福建省武平县实验中学中考英语 作文拿高分指导建议.doc

2015中考英语作文拿高分指导建议 “书面表达是中考必考题型。从2011年2014年龙岩市中考题的书面表达看，通常有三种形式，即1.看图作文，2.根据汉语提示作文，3.书信、日记、通知、留言、假条等。那么，学生如何在中考时写好一篇获高分的作文呢？一、审题注重“读”、“看”“发挥”等技巧1, 以图表提供情景的，要以“读”为主。读懂图表中的数据、时间、编码、序号以及相互间的变化关系，并对信息分析、推断、筛选、概括；注意内容的准确性，尤其是数据、时间不能错。2, 以图画提供情景的，要以“看”为主。细心观察图中的人物、景物、文字、环境、数字等，弄清写作意图，通过分析把握逻辑联系，找出主题并借助所给文字，把图中信息转化成文章。“但要注意，文章不能停留在图画的浅层表面，要表达出提供情景的意图和内涵。3,以提纲提供情景的，重在“发挥”。写作时把这些提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，文章要覆盖各个提纲的要点。以书信格式提供情景的，注重“格式”。要明白英文书信格式与中文有所不同。正确的格式是：信纸右上角是写信人的地址和日期，地址按从小到大顺序排列，左边顶格写收信人姓名，然后写正文、祝愿、写信人签名。二、动笔前审题、圈要点、列提纲、定基调一个不能少在动笔做题前要心里有数，这样才能不至于走弯路,尤其要在审题、圈要点、列提纲、定基调这几方面，做足功课，然后才能事半功倍，易得高分。审题目要切中题意，审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。圈要点防止遗漏要点，要点是给分的重要因素。要充分发挥观察力，把情景中给出的要点逐条列出。列提纲为写作做好准备。根据短文的中心思想，将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。定基调。即定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。三、写作中做好“七要素”准能得高分即使平时成绩一般的学生，只要熟练把握以下六点，一般可得高分。1.避免使用汉语式英语。尽量用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，避免重复和呆板。多用简单句型,可多用陈述句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等复杂的句型。2.灵活运用语法、句法知识。语态、时态要准确，主谓语一致，注意人称代词的宾格形式，注意冠词用法、拼写、标点、大小写等。3. 用到表示篇章结构段落框架的词块，如表示层次的词块：first,second,third,finally.in short(in a word),表示对比的词块：on the one hand.on the other hand;表示列举的词块：for example,such as,and so on,表示意思递进的词块：whats more,not only.but also,表示名言、谚语的词块：there is no doubt that.,every coin has two sides.actions speak louder than words. easier said than done.if everyone makes a comtribution to protecting the environment,our world will become more and more beautiful.4. 借用武平实验中学作文评分量化表，学会评析和衡量优秀作文得分.评价内容评分要点得分语言（5分）内容要点齐全，单词拼写正确，大小写规范，字数符合要求。 语法（5分）人称、时态运用准确。 篇章（5分） 开头、中间和结尾的结构布局合理，段落分明，层次清楚，详略得当，上下文间能恰当使用连词。 总得分（15分）附: 2015年中考英语24个话题作文范文汇编 话题一：个人情况 人物介绍1、(河南省卷) 假如你叫张蒙，班主任李老师想了解班级同学的状况，以便有针对性地对学生进行考前心理疏导。请你根据下面的内容要求，给班主任李老师写封e-mail，说明自己的情况，并请她给你提一些建议。内容要求：1. 学习任务重,睡眠不足,缺少体育活动。同学间缺乏沟通和交流。2. 在家不允许看电视、上网、听音乐等。参考范文:dear ms li,im very glad to write to you. i have a lot of troubles these days. every day i have a lot of homework to do at school. i dont enough time to sleep. i nearly have no time to do sports. my friends and i can hardly find time to talk, or play together. when i get back home from school, im not allowed to watch tv, surf the internet or listen to my favourite music. i feel worried about them. i dont know what i should do. could you please give me some suggestions?best wishes.2. (2014山东)my favorite teacher 1.what subject does your favorite teacher teach? 2.what does he/she look like? how about his/her personal traits(性格)? 3. tell a story how he /she help you? 4.what do you want to say to him/her when you meet in the future? 参考范文：mr wang is my favorite teacher. he teaches me math. he is tall, he has short,bak hair and small eyes. he is outgoing and helpful. his classes are always lively and interesting. he is kind and helpful to us. last year, i failed a math exam. i was sad and upset. but mr wang encouraged me . he always told me,”you can do it, believe in yourself.” because of him, i worked harder. finally, i did well in math. when i meet mr wang one day, i will be excited and say hello and thanks to him.3.（2011山东青岛）假设你喜欢的老师是mr. wang 或者ms. wang.请根据下面的提示，以my favorite teacher 为题目，用英语写一篇短文。要求：1. 必须包括description friendship the best quality 三个方面的内容，括号内的提示可以任意选择或可以适当发挥。description (appearance, character)favorite teacher friendship (an event between you; the story of becoming friends)the best quality （kind; warm-hearted; strict; helpful）参考范文：my favorite teacher is ms. wang. she is a 36- year-old woman. but she is tall and has long straight hair. and she often wears black pants and a white shirt. she teaches us english. we all like listening to her. her classes are very interesting and creative. because she has different ways of teaching. but she is very strict with us in everything. she is kind-hearted. we all know she is always ready to help others. when we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. we all like her, and she likes us, too. 4.(中考作文)the most beautiful teacher 1,张丽莉，一位善良勇敢的老师，热爱学生，把许多时间献给需要帮助和有困难的学生。2.2012年5月8日，一辆公共汽车突然失控冲向校门口的学生，她尽力把两个学生推到安全之处，学生得救了，她自己却受重伤。3.她被誉为“最美教师”。4.我们祝愿她早日康复，同时，向她学习，把校园建设成 更加漂亮和安全的地方提供词：push to safety, 参考范文： recently, the story of the most beautiful teacher is well known to people around china. zhanglili is a kind and brave teacher. she loves her students and she spends much of her time helping the students in need. on may 8th, 2012,when she found a bus was out of control and running toward the students in front of the school. she tried her best to push them to safety, the students were saved.however, zhanglili was badly hurt by the bus. she is called the most beautiful teacher. many people go to see her in the hospital and send money to her. we wish miss zhang will be well soon. at the same time, we should learn from her and make our school a more beautiful and safer place.话题二：家庭、朋友与周围的人1.李小虎沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢？请用下面所给的提示词写一篇短文。提示词： give up concentrate on be (become)interested in参考答案：li xiaohu spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. as a close friend of his, i must do something to help him. first, i must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. so he must give it up. i can play more sports with him after school. maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. and then ill ask him to concentrate more on his study. of course, i will try my best to help him with all his subjects. i think i can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. at the same time, ill ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. if i try these, im sure he will make great progress soon.2、（江苏苏州）假如你将代表你校2015届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，发言稿的内容要点如下。回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助祝愿考生自拟，至少两点参考答案:good afternoon, my dear teachers and fellow graduates,it is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2015. it has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. we have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers effort, our parents support, and our classmates help. at this moment, id like to thank all of you for what you have done for us. i wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future! goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends!thank you for listening.3、（辽宁大连）假如你是初三学生杨帆，在复习备考阶段遇到烦恼时。你的笔友mike给过你很多鼓励。现在请你给他写封回信，感谢他对你的鼓励和帮助。提示1. what troubled you? 2. how did he encourage you? 3. thanks for his help.参考答案:dear mike, although i havent written to you for a long time, id like to thank you from my the bottom of my heart. since i failed in the pe test, ive lost interest in studying anything. i believed no matter how hard i worked. i wouldnt realize my dream to be a famous senior high school. its you who encouraged me to overcome myself. what you said is right. whether to enter an ideal school is not my real goal. the most important thing is that one should always dream to be better. as long as i try my best with the spirit of not giving up, everything will be ok. having a friend like you, im sure well make progress together. thank you. 4.（2014陕西）在日常生活中，你看到身边有哪些不良现象？请列举一些并就某些方面说说你的做法和想法。提示：speak loudly, cut in line(插队), waste food, unfriendly(冷漠的), offer no help要求：不少于80词。（开头结尾已给出）（参考范文）in our daily life, i usually see some bad behavior around us. for example, i often hear people speak and laugh loudly in public. it is too noisy. some people cut in line while others are waiting. it makes me unhappy. and in our school dining hall, i often see students waste food. at times, people seem unfriendly and offer no help when others are in trouble. for me, my parents are strict with me. they often tell me to behave well. so i never drop litter about. and i never draw on the desk or on the wall. i am polite to old people.i think if everyone can think more of others,well have a betterliving environment.5.【2011山东聊城】许多孩子都热衷于上网，但上网对学生而言有利有弊。请你根据下表提供的信息用英语写一篇小短文，描述上网的优点和缺点，谈谈自己的看法以及自己上网会怎么做。优点:快速获得大量的信息。正确运用网络有助于学习。广交朋友。缺点:经常玩游戏、聊天浪费时间和金钱并且不利于学习。可能上当受骗。你的看法和做法.提示：disadvantage n. 缺点 cheat vt. 欺骗 go online上网参考范文：today many students are interested in going online. but it has advantages and disadvantages. the advantages are: today many students are interested in going online. but it has advantages and disadvantages. the advantages are: we can get a lot of information quickly, it is useful for learning and we can make more friends. the disadvantages are: playing games and chatting can waste time and money, it isnt good for our study. you can be cheated when you go online. i think going online is good for me. i plan to go online for an hour everyday. if you make a plan, you can find it is very useful. we use it to open to expand the field of vision, the study knowledge, but must certainly grasp the discretion. 话题四：个人情感1、（2011烟台）life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 请你以“learn to smile”为题，写一篇100词左右的文章。要点：面对困难与烦恼学会对自己微笑（考试失利、被别人误解等）。（1）使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己。（2）有益于身心健康。 学会对他人微笑 （1）便于与他人之间的交流。（2）给别人带来快乐,自己也快乐。 微笑是一种语言,人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。参考词汇： 对某人微笑 smile at sb. 误解 misunderstand （参考范文）do you like smiling? i think you should learn to smile . first, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. if you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, dont be sad. just smile at yourself . smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. and smile can also keep you healthy. second, learn to smile at others. it will make you communicate better with people. smiling at others makes yourself happy as well. in a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. it passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. living with a smile ,every day will be sunny. 2.（中考试题）假如你是某杂志社编辑mr. knowledgeable,根据中学生 bob的来信内容，给他写封回信，帮助解决他所遇到的问题。字数80100.dear knowledgeable, my problem is that i cant get on with my family. my parents always say “no” to my ideas without any reason. so i often quarrel(吵架) with them. also, my brother is not very nice to me. he always refuses to let me watch my favorite tv show. instead, he watches whatever he wants until late at night. i dont think this is fair. at home, i always feel lonely and nervous. is that normal? what can i do?（参考范文）dear bob,its normal to have these feelings. why dont you talk about these feelings with your family? first,its not right to quarrel with your parents. i dont think quarrelling can solve problems. youd better have a talk with your parents. tell them to have a discussion with you before saying “no” to your ideas. second, why not sit down and communicate with your brother? you should explain that you dont mind him watching tv all the time. however, he should let you watch your favourite tv show. i hope things will be better soon.话题三：学校生活 1.（四川宜宾）某英语报社面向全国初中学生开展一次征文活动，主题为学校的学习生活。请根据一下要求写一篇征文。内容要求：1.在校生活感受： 2.。最喜欢的（如科目，老师）及原因3.课外爱好 4.今后的学习或生活计划参考作文：my school life is very interesting and happy. i like english best of all the subjects in the school. because it can make me know something new about the world and help make friends with a lot of foreigners. i often play basketball with my classmates at school and surf the internet at home. i will study hard at other subjects from now on in order that i can enter a better high school.2、（安徽省卷）一个美国中学生代表团将来你校交流学习，并与你校学生座谈。请你根据表格中的内容写一个发言稿，介绍你校学生开展小组合作学习和自主学习的情况。小组合作学习1.互相帮助 2.学会倾听 3.与他人合作 4.发表个人见解 自主学习1.制定学习计划 2.合理安排时间 3.独立思考4.做学习的主人 参考词汇：study in groups, work together, make good use of time参考答案：dear friend, welcome to our school. i would like to talk about two ways of study in our school. the first way is to study in groups. when we study in groups, we can help each other. we can learn to listen to others and how to work together. also, everyone can have chances to express his own ideas. the other way we like is to study by ourselves. we can make our own plans for study and learn to make good use of time. we can also learn to think by ourselves. and the most important thing is that we we can be the master of our own study thanks for listening!3、（江苏常州）假设你是李雷，你在上个月参加了学校的英语角活动，请你把参加活动的情况用英语写一封信告诉你的笔友王飞。信的内容还应包括以下要点：l.活动时间及地点； 2参加人员：一些学生和教师；3活动内容：阅读英语报刊，练习英语口语，学唱英语歌曲；4感受：口语有提高，上课能讲英语了 参考范文：dear wang fei, im glad you are interested in the english corner. id like to tell you something about it.last month we had the english corner on friday afternoons in the library of our school. not only a few students but also two teachers took part in it. some of us read english books and newspapers. some of us practiced spoken english. the teachers also taught us english songs.since i took part in the english corner, my spoken english has improved. now im able to speak english in front of the class. and i find it not so difficult to learn english as before.4.(2011安徽)如今，中学生的假期生活发生了很大变化。假定你是李明，美国的笔友lisa想了解中国学生现在的假期生活。请写封回信。要点如下： 学习和休闲仍然重要；帮忙做家务或干农活； 参加社会活动，做志愿者工作，帮助他人。参考词汇 : volunteer 志愿者参考范文：dear lisa,im glad to have received your letter. our holiday life has changed a lot. learning and relaxing are still very important to us. besides, we often help our parents do housework or farm work. through that, we realize how hard our parents work every day. and we can make a habit of laboring at the same time. also, we take an active part in social activities as volunteers. sometimes, we go to the streets to collect rubbish or go to the hospital to cheer up the sick children. we try our best to help people in need and make our hometown more beautiful. we find great pleasure in all these activities. best wishes ! 话题四：科普知识与现代技术1、(四川成都) 上周，你们班就初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。现在，请你根据下表用英语写一篇介绍讨论情况的短文。注意：1短文须包括写作提示和表格中所列的全部内容； 2时态运用正确，书写工整规范；3词数80-100个左右。 生词提示：electric adj. 电动的 whether conj 能否讨论结果25人表示同意35人表示不同意理由1这样很方便2能节约上学途中的时间1年龄太小，骑电动自行车不安全2早上交通拥挤，骑电动自行车也快不起来参考作文：last week, our school had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to school. 25 students of our class agreed with it, because they say it was convenient for them and it could take less time to go to school. but the other 35 students didnt agree with them. they said it was not safe for the junior students to get to school by electric bicycles, for they were too young. they also said in the morning the traffic was very busy and the students couldnt ride electric bicycles quickly.2、关于中学生使用手机赞成意见：1.现在是信息社会，手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求助。3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。4.只要正确使用好手机，紧跟时间并无过错，追求时尚可以理解，但学习是首要任务。反对意见：1.学校已提供了公共电话，因此手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且花费较多。2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。参考作文：dear editor,nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. in my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school.as we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. a mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. the mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to make the best use of it. suppose theres a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately. therere also some games in the mobile phone. we can relax ourselves by playing them when were tired of our studies. in my opinion, its not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way. 话题五：人际关系1、（陕西省卷）假如你是han mei, 下面是一封你的笔友alice 给你发来的e-mail,请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。提示词语：listen to, mothers love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smiledear han mei, im afraid ive got a big problem recently. my mother talks too much to me. she always tells me, “be careful while crossing the street.” “put on more clothes.” “did you do a good job at school?” and so on. im annoyed(烦恼)。what shall i do? a参考答案:dear alice, as a teenager, i met the same problem as you. but now i can get along better with my mother. here are some ideas for you. your mother talks much, because she cares about you. maybe its not a good way, but it shows your mothers love. so i think you should listen to her. if your opinions are different from your mothers, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about. if your mother doesnt take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile. i hope what i say here can help you a lot.话题六：计划与愿望1、(广西来宾)暑假即将来临，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文，谈谈你的暑假计划。1.好好休息，学会放松。 2. 读书，因为读书既有趣又能学到许多知识。3.陪父母聊天，多帮他们做家务。4.参加社会活动，了解社会。.参考词汇：知识knowledge,社会活动social activities, 放松relax,社会society 范文：the summer holiday is coming; im going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. i will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. i will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them do some housework, i am going to take part in the social activities so that i can know more about the society.2、(湖北武汉)暑假将至，同学们就自己暑假生活安排进行了交流。请你用英语向美籍教师mr. brown介绍有关情况以及自己的暑期计划。内容应包括以下要点：1.有的同学打算外出旅游，放松一下。2.有的同学计划在家中多读书，为将来的学习做准备。3.有的同学准备参加体育锻炼，保持身体健康。 4.谈谈自己的暑期安排。summer vacation is coming. we have different plans for i