SAT写作满分范文鉴赏_16.pdf

Prompt Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and assignment below Tough challenges reveal our strengths and weaknesses This statement is certainly true adversity helps us discover who we are Hardships can often lead us to examine who we are and to question what is important in life In fact people who have experienced seriously adverse events frequently report that they were positively changed by their negative experiences Assignment Do you think that ease does not challenge us and that we need adversity to help us discover who we are Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading studies experience or observations SAT 作文满分范文 7 含点评 Sample Essay Score of 6 SAT 写作 6 分范文 Everyone goes through their lives seeing and experiencing different things At times these different situations may cause one to act differently than another would in the same situation It can be readily stated that Ease does not challenge us adversity helps us discover who we are Through literature one can see how this statement proves to be true In the play The Enemy of the People by Henrik Ibsen the protagonist Dr Stockholm faced adversity and through that was able to discover his true beliefs and who he was Before Dr Stockholm was put in a situation where he had to face adversity he had lived his life with mild ease and regularity He acted just like everyone else in the town he lived in Years later he discovered that the popular bath houses was infected with bacteria Determined to spread his findings Dr Stockholm went to the newspaper and the local governing office to try and make his discovery known However both the paper and the government weren t as inspired to really let the public know about this serious problem due to the popularity of the bath houses As a result Dr Stockholm was forced to face adversity and find a way to achieve his previously set goal Through adversity Stockholm was able to truely see how his personality was He was able to understand his severe discontent with the government and society as a whole In essence Stockholm was able to discover his actual self This however only happened when he was faced with a challenge The book Where the Heart is by Billie Letts also used adversity to portray it s characters true being The protagonist Novalee Nation was placed in a situation where she had to realize and conquer adversity Novalee was a young girl of 17 who was pregnant She had experienced extreme hardship her whole life in the trailer park environment that she had previously resided in She also received lots of abuse from her boyfriend who impregnated her In the story he had left her stranded in a K Mart all by herself while she was pregnant All alone Novalle had to find a SAT考试网w w w s a t b b s c n way to keep herself and her baby alive Along the way through adversity Novalle found her true kind self She also made countless discoveries through meeting different people Among those things was her true love for photography and literature and most of all her yearning for love in her life In the face of adversity we all act differently We each have different ideas and methods that we are accustomed to use for different situations By acting and making decisions on our own as we are often times forced to do when given a challenge we are able to find out who we truely are and what we truely believe in The characters Dr Stockholm and Novalee Nation are examples of that kind of people in literature However in literature and life it is all the same Ease does not challenge us adversity helps us discover who we are Score Explanation SAT 写作 6 分范文点评 This response demonstrates clear and consistent mastery The writer effectively and insightfully develops the point of view that in acting and making decisions on our own as we are often times forced to do when given a challenge we are able to find out who we truely are and what we truely believe in The writer also demonstrates outstanding critical thinking by focusing on two literary examples Dr Stockmann from An Enemy of the People and Novalee Nation from Where the Heart Is to support this position First the essay describes how Dr Stockmann lived a life with mild ease until he alone tried to spread the news of a public health hazard Through this adversity he came to understand his severe discontent with the government and society as a whole Next the essay explains Novalee s life of hardship and abuse and her final abandonment by her boyfriend Forced to find a way to keep herself and her baby alive Novalee is able to find her true kind self The strong organization and focus of the essay allow it to demonstrate clear coherence and smooth progression of ideas The essay also demonstrates meaningful sentence variety and exhibits skillful use of language In the play The Enemy of the People by Henrik Ibsen the protagonist Dr Stockholm faced adversity and 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