河南省信阳市第四高级中学高考英语 专题训练 短文改错、书面表达（10）.doc

河南省信阳市第四高级中学2014届高考英语专题训练： 短文改错、书面表达（10）(201*郑州质检)we all know that healthy is very important to us. both1._study and work depend by strong bodies. doing sports2._and games helps us keep strong and healthy. if we do not3._take any exercise, we may feel tired but get sick easily.4._theres many different kinds of sports we can do them，5._such as playing ball games, running, walking and swim.6._however, now we have too much homework to do in7._every day. we hope that well be giving less homework8._and have more time take part in sports. we also hope9._that our school can hold a sports meeting every term. 10._答案与解析：1healthyhealth这里是句子的主语，因此用名词形式。2byon/upondepend on/upon是固定搭配。3helphelps这句话的主语是动名词短语doing sports and games。动名词短语作主语表示一件事时，谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。4butandfeel tired和get sick是并列关系，不表示转折，因此将but改为and。5去掉them这是一个定语从句，从句中作动词do的宾语的关系代词that(或which)被省略了，因此them是多余的。6swimswimming应用动名词与前面的running，walking并列，故应用swimming。7去掉inevery day可以单独作状语，前面不需要加介词。8givinggiven这里是被动语态，因此用过去分词。9take前加to此处考查的是have time to do sth.的结构。10*结束高考英语书面表达讲义：要点作文 (2)(25 min.)写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法；2. 陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)；3. 提出至少两条建议。写作要求：1. 短文字数不少于120(不含已写好的部分)；2. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；3. 书写须清晰、工整。_【参考范文】one possible version：hi, wolfdad, what puzzles you is actually a puzzle for parents in china. my idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, health and life attitude should never be ignored. there are many examples around us. some alla students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. the reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.so i suggest that you take your friends advice. more importantly, let him live like a lovely boy; let him have more friends and social activities; and let him make mistakes of his own as we teenagers often do.yours, li hua*结束【重庆南开中学】第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) 请对标有题号的每一行作出判断，每行只有一个错误，按下列情况改正： 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 if you park your car in a wrong place, traffic 76. policeman will soon find it. you will be very unlucky 77. if he lets me go without a ticket. but this does not 78. always happen. traffic police is sometimes very 79. polite. during a holiday in sweden, i find this 80. note in my car, sir, we welcome you to our city. 81. this is a no parking area. you will enjoy you your 82. stay here whether you pay attention to our street signs. 83. this note is simple a reminder. if you receive a 84. request like this, you can fail to obey it! 85. 改错76traffic前加a 77unlucky-lucky 78meyou 79is-are 80find-found 81inon 82去掉you 83whether-if 84simplesimply 85can-cant/can后加not或never*结束表格提示类2. 去年，上海复旦大学开始通过面试自主招收学生，今年又有一些学校加入到这一行列。这一新的招生方式在学生中引发了一场讨论。假如你是李华，请根据下表提供的内容给二十一世纪报编辑写一封信反映讨论情况。60% 的学生赞成40%的学生反对1面试可以全面综合地评价一个学生；2.鼓励学生发展个性和特长；3社会需要一种更加开放和有效的录取方式。1.面试带有主观性、片面性，可能不公正；2.并非所有学生都擅于在面试中展示自己；3.不可能在3-5分钟内评价一个人。注意：1.开头已为你写好，不计人总词数。 2.词数：100左右3.参考词汇：comprehensive综合的，subjective主观的，one-sided片面的，evaluate 评价dear editor,recently, a discussion has been held in our school on whether it is reasonable for the universities to admit students through interviews. the results are as follows:60% of the students support this action. they express that interviews can evaluate a student in a more thorough and comprehensive way. it can encourage students to develop their own interests and personalities. whats more, with the development of society, a more open and efficient way to test a students abilities is needed.on the other hand, the other 40% students are against this idea. they argue that first, interviews may be subjective and one-sided, which could lead to unfairness. second, not all students are good at showing their talents in interviews. last but not least, a student cant be judged in only three or five minutes.*结束（广东卷）写作(共两节，满分40分)第一节：基础写作以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道基本信息：书名：battle hymn of the tiger mother作者：amy chua，美籍华人，耶鲁*大学教授出版时间：2010年内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论相关报道：中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛*和耶鲁录取*耶鲁：yale 哈佛：harvard写作内容根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括：1.图书的基本信息2.图书的相关报道写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯2011年广东省高考英语基础写作是一篇说明文，让考生对battle hymn of the tiger mother这本书进行介绍。今年的基础写作题材较新，有些考生可能不知道虎妈教育孩子的事情，但不影响本文写作，考生只把它当作一本图书介绍即可。试题详细地给出了内容要点，为控制性写作。在文章结构方面，一定要紧扣考题已给出的写作提示：1.图书的基本信息；2.图书的相关报道。要写好此文，考生需要注意四点：一、要认真审题，确定体裁、人称和时态等；二、要运用适当的句型，合理地组织文字；三、切忌照译，要适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。四、在句型方面，为了用五个句子表达全部内容，复合句的使用依然是考查的重点。*结束高考英语作文（经典好句）（二）中间段落句1. 相反，有一些人赞成，他们相信，而且，他们认为。 on the contrary，there are some people in favor of _.at the same time，they say_.2. 但是，我认为这不是解决的好方法，比如。最糟糕的是。but i dont think it is a very good way to solve _.for example，_.worst of all，_.3对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，。而且，最重要的是 _is necessary and important to our countries development and construction. first，_.whats more, _.most important of all,_.4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以。 there are several measures for us to adopt. first, we can_5. 面临，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来。一方面，另一方面，confronted with_，we should take a series of effective measures to_. for one thing，_for another，_6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说，另外。所有这些方法肯定会。 it is high time that something was done about it. for example, _.in addition, _.all these measures will certainly_.7. 为什么？第一个原因是；第二个原因是；第三个原因是。总的来说，的主要原因是由于 why_? the first reason is that _.the second reason is _.the third is _.for all this, the main cause of _due to _.8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，也有它的不利的一面，象。 however, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, _also has its own disadvantages, such as _.9. 尽管如此，我相信更有利。nonetheless, i believe that _is more advantageous.10. 完全同意这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下：i fully agree with the statement that _ because_.*结束 passage *mary was an university student. she didnt have much1 _ money and her parents were not rich, and she had an uncle2. _ who had been fortunately enough to collect great wealth. 3. _ he always give her valuable christmas and birthday presents.4. _ when her uncles birthday came round, mary wanted buy him5. _ something really special, but because she was rich, she did not6. _ know how to get him. she went into the best shop in her7. _ town and explained what her problem was to one of helpful 8. _ shop assistants. finally she asked, “what do you have for9. _ someone who has already got everything he wants or needs.10 the assistant sighed deeply and answered, “envy, only envy.”【参考答案】key 13 1. ana 2 andbut 3 fortunatelyfortunate 4 givegave 2. 5to buy 6.shehe 7how-what8the helpful.3. 9 assistant - assistants 10 right *结束*结束 20万元会使中国令世人瞩目，中国运动员创造了新的奥运会金牌纪录。获金牌的运动员除了得到政府奖金20万元以外，还会从地方得到更多的奖励。对此，社会各界反响不一。赞成不赞成1. 运动员为国争了光2. 运动员付出了许多辛苦和汗水3. 奖金有利于中国体育后备力量的培养1 运动员是国家培养出来的，为国争光理所当然2 得到大量奖金后，有些队员不会退役3 一些企业趁机炒作，从中获取广告效应 请你就此现象进行简单阐述，并提出自己的一些看法或建议。(120词左右)提示词汇：奖金bonus *结束作文pasasage14as the world enters the 21st century, the development in the 1 _science and technology will bring us much more new hopes and 2_chance weve never imagined before.people are hoping have 3_a peacefully and highly developed world.to catch up with 4_the new development and to be success in the new century the 5_younger generat