潮阳四中英语科第一学月作文专讲.ppt

高三英语第一学月测试写作专讲,作文是英语学习中的重点，也是难点。要想写出流畅的作文，必须多欣赏优秀范文，熟悉文章体裁，了解文章框架，形成写作套路，积累精美语言。只有记诵一定量的优秀范文，才能保证写作的流畅输出！同学们要注重错句改正及优秀句子的积累，注重优秀范文的背诵和写作，大家一定要积极参与其中，不断提高自身对英语的感悟能力和使用能力！要写出好的作文，平时必须多看范文，多分析范文。积累有用的词汇、词组和句型。每次作文评改后发回来，要及时改正所犯的错误，以后不要再犯同样的错误。好的作文必须经过千锤百炼，多练习多归纳多进步！,基础写作【参考范文1】RichardAvis,aBritish,wasbornonDecember1st,1974.Inordertounderstandthemeaningofsuccessfullifeindifferentcultures,Richard,from2011,begantoseektimetwinsaroundtheworld.Withthehelpofthelocalmedia,hehasalreadyfound32timetwinsfrom13countries,ofwhomthereare17malesand15females.Theirpositionsincludegovernmentofficials,athletes,drivers,teachers,artistsandsoon.Richardintendstofind40timetwinsbeforehis40thbirthdayandheisgoingtowriteabookbasedonthisexperience.,【参考范文2】RichardAvis,aBritishwhowasbornonDecember1st,1974,hasstartedtolookfortimetwinsintheworldsince2011inordertoknowaboutdifferentmeaningsofsuccessfullifeindifferentculture.Heusesthelocalmediatohelphimself.Sofar,hehasfound32people,including17menand15womenfrom13countries.Theyaregovernmentofficials,athletes,drivers,teachersandartists.Heplanstofind40timetwinsbeforehisfortiethbirthdayandthenheintendstowriteabookaccordingtothisexperience.,“读写任务”的写作过程：1）把握阅读材料的结构、思路、观点与意图；2）概括阅读材料的观点（论证过程）3）在“写作内容”的引导下写作。,在写概括的时候，不能添加自己的见解，但是要用自己的语言概括。要做到开门见山，语言简洁.如果给的阅读材料是一个故事，应该用最简练的语言来说明故事讲述了什么，不能拖泥带水，而且要看原文是否有讲述该故事给你的启示或其中的一个道理。如果是说明性或描述性短文,你就必须用概括的文字来说明某种现象。如果是议论文的阅读短文,则要尽可能客观简要地转述阅读材料的观点。,第一段开头语：1)Accordingtothepassage,weknow2)Thisarticleismainlyabout3)Thewriterstatesthat4）Thepassagetellsusthat,第二段:过渡词引出主题句-自己的观点-理由开头用语：IdoagreewiththeauthorInsomeway,Iagreewith,butThisopinionsoundsrightbutishardlypractical.Itisdefinitelynotlikethat.Asamatteroffact,FrommypersonalanglealoneInmyopinion,FrommypersonalpointofviewAsfarasImconcerned,最后一段:总结句开头用语：Inconclusion,Inshort,Tomakealongstoryshort,Ingeneral,Inaword,Inbrief,Onthewhole,Allinall,读写任务【参考范文1】OseolaMcCarty,anordinaryworkerwithathriftylifestyle,donatedagreatdealofmoneytoauniversity,whicharousedpublicattentionandearnedherwidespreadsocialrecognition.Inreturn,shereceivedasenseofsatisfactionandfulfillment.Virtuousandwarm-hearted,theladyconcernedhasdonatedaconsiderableamountofsavingtohelpcollegestudentsstrugglingwithfinancialdifficulties,therebymotivatingpeopleatanyothercomeroftheworldtoparticipateinthisaffectionateactivity.,FromwhereIstand,notonlywilltheladysgenerositypaintaverybrilliantblueprintforthefutureofthosestudentsinwantofmoney,butalsoitwillrekindletheirfaithinlifebyconvincingthemthattheirlifegoaliselevatingandworthtrying.Giventhechoice,Iwouldmakedonationstothosewhostillliveunderthebuttonlineofthemodernlivingcondition.Convincingargumentasfollowscanbemadetosupportmystance.Foronething,generousandselflessdedicationmaytakeIdispensableassistancetothem,especiallyforthetimewhentheyareconfrontedwithpainandsorrow,twistsandturns.Foranother,justasanIndianoldsayinggoes,rosesinherhand,flavorinmine.Thatistosay.Greatsatisfactionwouldstepslowlyandgracefullyintothemercy-producerssoulsaswell.Tobringadmanyangel-likesmilesaspossibletooursociety,weshouldpracticemorebeneficialperformancebyleadingathriftylife.,【参考范文2】OseolaMcCartywasalaundrywomanformorethan75years.Sheearnedafewdollarseachtime.Butshedonated$150,000whichwasherlifesavingstohelpthestudentswhoneededfinancialhelp.,Ithinkherbehaviorisworthpraisingandveryunselfish.Everyoneshouldhelpothersinneed.Buthowmuchtodonateshouldbebasedonouractualsituation.The$150,000isveryhelpfultothestudentswhohavefinancialproblems.Theycanbuymanythingstheyneedasotherstudents.Andtheymaybemoregratefulandkinder.Therefore,itsmorelikelyforthemtohelpothersinthefuture.IfIamgoingtogivedonations,Iwillchoosestudentstoo.Theyareinthemostimportantperiodintheirlife.Theyneedtogetalongeducation.Theyhavetobuyalotofbooks,pencil-cases,pens,eras