河南省信阳市第四高级中学高考英语 专题训练 短文改错、书面表达（17）.doc

河南省信阳市第四高级中学2014届高考英语专题训练： 短文改错、书面表达（17）(201*重庆调研)today is sunday. we had not lessons. after breakfast1._i wanted to do with my homework when li lei rang me.2._he asked me to go to the cinema with he. i agreed, but3._i have to finish my homework first. about an hour later，4._we went out. in the way we saw kate; she was mending5._her bike. she looked very worry.“let us help you.” li lei6._and i all said. “all right.” and we stopped to help her.7._there was nothing much wrong with the bike, so it cost8._us only several minutes time to finish it. kate was very 9._thankful. when we hurried to the cinema, the film had10._been on for ten minutes. but we felt happy.答案与解析：1notno“没有课”应是have no lessons或dont have any lessons。2去掉withdo是及物动词，直接跟名词作宾语。3hehim介词后跟代词时要用宾格。4havehad本文是叙述过去发生的事情。9去掉time有具体的时间名词minutes，无须再用time。10*结束假如你是张宏，刚从美国回来。请你根据下表信息，给你的好友王梅讲述一下你的美国之行。时间所见所闻第一天纽约：看到了许多摩天大厦，但已经看不到世贸大厦第二、第三天洛杉矶（los angeles）：参观了好莱坞，游览了迪斯尼乐园最后一天内华达（nevada）：参观了里诺（reno），游览了风景优美的太浩湖（lake tahoe）感受及其他注意：1词数：120左右；2开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；3可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。dear wang mei，i have just come back from a trip to the united states.i had a very good time there._i hope you will take a trip to the united states some day.best wishes!yours，zhang hong参考范文：dear_wang_mei，i_have_just_come_back_from_a_trip_to_the_united_states.i_had_a_very_good_time_there.on the first day，i went to new york.it is really a very big city.i saw quite many skyscrapers there，but the twin towers of the world trade center are no longer to be seen.the following two days，i went to los angeles，where i visited hollywood on the day i got there.i spent a whole day in disneyland.it is such a wonderful place that i will remember it forever.on the last day i went to reno，nevada.there is a beautiful lake named tahoe.the scenery there is very attractive.i_hope_you_will_take_a_trip_to_the_united_states_some_day.best_wishes!yours，zhang_hong*结束短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误，对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划一个（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误）；则按下列情况改正：此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。this is a story told by my father: “when i was boy, 66. the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the spring 67. festivalmy grandma was the best cooker in the world 68. but could make the most delicious dishesone time, i just 69. couldnt wait for the spring festival dinneras i was70. about take a piece from a cooked duck, i saw grandma in 71. the kitchen looking at meshake her head, she said, it 72. isnt a good time to do that, dear at once i apologize73. and controlled me at my best till the dinner startedyou 74. know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month 75. 参考答案、66.boy前加a 67.去掉when 68.cooker改为cook 69.but改为and 70. 71.about后加to 72.shake改为shaking 73.apologize改为apologized 74.me改为myself 75.month改为months*结束第6套第一节 短文改错（10分）错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改增加：在缺词出加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用（）划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改侯的词。注意：只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。者据改错参考答案givinggiven 去掉out her-herself they-we said-say turns-turntoo-so kind-kindly do后加it that-what*结束高考英语作文精选范文（看图作文类）i. 看图作文类 1. 今年寒假，你参加了社会实践活动，去某旅行社当业余导游。请根据该旅行社提供的数据和你的所见所闻，用英语写一篇短文，作为寒假作业交给你的英语老师。要求：1. 简析表格，说明产生这种现象的原因；2. 结合漫画，谈谈境外旅游出现的问题；3. 针对所出现的问题阐述你自己的看法（至少两点）；4. 词数120左右；5. 参考词汇：吐痰 spit v. when peoples life is getting better and better, more and more people choose to spend their holidays abroad. the year 2006 sees a sharp increase in the number of overseas travelers compared with the year 2001, when the number was already much larger than that of the year 1996. its a good thing that chinese tourism is developing very fast. however, reports about peoples bad manners flood in. some are even asked if all chinese spit and litter everywhere. the poor behavior has done great harm to the image of china, which is really shameful.china has long been regarded as a country with good manners. everybody should keep some dos and donts in their mind to guide their behavior in public, home and abroad. win respect for yourself and our country!*结束高考英语作文（经典好句）（一）段首句1. 关于人们有不同的观点。一些人认为there are different opinions among people as to _ .some people suggest that _.2. 俗话说（常言道），它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。 there is an old saying_. its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today. 3. 现在，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，；其次，。更为糟糕的是。today, _, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. first, _ second, _. what makes things worse is that_.4. 现在，很普遍，许多人喜欢，因为，另外（而且）。nowadays，it is common to _. many people like _ because _. besides，_. 5. 任何事物都是有两面性，也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。everything has two sides and _ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages. 6. 关于人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说），在他们看来， peoples opinions about _ vary from person to person. some people say that _.to them, _. 7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题，这个问题变得越来越严重。man is now facing a big problem _ which is becoming more and more serious. 8已成为人们关注的热门话题，特别是在年轻人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。_ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way. 9在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。 _ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出。很显然，但是为什么呢？ according to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that_ while. obviously，_，but why? *结束passage *dear doctor,my name is wang lin. im a middle school student.i havea problem and im writing to ask you for some advices. 1._im just 1.57 meters high, and my weight is 71 kilos.many 2._students often make fun me.some boys are unfriendly to me. 3._they called me “ meat ball”. that makes me feel unhappy. 4._im now worry about my weight. though i am a bit too fat, i 5._feel rather good. i enjoy my meals. i love eating meat very 6._much. and i like sweet food, either. i often have sugar with 7._tea, milk, porridge, and even hot water. in the past two months 8._i have put off 5 kilos. im worried about this problem, 9._but i dont know what to lose weight quickly. please help me, 10_dear doctor!i hope to hear from you as soon as possible.with best wishes, wang lin五、多背范文，重视表达或体会其中的表达方式。 高中学生尤其是高三学生如果没有充分的时间练习写作，多读多背一些英语范文，也是有帮助的。让学生熟读、熟背好文章、好句子、好段落、谚语、俗语，可以使他们熟悉英文的习惯用法、英美人的思维方式，使自己写出说出的英语地道、准确。 通过训练，学生有了一定的知识储备并形成了初步的应付较单纯书面表达的能力，但写作的应试技巧也是十分重要的。在平时的书面表达专项训练中可采取以下步骤： 1. 审题定位。定格式、人称及时态。仔细阅读要求，认真审题，明确情景含义，弄清文体和写作格式，确定人称、时态。 2. 确定内容要点。列出要表达的每一个信息。（一般为6-8个要点），并理顺要点，分清主次，写出重点词组。 3. 草稿。根据词、句、段、篇的要素顺序打出草稿。注意语言的规范性；多用常用词，不用生僻词；多用简单句，少用或精用复合句；尽量用学过的词组、句子；多用学过的规范、现成的句子，避免汉式英语；巧用关联词，过渡要自然，结构要合理。 4. 认真修改润色、誊写。文章写好后要进行认真复查和修改，注意：要点的完整；动词的时态、语态；主谓的一致；语句的通顺；段落的衔接、