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英语书面表达 解题方法 书面表达的五个基本步骤：第一步: “审” 第二步: “列” 第三步: “加” 第四步: “连” 第五步: “美”我们以一道书面表达练习为例，仔细学习书面表达的这5个解题步骤：书面表达题目：健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。第一步: “审” ：认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。即找出题目中的关键词。及时练习一：找出以上书面表达题目的关键词。travel stay at home visit friends or parents work 第二步: “列” 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。根据第一步找出的关键词和题目中的图表，用简单的句子列出文章的要点及时练习二：A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation. 第三步: “加” 加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁,漂亮。龙头（a nice head）：How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. 猪肚（a nice body）：A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.凤尾（a nice tail）：Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. 初步形成了一篇书面表达： How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well 其它优美的“龙头”：All of us have holidays in our daily life, but how do people spend their holiday? We did a survey and here are the results. Its nothing better than having a rest after working ! So how do people rest themselves on vacation? According to our survey, there are several ways. 其它优美的“凤尾”：All in all, different people have different ways to relax themselves. But I suggest that we should enjoy the holiday, then we may work better. So this year, why not consider going outside? Spend your healthy holiday and then get more energy for work orstudy. 及时练习三：将以下几个句子按顺序连成一片短文。1.Second , we should keep quiet in the library.2.First , we have to wear our uniforms to go to school, though most of us dont like them at all.3.Every school has its own rules for students. We have many school rules to follow in our daily life.4.Whats more, we ought to return books on time.5.Our school rules are good for us, I will try me best to follow them.6.Third , we must do lots of homework. 3 2 1 4 6 5 第四步: “连” 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。及时练习四：Lets play the game. 1._ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. 2.He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _.3.We like doing kinds of sports ,_ swimming, running and hiking.4._, he stood up. _he got out. _, he came back. _, he smiled. 1.Though 2.instead 3.such as 4.First ,Then,Next,Finally及时练习五：接下来，我们给我们在第三步中初步形成的书面表达加上关联词。How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also,some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. 第五步: “美” 选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . And some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. Also, to visit friends or parents makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. 及时练习六：我们现在一起来修改或美化其它句子：1.Good good study, day day up. Study well/hard,make progress every day.2.We should do sports a week once. We should do sports once a week.3.Save the environment is our duty. Saving the environment is our duty.4.There is going to have a meeting today. There is going to be a meeting today.5.I hope I can come true my dream. I hope I can achieve/realize my dream. I hope my dream can come true.6.Tomorrow will be very busy. I/He will be very busy tomorrow. Skill Two ：Express in different ways1.Our parents really wish us to work hard. Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study.2.The teenagers like the computers.The teenagers are fond of the computers.3.We shouldnt eat junk food.We should stay away from the junk food.4.When he spoke, he got more excited.The more he spoke, the more excited he got.5.We should learn English grammar. Its to English grammar. 现在我们来当一当小老师，根据评分标准，给别人的书面表达打分。以 “I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。(以下句型供参考）My dream is to be/to do/to goI enjoy /like/preferTo make my dream come true, I If my dream comes true Passage One I have a dreamHave you ever watched a bike racing? The riders are cool! Yeah, its my dream to be a professional bike rider.I fell in love with bike rider for the first time I rode. Since that, Ive been riding for 5 years. Some people think its dangerous, I dont think so. During a bike riding, you will be in a high speed and feel the wind rushes quickly. Exciting? That is!To make my dream come true, Ill practice more after middle school. Also, Ill watch more bike racing to learn from the riders. I hope my dream will come true, if so, I can enjoy the life I like best. Passage Two I have a dreamAnybody has a dream. But different people have different dreams.popular or rich. But my dream is very special, I just want to be a bird. Why I have such a dream? Just because I admire theyre free, they can do everything they want.When theyre flying in the sky, they look beautiful, even theyre the most beautiful animals. I really want to enjoy the feeling of flying in the sky. However, I know it wont be achieved any more. Its just a dream, in my heart. Passage Three I have a dreamMy dream is to be a basketball player. I like it because I think it very interesting. It can make me become very happy and healthy. To make me dream come true. I need try to do it. And I need take some time to do it. I need practice every day.If my dream come true, I will more try to do it. I Have A DreamMy biggest dream is to see the reality through my own eyes but not through the books. Since I had the dream, Ive fallen in love with history and math. History is the truth and math will open a door. To make my dream come true, I shall study hard. Someday, a strange machine that can turn back time will be built by me. If my dream comes true, Ill sail across the ocean time. Ill watch Jesus rise if he ever did. What if its a fake? Ill come back as the fire to lead people whore blinded by the old beliefs. Ill be great because I have a dream and dreams will help mankind to reach the reality and be wise. 1.表示并列或递进: and 和；而, as well as 和一样 , bothand. 和都, not onlybut also 不但而且, neithernor 既不也不 2.表示选择: or或者 eitheror 或者或者；要么要么 3.表示转折: but 但是 however 然而 although尽管 though尽管 after all毕竟4.表示因果: because因为 so因此 therefore因此, 所以 5.表示条件: if 如果 unless除非 6.表示对比: instead 代替; 顶替; 更换 notbut 不是而是 on the one handon the other hand一方面另一方面 on the one hand I have to work; on the other hand I have many visitors to see 7.表示解释: for example=for instance例如 such as 例如 That is to say=That means 那就是说，即意味着 in other words换句话说 8.表示顺序: to begin with首先；本来 first of all 首先 first =firstly 第一 second= secondly 第二then然后；接着；于是 next接下来 finally 最后；终于 in the end最后；终于later 以后；随后 since then 此后；从此一直 from then on 从那时起 9.表示强调: also 出自之外；并且；也 besides 而且；此外 Whats more. 而且 even worse更糟糕的是 actually 事实上 in fact 事实上 10.表示结论: in a word 总之 in my opinion all in all总而言之 altogether总之generally speaking 总的来说 I to study English? there are four key points to study Engl is h: l is tening, speaking, reading and writing. Firstly, we should be brave to talk with others in Engl is h. By doing th is , we can improve ore talking and l is tening skill. Secondly, we should try to l is ten to all kinds of Engl is h programmes as much as possible. In th is way, we can gradually improve our pronunciation. Thirdly, we should of ten read Engl is h books. When we come across a new word. We should guess its meaning through the contest first. then look it up in the dictionary to have a check. I thin, it is a good way of reading. Fourthly, we should practice our writing skills. Whenever we have any idea, we should get the pen and write it down at once. It is very important to avoid writing in Chinese way and using the Chinese grammar. As long as we l is ten, speak, read and write more, we are sure to make remarkable proGREss! II 段的学习生活即将结束，在离校之前，同学们讨论怎样做一件有意义的事。请根据表中的信息，以How to do a meaningful thing?为题，写一篇英语短文，为某英语报举办的征文比赛投稿。有的同学建议 给学校买礼物，感谢母校老师 另外一些同学建议 用零花钱给灾区和贫困地区的学生买学习用品你的建议 .提示用语：灾区：disaster areaHow to do a meaningful thing?Well leave school soon. Now my classmates are discussing_参考范文：How to do a meaningful thing?Well leave school soon. Now my classmates are discussing how to do a meaningful thing before leaving school. Some students think we should buy a proper gift for our school and thank the teachers for helping and taking care of us. Others think we should buy pencils, pens, notebooks, schoolbags and some other school things for the children in the disaster areas and poor areas.I think we can As students, we should thank those who help us. We should help those in need and do a bit for our society.假如你叫张良，参加了英语月刊杂志社开展的“有烦恼向谁说”的调查活动，调查结果如表格所示，请用英语根据提示给编辑写一封信，内容包括：调查结果（不局限于用分数表达），方式，理由及个人观点。参考范文：Dear Editor,I am a student of Grade Nine. We have made a survey “To whom you go when you are in trouble”。 Here are the results. Most of the students will go to their classmates or friends when getting in trouble because theyre almost the same age,they can talk with, communicate with and understand each other easily. They are patient enough to listen to their problems. Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much. They can be trusted by these students. Only a few students solve their problems all by themselves. They are shy. They have few friends. They hate to talk with others and cant get on well with others.In my opinion, when meeting with troubles, wed better ask our teachers, parents, friends or classmates for help.Best wishes!Yours,Zhang Liang健康是一个重要话题，健康的身心，能使我们和谐相处，愉快的学习。为此，学校英语广播站举行“健康成长”征文比赛活动。请你根据要求写一篇80词以上的短文。内容要求：1. 健康重要。2. 如何做到身心健康（饮食、起居、运动、沟通）。参考词汇：health, keep healthy, keep a balanced diet, communicate, exercise, relax, junk food, enough sleep参考范文：Growing Up HeathilyGrowing up heathily is our duty. Every one of us should try our best to keep ourselves healthy.First of all, keep a balanced diet. We should eat a lot of vegetables and fruit every day. Dont eat junk food. Drink water instead of cola. ndly, get enough sleep and enough exercise. Early to bed and early to rise help a lot to our health. Try to sleep eight or nine hours every night. Try to exercise every day or at least two or three times a week and relax ourselves by listening to light music. sides the physical health, we also need friendship. We should try to get along well with people around us. We can share our problems and happiness with them. And we should often communicate with our parents and teachers. Communication plays an important part in our life.A healthy lifestyle and communicating well with others can help us grow up healthily.回想三年的英语学习历程，丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下 了许多难忘的印象。请你以“What should we do in English class?”为题 写一篇英语短文，谈谈在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做，才能使英语学习 更有效。提示：（1） Listen to the teacher.（2） Take part in activities.（3） Be confident in ourselves.参考词汇：take notes, work in groups with， not be afraid of参考范文：What should we do in English class?In English class, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary. Try to answer questions in English. We should take part in all kinds of activities, like reading, writing, having discussions and playing games. We need to work in groups with our classmates to help each other and learn from each other.Its very important to be confident. Speak English loudly in front of the class and never be afraid of making mistakes. In this way, we can make much progress.网络正逐渐走进我们的生活，而其利弊也都不同程度地显现了出来。请以Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet 为题，写一篇80字左右的短文。 提示：可以从read news, e-mail, chat, study, play games, see the pictures or films even the unhealthy ones等方面加以评论。 文：Advantages and Disadvantages of the InternetInternet is now coming into our life. It brings us not only a lot of convenience , happiness but also troubles. Some students use Internet as a tool to study. They look up the meanings of the words, a translated form of a sentence, the background of an event or a story , the information of a company or a famous person, etc. They also read news or send e-mails through it. Internet helps them learn more and study well.On the other hand, some students play games, chat with friends , see the pictures or films even the unhealthy ones on the Internet the whole day. They are not interested in their subjects. Its very dangerous for them!The Internets advantages and disadvantages are shown clearly to us. I think we should make good use of it and stay away from the unhealthy websites.初中生活即将结束，新的生活即将开启，请为你最要好的同学写一段毕业留言：他（她）给你留下的深刻印象、你们在一起的快乐时光以及对他（她）最美好 的祝愿。参考范文： Our life in middle school will come to an end soon.Ill never forget you.You are an outgoing boy.Theres always a smile on your face and everybody likes to make friends with you. We used to play basketball on the playground.Sometimes we went to the park and had a good time there.I always laughed a lot when I was with you .At this very moment Im saying goodbye to you, I just want to give you my best wishes:I hope you are happy and healthy forever.I hope you are successful in the future.x x x初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想（请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名）。提示词供参考。three years， memories， one of， one day， think， happy/ sorry_6请用英语写一篇题为“The teacher I never forget”的短文。内容包括： 1、人物的外貌、性格、爱好；2、 使你难忘之处；3、 感谢老师，祝福老师。The Teacher I Never ForgeterHow time flies! Three years has passed since I became a middle school student. I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers. The teacher I never forget is _参考范文：The Teacher I Never ForgeterHow time flies! Three years has passed since I became a middle school student. I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers. The teacher I never forget is Mr Zhang, an English teacher. Hes a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. Hes humorous and always makes his class lively and interesting. Hes kind but is strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we dont know. He often tells us that its no use memorizing new words without understanding. My English has greatly improved with his help. I must say many thanks to Mr Zhang. I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future.How time flies！ I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years life. On of them impressed me very much. I still remember， when I began to learn English， I found it too difficult.