陕西省潼关县高考英语二轮复习 书面表达选析（4）.doc

陕西潼关县2016高考英语【二轮】书面表达选析（4）2016书面表达选练假设你是新华中学的高三学生李华，你校打算邀请阿里巴巴首席执行官马云来学校做一次毕业典礼演讲，请你给马首席写一封邀请信。内容包括：1.说明写信的目的；2.说明演讲的具体安排-时间：5月30日；地点：学校操场; 主题：怎样通过个人奋斗实现人生理想；3.表达感谢与祝福。注意：1.词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.参考词汇：毕业典礼演讲 commencement speechdear mayun, ceo of ali baba, my name is li hua. im a senior 3 student from xinhua middle school.【参考范文】dear mayun, ceo of ali baba, my name is li hua. im a senior 3 student from xinhua middle school. i am writing to ask you a favor. would you please come to our school and give us a commencement speech? the speech is scheduled to be given on may 30th on the school playground ,the theme of which will be how to realize our dreams through personal efforts. we are eager to hear you talk about your own experiences and unique views. i sincerely hope you can take time out of your busy schedule, and i would appreciate it very much if you could come. thank you in advance and wish you all the best! i am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. sincerely yours, li hua2016书面表达选练某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中任何一个数据中反映的情况写出你的一个看法。词数100词左右。生词：图表：chart课余活动：after-class activities【参考范文】 【广东省揭阳市2014模拟】读写任务 (共1小题，满分25分)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。one day, while she was walking in the woods, a girl found two starving songbirds. she took them home and put them in a small cage. she cared them with love and the birds grew strong. every morning they greeted her with a wonderful song. the girl felt great love for the birds.one day the girl left the door to the cage open. the larger and stronger of the two birds flew from the cage. the girl was so frightened that he would fly away. as he flew close, she grasped him wildly. her heart felt glad at her success in capturing him. suddenly she felt the bird go limp. she opened her hand and stared in horror at the dead bird. her desperate love had killed him.she noticed the other bird moving back and forth on the edge of the cage. she could feel his great need for freedom. he needed to soar into the clear, blue sky. she lifted him from the cage and tossed him softly into the air. the bird circled once, twice, three times.the girl watched delightedly at the birds enjoyment. her heart was no longer concerned with her loss. she wanted the bird to be happy. suddenly the bird flew closer and landed softly on her shoulder. it sang the sweetest melody that she had ever heard.she finally realized that the fastest way to lose love is to hold on it too tight, the best way to keep love is to give it wings!写作内容1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点；2. 然后以约120个词就 “爱就要放手” 这一主题发表看法，并包括如下要点：a) 以自己为例，简述生活中你父母对你的过度关注；b) 你父母的做法对你造成了什么不良的影响；c) 如果有机会，你会就此问题对父母说些什么写作要求1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考答案】 【解析】试题分析：本文属于读写任务写作，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容，要求有很高的概括提炼的能力，要抓住文章的主题，再以约120个词写一篇短文，按照要点去表达，不能有遗漏，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。【亮点说明】文章简洁的总结了所给材料，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯，使用了词组：whats worse更糟糕的是, due to 由于，因为，to be honest说实话, let go of 放手，句式上也是富有变化：a girl realized the best way to keep love is to let a bird fly when she accidentally killed a bird which tried to escape and freed the other which flew happily.这句话用了定语从句和不定式做表语， for example, they wont allow me to chat with my american friend online or allow me to go shopping by myself for fear i might be cheated though i am already 18 years old. 这句话用了目的状语从句，give me some advice just when necessary, and for most of the time, let me think for myself. 这句话用了省略句， 考点：考查读写任务类书面表达【山东省潍坊市2014高考英语3月模拟试题】写作(满分30分)假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你周末滑冰时不慎将胳膊摔折，因而未能参加英语考试。请根据以下要点给你的外籍教师mrsclemens写一封电子邮件：1表达歉意并解释缺考原因；2询问补考时间及课外作业(如阅读书目、作业要求等)。注意：1词数：l20150；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。dear mrsclemens，【山东省烟台市2014高考英语3月模拟试题】写作(30分) 假如你是高三学生李华，今年高考英语学科阅读量加大，而你的阅读能力较差，因此学习压力越来越大。请根据以下提示写信向你的前外教mrjohnson求助： 1英语学习的困难以及增加阅读量给自己带来的困扰； 2希望得到他的指导和帮助。注意：1词数：l20l50，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。dear mrjohnson，yours，li hua【参考范文】写作（one possible version）dear mr. johnson,how are things going with you? im writing to ask for your help. as you know, im weak in english reading comprehension. although i have tried every means to improve it, like expanding my vocabulary and doing a large number of exercises, so far all my efforts have ended up in failure, which really makes me discouraged. to make things worse, this year reading will make up a higher percentage than ever before in the coming college entrance examination. now with the important exam drawing near, i feel more and more stressed and worried. if i didnt take effective measures, i wouldnt be able t