writing非谓语动词在写作中的应用ppt课件.ppt

Thebeautyofwriting,“Readingmakesafullman;conferenceareadyman;andwritingan_man.”-FrancisBacon,exact,阅读使人充实，交谈使人机智，写作使人精确。-培根,阅卷老师喜欢的句子,、同位语结构、with复合结构，使文章简洁、通顺；尽量使用动词短语和词组、定语从句等复合句，修辞润色文章。,使用分词短语(非谓语动词）,Non-finiteVerbsinwriting非谓语动词在写作中的应用,1.Seeingfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.2.Inmyopinion,climbmountainisanenjoyablething.3.Whichteamisgoodatcooking?Ateamcalleditselfthesuppercook.,Correction,写作中非谓语动词常见的错误,Seen,climbing,calling,5,1.Whensheheardthenews,sheburstintocrying._thenews,sheburstintocrying.2.AustraliaislocatedonthewestcoastofthePacific.AustraliaisthelargestcountryinOceania.Australia，_thewestcoastofthePacific，isthelargestcountryinOceania.,用非谓语结构改写句子,Hearing,locatedon,6,3.ThoughIadmitwhathehassaid,Istilldoubthedidntdohisbest._,Istilldoubthedidntdohisbest.4.BecauseImissedthebus,Iwenttoschoollate._,Iwenttoschoollate.,Admittingwhathehas,said,Missingthebus,5.WhenIwaswalkinginthestreet,Isawhim._inthestreet,Isawhim.6.Ifyouworkhard,_hard,youwillsucceed.,Walking,Working,7.Althoughhehadfailedmanytimes,hedidntloseheart._manytimes,hedidntloseheart.8.Asshewasscoldedbytheteacher,thegirlsattherewithoutliftingherhead._,thegirlsattherewithoutliftingherhead.,Havingfailed,Scoldedbytheteacher,例文(1)：Gettingbackwhatyouhavelostwouldbeanunforgettableexperience.LastMonday,Ilostmyexpensivecellphone,onwhichmynamewasinscribed(刻).Fortunately,itwasreturned.Thatmorning,Irushedoutofmyhouseandjumpedintoataxi,forIwouldbelateforthefinalexamination.Onarrivingatschool,Iheadedtomyclassroomquickly,notnoticingthatIhadleftmycellphoneonthebackseat.,Enjoytwoessays,10,Thereisalwayssomeonebehindus,caringaboutus.Oneverydaymorning,walkingoutofthedoorwaytogotoschool,wemaybetoldtopayattentiontothetraffic,nottofightorquarrelwithothers,andmayevenbetoldtochewslowlyattable.Beingachild,wemayfeeltiredofthosewords.whenwecomehomeafterschool,shehastriedherbesttoprovidewhatshehasforus.Evenifwhatweneedisjustaglassofwater,shewillalsokeepitinmind.,例文(2),11,Whennoticinghergreyhairsandthewrinklesaroundhereyes,IrealizeIhavegrownupwhilesheisnolongeryoung.ItstimethatIshoulddosomethingforher,evenonlygivingherbacksomemassageormakingacupofteaforhercanmakeherfeelthatsheseemstobethehappiestwomanintheworld.Doyouknowwhosheis?SheisourMom.,Funtime!Pickoutapictureandfinishthetask,playmusic,make,happy,Playingmusicmakesthemhappy.,makeasentenceusingnonfiniteverbs,_bythereporterfromCCTV,themansaidhewasveryhappy.(interview),Interviewed,Finishthesentenceusingnonfiniteverbs,e.g.Havingfinishedmyhomework,Iwentontohelpmyparents.,listento/burstoutlaughing,Havinglistenedtothesongcalled“Gangnamstyle”,weburstoutlaughing.,Followtheexampleandmakeasentence.,3.Moyanstoodthereandwassurroundedbymanyreporters.Moyanstoodtheresurroundedbymanyreporters.,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,Combinethefollowingsentences,1.Assoonastheyarrivedattheschool.Theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.,Arrivingattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.,2.IfIamgivenanotherchance.Iwillsucceed.,Givenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.,3.HewantstoimprovehisEnglish(目的)Hestudiesharder.,ToimprovehisEnglish,hestudiesharder.,4.Whenhelefttheclassroom,hedidntsaygoodbyetome.5.Becauseheisill,hecantattendthemeeting.,Whenleavingtheclassroom,hedidntsaygoodbyetome.,Beingill,hecantattendthemeeting.,6.Thepolicemansawthethiefwhowasstealingabike.7.Theboyswhoswamintheriverwereindanger.,Thepolicemansawthethiefstealingabike.,Theboysswimmingintheriverwereindanger,8.Becausehehadntseenthefilmbefore,hewenttothecinema.,Nothavingseenthefilmbefore,hewenttothecinema.,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,1.因为在这国家没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。用连词becauseBecauseshehasnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.用非谓语结构Havingnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.,2.这本用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂用定语从句Thebook,iseasytounderstand.用非谓语结构Thebook,iseasytounderstand,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,whichwaswritteninsimpleEnglish,writteninsimpleEnglish,25,3.他们是来自于几个国家的游客。用定语从句Theyarevisitorswhocomefromseveralcountries.用非谓语结构Theyarevisitorscomingfromseveralcountries.,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,26,4.发现他好朋友沮丧，他竭尽所能让他朋友开心。用并列句Hefoundhisbestfriendfrustratedandhedideverythinghecouldtomakehimhappy.用非谓语结构Findinghisbestfriendfrustrated,hedideverythinghecouldtomakehimhappy.,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivities.Wewanttomakeourselvesmorehealthy.,Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivitiestomakeourselvesmorehealthy.,4.用非谓语结构合并下列句子,用非谓语结构改写和美化句子,Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.,用非谓语结构美化文章,Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.,Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.,用非谓语结构美化文章,Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.,Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.,用非谓语结构美化文章,Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.,Beingafraidoffailinginexams,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams,用非谓语结构美化文章,Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddontworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Beingafraidoffailinginexams,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams.,用非谓语结构美化后的文章,要求：1.用2-3句话表达表格内容2.2-3句话要有连贯性,necessary,aneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.,thebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.,（2011高考模拟）高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气。,Havingatry,翻译:高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气。,Step1：拆分成几个简单句(中文),高考临近。(NationalCollegeEntranceExamination)保持良好的心态很重要。(havearightattitude)它有助于减轻焦虑（relax）和勇敢地克服困难。,Step2：分别翻译这几个简单句,NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.,Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.,Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,Havingatry,Step3：合并句子,WithNationalCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming,itisimportanttohavearightattitudetorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.,Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.,Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,Sentence1:,Havingatry,Step3：合并句子,WithCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming,itisimportanttohavearightattitudewhichhelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,CollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.,Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.,Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.,Sentence2:,Tip:Trytousedifferentwaystoexpress.,Havingatry,要求：1.用2-3句话表达表格内容2.2-3句话要有连贯性（2011高考模拟）,Havingatry,necessary,aneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.,thebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.,Havingatry,Itisnecessarytohaveenoughsleep.Havingenoughsleepisnecessary.,Itwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.,Keepinghealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.,ToKeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.,Passage：Havingenoughsleepisnecessary,becauseitwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.Moreover,tokeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.,Tip:Neverignoretheconjunction.,Havingatry,40,WithCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming,itisimportanttohavearightattitudewhichhelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Havingenoughsleepisnecessary,becauseitwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.Moreover,tokeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.Besides,doingexerciseregularlyisofgreatbenefittoourhealth.Lastbutnotleast,itisveryimportanttokeepabalanceddiet.,二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,三.巧用倒装增强句子表现力,四.尝试多样化表达方式,一.使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力,强调句,With短语复合结构,定语从句,名词性从句(主宾表同从句),各种状语从句,被动语态,1.beggar,lie,sleep2.Mr.Li,hurry,paynoattentionto3.stickout，tripover(绊倒),angry,Abeggar,43,1.一天，一个乞丐在路边讨钱，但是李先生匆忙赶路上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。2.结果这个乞丐很生气，伸出拐杖，差点把李先生绊倒了。3.意识到他是个残疾人，李先生想给他一些钱。4.于是他拿出了一张百元钞票,突然一阵风把钞票吹到了空中。5.看到被风吹到空中的百元钞票，乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票，使李先生非常惊讶。,实战演练：用五个句子写出下列信息点，注意非谓语和复合句的运用。,Abeggar,Writing,2.MrLihurriedhome,payingnoattentiontoabeggar.,1.Thebeggarlayontheground,sleeping.,3.Suddenly,thebeggarstuckouthislegs,trippingoverMrLi,whichmadehimveryangry.,Makeanending,Exchangeanddiscussyourpartnerscomposition,followingthecriteria.,Pairwork,AbeggarOneday,hurryinghome,Mr.Lipaidnoattentiontothebeggarwholayontheground,sleeping.Suddenly,thebeggarstuckouthislegs,trippingMr.Liover,whichmadehimveryangry.Realizingthebeggarwasadisabledperson,Mr.Libeganto