人教版新课标书面表达课件《高中英语写作要领与技巧》.ppt

高中英语写作要领与技巧,书面表达六步法,书面表达六步法,一、审题,3审:审文体审要求审人称,2007浙江高考,在英语课堂上，你喜欢老师授课时只用英语还是英语、汉语兼用。请你围绕“HowdoyoupreferyourEnglishclassestobetaught?InEnglishonly,orinbothEnglishandChinese?”这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文,注意：1.词数100-120,短文开头已给出(不计词数).2.参考词汇:atmosphere氛围IprefermyEnglishclassestobetaughtin,某考生,IprefermyEnglishclassestobetaughtinbothEnglishandChinese.NowinourEnglishclasses,withhowtobetaughtwehavetwochoices:InEnglishonly,orinbothEnglishandChinese,anditsallhasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.IfinEnglishonly,canmakeourlisteningandspeakingmoregood,andwhatworse,wewillhardtounderstandourclass.ButifinbothEnglishandChinese,alsounderstandwillbemoreeasily,theEnglishatmosphereislessthaninEnglishonly.Inmyopinion,westudyEnglishtounderstanditisthemostimportant.Afterwestudyandunderstanditgood,listeningorspeakingwillbeeasy.SoIthinkmyEnglishclassestobetaughtinbothEnglishandChinesewillbemorebetter.,11分,书面表达六步法,二、抓要点,确定主要行为,Whathappened?,时下，各类电视节目广泛使用短信参与方式，对此人们评价不一。请你对此现象向21stCentury投稿，谈谈个人看法：,要求:1词数：120词左右。2可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.,Practice:,提供机会带来收益迎合追求保证品位产生反感浪费精力你的观点,offer/providechancesbringinprofits/benefitfrommeet/appealtotheneedsofensurethetastefeelbad/bored/annoyedwastetimeandenergyInmyopinionweshouldtakeacriticalattitudetowards,列出要点,书面表达六步法,三、扩展成句,形成基本语义单位,Whodidwhat?,1offerchancesAudiencesareofferedmorechancestoparticipateintheliveprograms.2bringinprofits/benefitfromTheybringinprofitstothemassmedia.3appealtotheneedsofTheyappealtotheneedsoftheyoungpeople.,4ensurethetasteWecannotensurethetasteoftheprogramsifshortmessagesareoutofcontrol.5feelbad/bored/annoyedTheycostalotandmaketheaudiencesfeelbored.6wastetimeandenergyItwillbeawasteoftimeandenergyiftheyoungareaddictedtothem.7takeacriticalattitudeInmyopinionweshouldtakeacriticalattitudetowardsshortmessages.,书面表达六步法,四、连句成文,正确使用过渡词，使行文流畅。并注意段与段的衔接。,表示列举和顺序用firstly,secondly,last,then,finally,next,suchas，afterthatb.表示意义增补和引申用also,besides,aboveall,whatsmore/whatsworsec.表示结果用so,therefore,asaresult,sothatd.表示意义转折用instead,however,bute.表示解释说明用inotherwords,thatistosayf.表示概括和总结用then,inall,asweknowg.表示时间顺序用now,atfirst,when,afterh.表示并列关系用or,and,also,too,i.表示条件关系用as(so)longas,if,unlessj.表示举例用forexample,forinstance,suchask.表示让步关系用though,evenif,however,as,1.过好行文逻辑关,2.用活语言，准确生动,使用常用高级语法:非谓语动词，with复合结构，虚拟语气，强调句，倒装句，感叹句，定语从句，状语从句等,Themealwassonicethatweallenjoyeditverymuch.,a.Themealwasverynice.Weallenjoyeditverymuch.(sothat/sothat/suchthat),Notonlyisheafamoussingerbutalsohehaswrittensomeinterestingbooks.,b.Heisafamoussinger.Hehasalsowrittensomeinterestingbooks.(notonlybutalso),c.Mybrotherwasridingabike.Isatontheseatbehindhim.(withsb.doing),Mybrotherwasridingabikewithmesittingontheseatbehindhim.,Nothavingreceivedhisletterhedecidedtowritetoheragain.,d.Hehadntreceivedaletter.Hedecidedtowritetoheragain.(nothavingdone),e.Wearegladtoseesuchgreatchangesinourschoollife.(how),Howgladwearetoseesuchgreatchangesinourschoollife.,书面表达六步法,五、查错改错,注意时态、标点和拼写是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。,书面表达六步法,六、誊写,修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。卷面不工整要扣分!,4规范三写：大小写,拼写,书写,Makewhatyouhavewrittenclearenough!,小结,审题，抓点造句，成文改错，誉写,文不对题（文体格式不规范）离题太远（抓不到要点，该说的不说，不该说的说的太多）词不达意（有的甚至用汉语标注、留空或抄袭试卷上的材料）病句太多（时态、语态、人称、数等语法错误）卷面不工整（字迹潦草、乱涂改、添插箭头满篇飞，这是经电脑扫描后网上阅卷的大忌!）,前车之鉴!,一篇档次较高、得分较多的书面表达，给阅卷老师的印象应该是：语意要合情合理，过渡自然；语句要有简有繁，随“意”而安；语法要结构正确，无懈可击；语言要地道流畅，书写规范。,目前，许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理，学生对此看法不一。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。,注意：1.字数120左右;不要逐字翻译。2.短文开头已给出，不计人总词数。Nowadaysalotofschoolskeeptheirstudentsinschoolalldaylong,Practice,Nowadaysalotofschoolskeeptheirstudentsinschoolalldaylong.Studentshavedifferentopinionsaboutit.Someofthestudentsthinktheyenjoylessfreedomandhavelittlechancetogetintouchwithsociety.Theyarenotabletofullydeveloptheirinterestsandhobbies.Therefore,theyhavelostinterestintheirstudies.Someothersthinkschoolisthebestplacetogetknowledge,sotheyshouldputtheirheartintotheirlessons.Somestudentslacktheabilitytocontrolthemselves.Onceoutofschool,theymaylosecontrolofthemselvesanddosomethingthatwillinfluence/affecttheirstudies.PersonallyIthink,itisnecessarytokeepstudentsatschool.Butatthesametimeschoolsshouldorganizevari