高考英语二轮复习 写作系列 道歉信课件.ppt

道歉信 技法点拨 什么是道歉信 道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事 给别人带来了麻烦或损失 发觉后要立即写信给对方赔礼道歉时写的信件 道歉是一种礼貌 道歉信要写得坦率 诚恳 道歉信通常包括三部分内容 1 表示歉意 道歉的原由 2 出现差错的原因 提出弥补措施 3 请求原谅 语言要诚挚 解释的理由要真实 好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解 还会增进彼此的感情 写作 三步曲 表示歉意说明具体原因 提出补救办法再次致歉 希望得到理解 structures para1 简明说明写信目的 为自己的过失表示歉意 希望得到对方的谅解 para2 详细说明当时情况 解释原因 语气要诚恳 para3 提出补救方法 具体提出自己的想法 希望能弥补过失 消除误会 para4 再次表示歉意 愿意为此负责 希望以后不再出现类似不愉快事件 i mverysorrythatican tgoonatriptobeijingwithyounextweekend whichihavepromisedyou i mwritingtotellyouthereasonforit justnow mycousin liming whowentabroadforfurthereducationlastyear informedmethathewouldreturnthenextsaturdaymorning heaskedmetopickhimupattheairportwithhisparents asyouknow wehaven tseeneachotherforaboutayear soi llhavetohelphiminthefirstplace ireallyhopethatyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandme iwouldappreciateitifyouallowmetofixanothertimetoshowyouaroundsomeplacesofinterestinbeijing wishyouhaveagoodtimethisweekend 未能赴约原因 1 我叔叔从美国回来 2 30时下飞机 然而 我爸爸妈妈没时间去接 因此我不得不去机场接他 yesterdayafternoon myunclecamefromamericaandgotoffat2 30 butmyparentshadnotimetopickhimup inwhichcaseihadtomeethimattheairport afterthatitwastoolatetomeetyou thusimissedourappointment 2 我妹妹生病了 她才四岁 不能照顾自己 而爸爸妈妈又在上班 于是我不得不在家照顾妹妹 myyoungersisterhadabadfever sheistooyoungtolookafterherself andmyparentswereatwork therefore inthatcase ihadtostayathometotakecareofher thatcausedmeunabletomeetyouasappointed myyoungersisterhadabadfever sheistooyoungtolookafterherself andmyparentswereatwork inwhichcaseihadtostayathometotakecareofher thatcausedmeunabletomeetyouasappointed thatisowingtothefactthatmyyoungerbrothersuddenlyfellillandwastakentoahospitalthismorning ihavetogothereimmediatelyandtakecareofhim astoldbythedoctorincharge itwilltakearoundfivedaysforhimtorecover 4 thereisanenglishspeechcontesttobeheldthisweekend ihavejustbeeninformedthatmyteacherfinallychoosesmetoparticipateinitonbehalfofourschool thisisanopportunitytobothdisplayandenhancemyabilities soiamafraidicannotbepresentattheairport 5 iamindeedverysorrythatimissedthe ifeelawfulaboutitandwantyoutoknowwhathappenedthatday isuddenlyfellsickearlythatmorningandmyparentshadtosendmetothehospital 6 unfortunately itismuchtomyregretthaticannotjoinyouandyourfamily becauseiwillbefullyoccupiedthenforanimportantexamcomingthedayaftertomorrow part1开头常用句式 1 iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyoufor 2 iwouldliketoexpressmydeepestapologyfornotbeingableto 3 iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyouformyfailingto 4 iamwritingthislettertoexpressmyregret 5 ifeeldreadfulabout part1开头常用句式 6 imustbegyourforgivenessfor 7 iamverysorrytosaythat 8 excusemeformynotbeingableto 9 pleaseacceptmysincereapologyfor 10 hereismydeepestapologyfor 11 iamterriblesorry but part2结尾常用句式 1 pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain 2 willyoupleaseacceptmyapology 3 iamsorryforanyconveniencecaused 4 pleaseacceptmyapology idohopeyouwillunderstandmeandexcusemeformycarelessness6 onceagain iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused 7 pleaseacceptmysincereapologiesforthisunhappyexperience 8 isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletothinkinmypositionandacceptmyapologies part3其他常用句式 1 wouldyoumindifichangetheappointmenttime 2 woulditbeconvenientforyou 3 iamreallysorryforthetrouble 4 itisverykindofyoutoaskusto but toourregret wecannotacceptit 5 iamsorryicannot anditrustthatyouwillbeabletounderstand 6 iwanttoletyouknowhowregretfuliamfeelingnow 7 iamsorrythatiwillnotbeableto dueto 8 ihopethatthisdoesnotcauseyoutoomuchinconvenience 9 iwantyoutoknowhowbadlywefeelaboutitandtoassureyouthatitwillnothappenagain 10 thankyouforbeingpatientwithus 11 inordertoavoid happeningagain ihave part4常用模板 模板1 过去没有完成的事情 iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyouformyfailingto thereasonisthat iamsorrythaticannotfinishintime butisitpossiblethatimakeupthelossby ifso iwillputeverythingelseasideto idohopethatyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology 模板2 将来不能做的事情 muchtomyregret iamterriblysorrythatiamunableto itismainlybecauseatthattimeiwillbefulloccupiedbywhichisquiteoutofmyexpectation andthatconflictswithyour thereforeiamforcedtoadjustmyscheduleandcannotmakemypresenceonyour isincerelyhopethatyouwillenjoyagoodtime bytheway canwehavedinnertogethersometimenextweek ihopetoseeyousoon iamreallysorryagainanditrustthatyouwillunderstand 实战演练 假如你是新华中学的学生李华 上周在外教mr jackson的口语课上使用手机被老师发现 手机被收走 请用英语给外教写一封道歉信 内容应包括以下要点 1 表示歉意 2 解释上课使用手机的原因 3 提出自己的请求并适当表态 注意 1 可适当添加细节使文章连贯 字数100 2 信的开头和结尾已给出 不计入总词数 onepossibleversion dearmr jackson i mreallysorryaboutmyusingthemobilephoneinyourlecturelastweek pleaseacceptmyheart feltapologyforbeingsorudeastudent iknowanywordmightsoundamade upexcuse butididnotusethemobilephonefornoreason iwastryingtofindapart timejoblastweekendthatday igotajobofferandtheyneededmyfurtherinformationimmediately therefore ihadnootherchoicebuttotrysendingthematextmessageinclassandthatwasexactlywhatiwasdoingwhenyoud