（浙江省选考）10月高考英语 专题二 写作指导与模拟训练 第一节 应用文.doc

专题二写作指导与模拟训练第一节应用文电子邮件是通过网络发送的信件，其格式都是由计算机中的电子邮件程序预先设定的，一般只要按部就班就能完成电子邮件的写作。电子邮件的正文内容和格式要求与纸质信件一样，只是发送的方式不同而已。高考中一般对电子邮件的格式考查不作要求，因此我们应将重点放在正文的写作上，写正文时关键要注意以下几点：1首先要明确写给谁。不同的收信人，语气不同。2写电子邮件要言简意赅，即尽可能使用简短明了的句子，避免有很多从句的长句复杂句。当然，对重点部分要作详细介绍。3多使用主动语态。多使用主动语态会使电子邮件的语言风格直接有力，句子结构简洁明了。4风格自然化、口语化。邮件写作文体不同于其它文体，它有着自身的特点，语言要自然、流畅，如同面对面的口语交谈。这种写作的优势在于富有亲和力，能使读者见信如见人。常用句式havent seen you for ages.glad to hear from you.好久不见了，很高兴收到你的来信。your letter came to me this morning.我今天早上收到了你的来信。im writing to ask if you can come this summer holiday.我写信询问你今年暑假能不能来。dear (收信人)，i was excited to hear that you would come to (地点)now let me tell you something different you may meet here.开头写信目的to begin with， (不同点1) here is totally different from that in your place.it (现象)so youd better (建议1).another bit difference is (不同点2)you have to try to (建议2)im sure you can do it.主体具体问题1具体问题2finally，please (请求) if possible.thank you very much.i am looking forward to meeting you.yours， (写信人)结尾表达自己的想法加拿大高中生david在因特网(internet)上登出一则启事(notice)，希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言、文化(culture)。假设你是李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给david发一封电子邮件。要点如下：1你怎样得知david的愿望；2你愿意成为他的朋友；3你打算如何帮助他；4许诺并盼望他的回复。注意：词数80左右。句式升级要点一：了解愿望1ive learned it from the internet that you want to make a chinese friend so as to learn the chinese language and culture.(把划线部分改为从句)ive learned it from the internet that you want to make a chinese friend .要点二：如何帮助2if you have the opportunity to come to china, ill teach you how to speak chinese.(用时间状语从句改写) 要点三：表示决心3i am going to help you as much as i can.(同义句转换)i am going to help you .用恰当的过渡词和句式完成写作 .申请信申请信是个人或集体向组织、机关、企事业单位或社会团体表述愿望，提出请求时使用的一种信函，主要包括求职信、加入某组织的申请信、求学信等等。作为一种比较正式的信函，申请信要求语言既要有礼貌又要正式。常用句式 i am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for.我特地写信给贵方，对于您最近在广告上登出的招聘的信息，我很感兴趣。i would be grateful if you could give me an early reply about the result of my application.如果您能够早日就我的申请给予回复，我将不胜感激。dear (收信人)，i learned from the (报纸等信息来源) that (发布信息的单位名) needs a (申请的具体内容，如职位)im really interested in (简单表达自己对申请内容的渴望)开头写信目的(申请原因)，信息来源，对所申请工作、学校等的认识，自己的打算 (简单的个人介绍以及基本的申请条件)not only do i have the qualifications for this job，but i have the right personality for (申请的内容)on the one hand， (第一个原因)on the other (hand)， (另一个原因)should you give me an opportunity of a personal interview，i would be most grateful.if you need to know more about me，please feel free to contact me at any time at (电话号码)主体具备条件：着重介绍自己的背景(受教育情况、工作经历、兴趣爱好、特长等)；表达自己的愿望(希望得到面试机会等)thank you for considering my application，and i am looking forward to hearing from you.yours sincerely， (写信人)结尾表示谢意，期望得到回复假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英语给组委会写一封80词左右的申请信。内容应包括：1个人情况：年龄、性别、学历；2个人条件：英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人；3承诺：提供最佳服务。句式升级要点一：写信目的1i would like to work as a volunteer for the winter asian games.(用现在分词短语作定语改写) 要点二：具备条件及愿望2i get along with others easily and i am ready to give help whenever it is needed.(用形容词短语作状语改写) 3my promise is to offer the best service possible to the people at the games.(改为含有同位语从句的复合句) 要点三：期望得到回复4i would be grateful for your consideration of my request.(用含有appreciate的句型改写) 用恰当的过渡词和句式完成写作 .建议信建议信是对收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告。常用句式you have asked me for my advice with regard to.and i will try to make some useful suggestions.你来信询问我关于的意见，我会尽量提出一些有用的建议。i feel that it would be beneficial if.我认为如果，那将是有益的。i hope you will find these suggestions useful.我希望你会觉得这些建议有用。dear (收信人)， you have asked me for my advice with regard to (事由)，and i will try to make some suggestions here.开头简要陈述事由。如果写给某个组织或机构，要进行简单的自我介绍，注意语气要诚恳，有礼貌in my opinion，you would be wise to take the following actions.first，it is important to (第1条建议)as youll (第1条建议的理由)then，it also helps if you (第2条建议)because (第2条建议的理由)besides，it should be a good idea to (第3条建议)i m sure that (第3条建议的理由)主体提出建议并说明理由i hope you will find these proposals useful，and i would be ready to discuss this matter with you for further details.good luck with your (祝愿)yours sincerely， (写信人)结尾希望建议得到采纳假如你是张凯，你收到了你的朋友李华寄给你的一封信。他在英语学习中遇到了一些诸如如何写英语作文等方面的困难，由此他感觉丧失了学习英语的信心。同时，他有强烈的学好英语的愿望。请你给他写一封80词左右的回信，鼓励他不要灰心，并给他提出一些英语学习特别是英语写作方面的建议。句式升级要点一：鼓励朋友1many students find that writing well is difficult.(用it作形式宾语改写) 要点二：提出建议2many things cant be learnt immediately.(用there be句型和定语从句改写) 3study hard and you can improve your english writing.(改为含有条件状语从句的复合句) 用恰当的过渡词和句式完成写作 .邀请信邀请信分为普通邀请信和正式邀请信，为高考常考体裁。普通邀请信在内容和格式上要求比较随意；正式邀请信的措辞要正式，语气要热情有礼。常用句式it is my great honour to invite you to visit.很荣幸能邀请您来参观i hope you are not too busy to come.我希望您能在百忙之中光临。dear (收信人)， i will be holding (某项活动) (地点) (时间) in order to (目的或原因)as you are a close friend of our family，my parents and i would very much like you to join us in (某项活动) and share our joy.开头礼貌而友好地就某项活动对收信人发出邀请the occasion will start at (具体时间)，and activities include ， and (某项活动的具体内容)in addition，there will be (其他注意事项)i am sure you will have a good time.主体写明邀请对方参加活动的时间、地点、内容以及其他注意事项my family would feel pleased by your presence.yours lovely， (写信人)结尾期待对方接受邀请注意：邀请信一定要将邀请的时间、地点、活动内容写清楚，不能使收信人存在任何疑虑。假如你是李华，下个月校学生会要组织举办一场音乐会，想邀请来自美国的交流生harry参加。请你以校学生会成员的身份用英语给他写一封邀请信。内容包括：1音乐会的基本信息介绍；2邀请参加的理由；3需要注意的事项。注意：1.词数80左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。句式升级要点一：信息介绍1we are going to organize a music concert, including a music contest.(改为含有定语从句的复合句) 要点二：邀请理由2we all know you have a gift for music.(改为含有主语从句和表语从句的复合句) 要点三：期待对方接受邀请3if youd like to take part in this activity, please tell me，and id be grateful.(改为含有宾语从句的复合句) 用恰当的过渡词和句式完成写作 .感谢信感谢信是对收信人表示感谢的信件，通常用于在收到别人的邀请、受到别人的表扬或帮助时表达谢意。常用句式i wish to express my profound appreciation for.我对深表谢意。your help is very much appreciated by each one of us.我们每个人都非常感谢你的帮助。dear (收信人)，i am writing to express my sincere gratitude for (感谢的原因1)i would also like to thank you for your (感谢的原因2)开头表明写作意图，明确地对收信人提供的帮助或赠送的礼物等表示谢意during ，i (具体描述接受帮助的经历)if it had not been for your assistance in (对方给予的具体帮助)，i fear that i would have been (没有对方帮助的后果)主体详述接受帮助的具体事例，说明该帮助所起的作用；或表达对所收礼物等的喜爱、日后如何使用及收藏等everyone agrees that it was you who (给出细节)again，i would like to express my warm thanks to you！please accept my gratitude.yours lovely， (写信人)结尾再次表达诚挚的谢意假如你是李梅，请你根据下面要点提供的信息给你在美国参加暑期夏令营时认识的伙伴helen用英文写一封信，感谢她在你生病时的照顾。内容应包括：1你已顺利返回中国，病已经好了；2感谢helen在自己生病时给予照顾；3邀请她有机会来中国玩。注意：词数80左右。句式升级要点一：情况描述1i felt so terrible that i cried alone.(改为倒装句) 要点二：朋友的照顾2because you accompanied me, i began to smile.(用with复合结构改写) 要点三：感谢照顾3you helped me go through a hard time. (用强调句型强调主语) 用恰当的过渡词和句式完成写作 通知是一种应用文体，一般是上级对下级、组织对成员或平行单位之间部署工作、传达事情或召开会议等所使用的应用文。通知可分为书面通知和口头通知。写通知应该注意以下几点：1通知的内容要齐全。通知的对象、原因、时间、地点等一定要明确。2通知的时态要正确。因为通知是告知未来要做的事情，因此一般采用将来时态进行写作。3通知的语言要简练。通知的语言要尽量大众化，语言简洁明快，条理清晰。常用句式dont forget to be on time.请一定要准时。all teachers and students are required to.全部师生务必要there will be a party/speech/contest held by the english department in the hall of the library on saturday evening.本周六晚英语系在图书馆大厅将举行一场聚会/演讲/竞赛。we are glad to inform you that.很高兴地通知你们those who are interested in.are welcome.欢迎所有对有兴趣的人参加。口头通知ladies and gentlemen， may i have your attention，please？i havesomething important to tell you.in order to (目的)，a party 口头通知的日期可不必说明will be held on (时间)the party will be held (地点)those who are interested in (介绍参加人员) are welcome.dont forget (注意事项：时间、地点或其他特别事项)thank you for listening.使用的句子应符合口语习惯要有开头语，如：please be quiet，everyone书面通知布告通知书信通知notice (发起者) has decided to hold an activity.this is to (具体内容) (时间、地点)those who (参加人员) are welcome.remember that (提醒)i believe you will have a wonderful time.the students unionmarch 11th,2017dear students，the students union has decided to organize (活动)it will be held (时间、地点)the activities include (内容)please come to the great fun！ the students union1作为交换项目的一部分，学校将于本周五下午两点组织美国交换生到红星小学进行志愿者活动。假设你是校学生会主席，请向他们口头通知此事，内容包括：1集合时间、地点；2活动内容(介绍美国文化、教英文歌等)；3活动意义。注意：1.词数80左右；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。may i have your attention, please? thats all, thank you.句式升级要点一：时间地点介绍1as a very important part of the exchange program, this friday you will visit hong xing primary school as volunteers.(改为非限制性定语从句)this friday you will visit hong xing primary school as volunteers， .要点二：活动目的2this trip aims to give the kids there a taste of american culture，which is of great benefit.(用过去分词短语作状语改写) 要点三：活动意义3through sharing your culture with them, you will know more about this country in return. (改为only开头的倒装句) 用恰当的过渡词和句式完成写作may i have your attention，please? thats all.thank you.2假定你是学生会主席，请根据下面的信息，用英语写一则关于春游的通知，通知时间为4月20日。参加者高二年级的学生活动内容1.去博物馆看人与自然的展览；2.参观杭州植物园。集合地点学校大门前。集合时间1.4月22日上午乘校车前往；2.早上七点集合，七点二十分开车。注意事项1.参观展览时保持安静，并认真记笔记；2.中午野餐，要自带午餐和饮料。注意：1.通知必须包括以上信息内容，可以适当调整内容的顺序和增加细节，使其连贯、完整；2词数80左右。参考词汇：植物园the botanical garden；学生会the stu