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精编短文改错 （附答案）1It was raining. In his way home from school .Peter saw an old man walking with difficult in the rain without a umbrella. Peter went up to him and offered share the umbrella with him. The old man in poor health, so Peter tried to hold the umbrella. But he is too short to hold it high enough. While wondered what to do, he saw the old mans stick and had an idea. He had tied the stick to the handle of the umbrella and made them longer. Now we shared the umbrella. Peter was very happy. 2Dear Editor ,I live in Shenyang City . Near my home there is the famous temple , which was built in the late Ming Dynasty . On the walls of the temple is many pictures , which show us how people at that time live. The temple is of greatly value . I am worried about it because some of the pictures are damaged by air pollution , which comes from human beings .Hundred of tourists visit the temple every day . The carbon dioxide from their breath is destroyed the pictures . I think one way to solve the problem is to put glass walls in front of the pictures . Second , a number of visitors should be limited . And we should build a website where people can look the pictures and the temple there. Yours sincerely ,Dali 3It is four days since Mother accepted the operation. She is feeling much more better. The doctors told me the operation was successful, but because her old age . she had to stay in hospital for other two weeks. The doctors also say it was quite necessary for her to do so. We expect to get a full report in two and three days. Please tell the good news to the rest of family as soon as possible. You neednt to come here. Im able to look after Mother of myself. Youd better send flowers to Mother. She will feel happily. 4Before I went to senior middle school, some peoples told me. “A life of senior middle school is unforgettable.” While I first entered my senior middle school, everything seemed unpleasant. Face all the strange things around me, I often miss my old friends and classmates. I didnt want to talk to others or make friend with others. Little by little, my school records went from bad to worse, especial my maths. I couldnt even pass the exam. I lost the heart and missed the happy times all day long. I told me, “I dont belong it. I dont like the life here.” 5While traveled to Paris on a bus, I became very sick. A well-dressing man on the bus helped me greatly. He took me off the bus, found out where the doctors office,and took me to there himself. The next day, he came to visit me. I didnt speak French well, so I cant talk with him very much. However, even if we couldnt talk, but we could communicate. I communicated myself thanks for her great kindness, and he communicated his concern for my healthy. Through this experience I have learned that communication can take place without much actually language at all. 6 The Internet is playing a important part in our daily life. On the net, They can learn about news both home and abroad and some other informations as wellWe can also make phone calls，send messages by e-mails，go to net schools，and learn foreign languages by ourselvesBeside，we can enjoy music，watch sports matches，and play the chess or cardsThe net even help us do shopping，have a chat with others and make friend with themIn a word，the Internet has made our life more easier 7A few months after returning to US from Germany, I took part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be interested to begin studying another language. At the first class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise ,in that he would say a word or two with French, and each student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him why. “I find it great funs. Its the first time Ive heard aAmerican speak French with a German accent.”he explained it. 8During the weekend I traveled by air the first time in my life. I generally travel by train and bus. It is both cheaper and safe. But this was a short journey. In the beginning I did not feel very happily, but this feeling did not last longer. The journey was very exciting. I was soon highly up in the sky among the clouds The views of mountains, fields and rivers were interested. I enjoy my short and comfortable journey very much. This experience has shown that traveling in air is actually the safest way of make journeys. 1答案1. 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