高中英语 写作园地4 音乐话题电子邮件写作 外研版选修6.doc

写作园地音乐话题电子邮件写作感悟范文假若你是迈克(mike)，特别喜欢欣赏音乐，喜欢唱歌，你对音乐有着自己独特的看法。下面请你给你新认识的好朋友约翰(john)写封电子邮件，谈论一下音乐。词数要求：120150。范文dear john，what is your favorite music? do you like jazz, popular music, classical music, folk songs, blues, and so on?music is sometimes called a universal language. a composer who cannot speak a single word of our language can make us feel joy, pride, despair and peace through his music.music also contributes to a joyful mind. of all the things that make me happy, singing is what i like to do best. i sing for no particular reason and there is no limit to what i sing, so long as it can let out my emotion and pass the pleasant voice to others. it is something more satisfactory and exciting to draw echoes from them. singing helps me overcome the difficulties rationally and gives me a more beautiful life and courage to live.i would appreciate it very much if you could tell me something about you!yours，mike技法讨论本模块的写作任务是通过电子邮件来介绍音乐。电子邮件是书信的一种格式，介绍音乐属于说明文范畴。在历年的高考英语作文试题中，书信题材占有重要的位置，同学们应该重视。书信包括回信、回帖、电子邮件、自荐信、申请信、留言条等。对电子邮件的写作方法，我们在前几册中多有涉及，此处不再赘述。介绍音乐属于说明文。说明文在高考中出题的几率比较多。写说明文时应注意：1时态应相对统一。由于说明文往往是对客观事物或事理的一种介绍与解释，而这种客观的介绍与解释一般是不随时间和空间变化而改变的，比如：说明早晨锻炼的好处，解释臭氧层对人类生活的影响等等，是不受时间和空间影响的。因此，尽管有时为了特殊表达的要求，会在个别地方采用其他时态，英语说明文的基本时态还是一般现在时。2多用主动语态和陈述句式。3采用客观表述，避免主观色彩。在很多情况下，说明文是对客观存在的说明与介绍，因此语言的表述也应该尽可能地给人以客观可信的感觉。黄金表达1. 回复邮件开头常用句式：i am very glad to receive your letter.how happy i am when i know.thanks for your letter, its my pleasure to do.2. 结尾常用句式：i look forward to hearing from you.i would also like to know if you can/could.i would be grateful if you could/would.i will appreciate it if you can.亮点分析：亮点一：句用两个问句引出话题，亲切，自然；and so on是省略列举事情的典型用法。亮点二：句中用了定语从句和make sb. do sth.结构，使得句式富有变化，彰显了作者的英语功底。亮点三：句中的短语contribute to, for no particular reason, so long as等的运用使句子增色不少。亮点四：句中分别使用了what引导的名词性从句、there is no limited to和it is.to do等高级句型结构，很值得我们学习借鉴。亮点五：句句式运用非常得体，是书信结尾提出要求的典型句式。类文演练假设你是李华，你在杂志panorama上读到以下广告：读后你想要加入这一组织。请你写一封信给greenplanet, 了解以下细节：meetings多久举行一次，地点talks专家还是会员主讲new settlers是否额外收费membership fee学生是否优惠注意：词数：100左右联想词汇1. _ 首先答案：to begin with2. be _ 对感兴趣答案：interested in3. _ 此外答案：in addition4. _ charge 额外收费答案：extra5. _ 盼望答案：look forward to连词成句1. i _ if you could _ about your organization.你如能给我提供更多的信息我将非常感激。答案：would appreciate it; give me more information2. id like to know _ the meetings are held and _ they take place.我想知道会议多久举行一次，在哪儿开。答案：how often; where3. i _ at your earliest convenience.盼望尽早在最方便的时候收到你的来信。答案：look forward to hearing from you连句成章_答案：dear sir/madam, i am writing to you with regard to your advertisement published in the magazine “panorama”. i am interested in environmental protection and i am considering joining greenplanet. i would appreciate it if you could give me some more information about your organization.to begin with, i would like to know how often the meetings are held and where they take place. i would also be interested in knowing whether the talks are given by experts in the field or by members of your association. in addition, i would be grateful if you could inform me whether there is any extra charge for the new settlers. fina