2019_2020学年新教材高中英语Unit3FamilymattersPartⅤWriting——道歉信教案外研版.docx

Part Writing道歉信道歉信是因为自己的过失或者疏忽，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后为了给对方赔礼道歉而写的信件。道歉信应该反映出自己具体的过失或疏忽，道歉的语言应该简练诚恳，并且希望收信人能够原谅自己。通常包括以下三部分内容：1.开门见山，表明写信目的，表示歉意；2.说明出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施；3.再次致歉，请求原谅，希望得到理解(语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实)。【增分佳句】1.表示歉意(1)Im very sorry for not being able to visit Beijing with you next weekend.Im writing to apologize to you for it.(2)The reasons why I cant go with you are as follows.2.解释原因，提出补救办法(1)Just now I received a call from my cousin, who went to Australia for further study last year.(2)He told me that he would be back to China at 8 am on Saturday, and he hoped I could pick him up at the airport with his family.(3)We havent seen each other for a year, so I think I am supposed to meet him.(4)I make an apology to you for any inconvenience caused, and I hope you can understand my situation.(5)Lets make it another time.How about May Day?3.再次致歉，希望得到理解I would appreciate it if you could accept my apology.Looking forward to your early reply.假定你是李华，你把Frank借给你的书弄丢了。这本书你一直在看，本打算下周交还的。昨天晚上回房间找不到了。你将尽力去找，找不到的话，买本新的交还。请你对此表示歉意，毕竟新书代替不了旧书，因为它就像是老朋友，有好多珍贵的回忆。这对自己的粗心也是一次教训。词数100左右。Dear Frank, Yours truly，Li Hua第一步：布局谋篇很关键审题1.确定体裁：本文是一封道歉信，属于应用文；2.确定时态：主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时；3.确定人称：本文主要人称为第一、三人称。构思1.表明写信目的，因为丢书表示歉意；2.解释丢书的原因，并提出解决方案；3.再次道歉并反省自己的过失，恳求对方原谅。第二步：核心词汇想周全1.valuable/precious/of_great_value宝贵的；珍贵的2.recover/make_up_for 重新获得3.once conj. 一旦4.replace/displace/take_the_place_of 代替；取代5.memory/recall/remember 回忆；记忆6.intend_to_do/mean_to_do 打算做7.fail_to_do 没能够做成8.be_connected_with/relate_to 与有关联第三步：由词扩句雏形现1.非常抱歉地告诉你，我把上周你借给我的宝贵的书弄丢了。(宾语从句；定语从句)I am terribly sorry to tell you that I_have_lost_the_valuable_book_you_lent_me_last_week.2.一旦丢失，它们就无法取代。Once_they_are_lost,_they can never be_replaced.3.我应该对这一不能挽回的损失负责。(be to blame)And for this irrecoverable loss, I_am_to_blame.4.如果我更加谨慎，它就不会丢失。(if虚拟条件句)If I_had_been_more_careful,_it would_not_have_been_lost.第四步：句式升级造亮点1.用状语从句的省略改写句2Once_lost,_they can never be replaced.2.用倒装句改写句4Had_I_been_more_careful,_it_would_not_have_been_lost.第五步：过渡衔接连成篇Dear Frank，I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the valuable book you were so kind to lend me last week.I read it every day and intended to finish it next week.Last night when I came to my room, it was nowhere to be found.I will try to recover it as soon as possible.If I fail to find it, I will get a new book for you.But I am afraid it can never take the place of the old one.Old books are like old friends.Once lost, they can never be replaced.They are connected with precious memories which the new ones can never have.And for this irrecoverable loss, I am to blameif I had been more carefu