverhadnochoicebuttoturntothetourist.,CompanyLogo,Icameupwithagoodidea.,Ihadagoodidea.,Agoodideaoccurredto/struck/cametome.,CompanyLogo,5.有效使用连接词,一些常见的连接词：表并列、递进关系的过渡性插入语：besides,whatsmore,whatsworse,tomakethemattersworse,worsestill,atthesametime,(inthe)meanwhile表总结的过渡性插入语：Inaword,altogether,allinall,inshort,CompanyLogo,常见的连接词：,表因果关系的过渡性插入语：asaresult,asaconsequence,thanksto表个人观点的过渡性插入语：inmyopinion,intheopinionofme,intheheartofme,asfarasIknow,asfarasImconcerned，personallyspeaking,inmyview,astome,CompanyLogo,常见连接词：,表常识性观点的过渡性插入语：Ingeneral,generallyspeaking,asweallknow,asisknowntoall,itisknowntoallthat表顺序的过渡性插入语：First,second,then,finally/atlast/intheend,lastbutnotleast,CompanyLogo,合并为简单句,把其中一句改为分词作状语。,把其中一句改为with的复合结构,合并为复合句,把复合句改为简单句,把从句改为分词作状语。,把从句改为with的复合结构,三避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等特殊结构.,四注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。,五有效使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结构紧凑。,一改变句子的开头方式,二句型转换,CompanyLogo,Discussion,CompanyLogo,Discussion:,Talkaboutwhatyouhaveseeninthepictures.Uhepastnow(pollution),CompanyLogo,Trytousethefollowingexpressions:,Part11)Itispleasantforustoenjoy2)Whatsmore,3),whichmakessomepeoplethinkthatPart21)Withthedevelopmentofindustry,2)Itisapitythat3)Tomakethemattersworse,CompanyLogo,Part11)Itispleasantforustoenjoy2)Whatsmore,3),whichmakessomepeoplethinkthat,CompanyLogo,Part21)Withthedevelopmentofindustry,2)Itisapitythat3)Tomakethemattersworse,CompanyLogo,Part3,Tellyoursuggestionsoffightingagainstpollutiontoyourpartner.suggestions,CompanyLogo,Part31)Inmyopinion,2)AsfarasIknow,3)Muchaswehavedone,CompanyLogo,Writing:,1.Writeashortpassageabout“SavingtheEarth”.2.Thestructureofthecomposition:Para1:thepastoftheearthPara2:thefactofthepollutionPara3:showyouropinion(advice),CompanyLogo,UsefulExpressions:,Trytousethefollowingexpressionsinyourcomposition:1.Itispleasantforustoenjoy2.Whatsmore,3.,whichmakessomepeoplethink.4.Withthedevelopmentofindustry,5.Itisapitythat6.Tomakethemattersworse,7.Inmyopinion,8.AsfarasIknow,9.Muchaswehavedone,CompanyLogo,OnePossibleVersion:paragraph1,Somedecadesofyearsago,theearthisblueandclean.Itispleasantforustoenjoyfreshairandpurewater.Whatsmore,wecanevenhearbirdssinginginthemorning.Allthethingsontheearthareinharmony,whichmakespeoplethinkthatwewillliveinpeaceforever.,CompanyLogo,Paragraph2,However,withthedevelopmentofindustryandtherisingpopulation,environmentalpollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.Itisapitythatwearesurroundedbypollutedairandforestsaredecreasingsharply.Tomakethemattersworse,muchwaterhasalreadybeenpolluted,makingitunfittodrink.Allkindsofpollutioncandogreatharmtous.,CompanyLogo,Paragraph3:,Inmyopinion,weshouldtryourbesttosavetheearth.Notonlyshouldthewholesociety